How She Knows What She Knows About Yo-Yos is the first I've read of Mary Ann Taylor Hall's short fiction. I have to say that she's pretty good. had believable characters with all of the human idiosyncrasies well thought. Her story settings are nicely conceived, beautifully descriptive & her writing has an easy and enjoyable flow. Just right for short stories, temporary get-aways. I was impressed in her diversity & will likely consider reading her work again.
I'd have given this 5 stars however the last story felt dragged out, ultimately failed to go anywhere & needed an edit. Reminded me of a student who had forgotten to complete an assignment of a pre-determined amount of pages. This read more like a screen play with exaggerated descriptions, placements. settings, was only missing the cult status of Lynch or Fellini wanna-be. It could possibly have worked as a movie short. Experimentation is great, this last one of the five was disappointing. A good edit may have rescued it.
All of these stories are in Taylor-Hall's unique voice, and therefore worth reading. The last story, about a young ex-pat couple in rural England, is exquisite.