Never the one to look for love Serenity was all about her club Pink Mimosa and money. Who knew one day that she would fall in love with one of the most ruthless niggas to grace the streets of Chicago, Quadir Richardson. Qua was never the one to look for women, It was always fuck bitches, get money until the day he walked in the club and Serenity graced the stage. She was beautiful the way she moved her body to the music. From that moment on he knew she was going to be his. Quin was all about his money and don’t forget his twin, Quadir. They were them niggas to see about that product that flooded the streets. They had Chicago inherited from their father on lock. When he first laid eyes on Trinity, he wanted her bad but her smart mouth is what drew him to her. Never the one back down she constantly challenged him and that’s when he knew he met his match. Who knew that the baddest best friends that walked the streets of Chicago would both fall in love with the twins with the most power.
This is my first book by this author... I came across it in one of my book groups... So I decided to give it a try... This turned out to be a really hard read for me... There was so many things wrong with this... First off it kept switching from 1st person to 3rd person all in the same paragraph... It kept repeating things like with the twins calling eachother ugly and saying man you look just like me... There was a constant mix up of names... I felt so lost through this whole book because in one paragraph Quadir, Serenity, Trinity and Quincy all just met... Then in the next paragraph there are in a full blown relationship... I am like wait a minute... How did that happen... As far as I knew Trinity and Quincy did not even exchange numbers... I was so lost and I felt like I was missing so much information... This book just jumped all over the place... I felt like it was not structured... It read like there was no editing done and I had to try to figure things out as I was reading and half the time I just gave up and moved on... This book felt like it was just thrown together...It became a very frustrating read... Also this book had so much music and used so much of the lyrics... Instead of just saying the name of the song and who the song was by with a couple of lines... It was like almost the whole song was written out each time... It was hard to finish reading this book... But I really wanted to give it the benefit of the doubt and hope that it got better... I can say that the storyline has a lot of potential... I just feel like it needs a lot of work to get it to it's full potential... I know there is a part 2 and I want to know how everything all played out but not sure that I could read it... I think that this storyline does have potential to be a really good read... I would like to see where this author can eventually grow and build from here...
The story of the Richardson twins, Trinity and Serenity good. I really enjoyed it but there were so many grammatical errors it became distracting! A lot of editing is needed! I really hope Trinity is ok. Will have to read the sequel! Please get the next one proof read!
Okay, this was a novel about strippers and hustlers. My biggest issue with this book was the editing. There is NONE! Names are mixed up, it goes between 1st and 3rd person frequently, sometimes within the same paragraph. I manage to follow along, but I can't say that I have a favorite character because they didn't leave an impression on me. I think this book should be rewritten because it has potential, but I won't be reading pt. 2.
I enjoyed the book throughly. The story line keeps you interested. It’s just enough drama, action, and romance. I didn’t like not ever finding out what Trinity’s secret is and there also was a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. But the book was so good that I kept reading anyway. Can’t wait for Book 2.
This book was too good I love serenity and trinity friendship and the brothers relationship..dang I thought tyrese was dead where he come from I hope trin make it cause her man going to cause hell if she dont cant wait to read part two ...loved it
Let me be the first to say Tiffany you always bring but Ms scales you have a new fan when you drop your book them twins is something else and them best friend yes I love their goals part 2 me plz ladies
Tyrese you better get ghost and never surface. You done messed up once again. First it was Quin, now it’s Trin. Those Richardson boys are going to make you wish you were never born. I thought you were....... What happened? I’m anxiously awaiting the release of part 2.
The the laughter, love and pain was felt reading this book.The couples seemed to be pretty matched up ,BOSSES. The ending tore me up ....😪 book two where are you!