You speak, I see; images before lost. You speak, I listen; opening closed souls. You speak, I feel; longing to love. In Your Eyes is a story about love and how love can overcome any impairment, whether it be physical or emotional.
This isn't a bad story by all means. In fact it is a good insight into the world of a visually impaired person. And its storyline did have potential.
Unfortunately I feel it feels a little dry and dusted. No offense but I think if the author would update this story a little and bring it with its technology into this decade (it has been written in the early 1990's) ... the contemporary reader (like me) would feel more at home with the characters.
AND a few pinches here and there would take out the dry and it could really be quite juicy and fresh .....
The characters are lacking in depth, there's no description of *anything* - not even by the sighted people, and the author made the hero an absolute brat. I hated him. People in a bar use words like 'peruse' (?!?!), while the author forgets quotation marks and punctuation all thru the text. I just didn't care for the writing, the characters, the pissiness between everyone in the book, and couldn't see the point of continuing.