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Fire and Ice: A Short Story
Theona is attracted to dominant men. She likes when a man knows what he wants and takes it. Will wants Theona and will do what is necessary to have her. But is it love, or manipulation?
Excerpt:
She had nearly forgotten her aggravation with Will Wilson when she found him leaning against her car holding another bouquet of Fire and Ice roses. She paused long enough to register lingering attraction, then turned around to lock up the store.
Facing him again, she couldn’t seem to summon the anger she once had. “I should be mad at you,” she began. “When did you get back in town?”
He looked at her appraisingly. “Should be... does that mean you’re not?”
Theona walked toward him. “I was. Quite a bit actually. You over stepped, Will.” She tried to ignore the sculpted muscle visible in the open neck of his button down.
“I brought you a peace offering,” he said, holding out the flowers.
“Why do you choose these?” she couldn’t help asking as she accepted them. “There must be others easier to come by.”
“I don’t mind a little effort to get what I want.” His penetrating stare made it clear he wasn’t just talking about the flowers. “And they remind me of you.”
“Oh? How does a rose remind you of me?” she asked, intrigued.
He stepped closer, until the flowers were all that separated them. “They are the perfect blend of virtue and passion.”
“I’m not so virtuous,” she breathed, tilting her face toward his.
Will grinned down at her. “There is a difference between having virtue and being chaste.”
Their lips were a whisper apart, neither making the move to join them.
“I’ve made dinner. It’s waiting at my place.” He announced this with the complete confidence she would accept.
Excerpt:
She had nearly forgotten her aggravation with Will Wilson when she found him leaning against her car holding another bouquet of Fire and Ice roses. She paused long enough to register lingering attraction, then turned around to lock up the store.
Facing him again, she couldn’t seem to summon the anger she once had. “I should be mad at you,” she began. “When did you get back in town?”
He looked at her appraisingly. “Should be... does that mean you’re not?”
Theona walked toward him. “I was. Quite a bit actually. You over stepped, Will.” She tried to ignore the sculpted muscle visible in the open neck of his button down.
“I brought you a peace offering,” he said, holding out the flowers.
“Why do you choose these?” she couldn’t help asking as she accepted them. “There must be others easier to come by.”
“I don’t mind a little effort to get what I want.” His penetrating stare made it clear he wasn’t just talking about the flowers. “And they remind me of you.”
“Oh? How does a rose remind you of me?” she asked, intrigued.
He stepped closer, until the flowers were all that separated them. “They are the perfect blend of virtue and passion.”
“I’m not so virtuous,” she breathed, tilting her face toward his.
Will grinned down at her. “There is a difference between having virtue and being chaste.”
Their lips were a whisper apart, neither making the move to join them.
“I’ve made dinner. It’s waiting at my place.” He announced this with the complete confidence she would accept.
37 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 3, 2019
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About the author
Nannette Kreitzman
45 books54 followersI'm a retired stay at home mom and happy empty nester. I spend my morning walks dreaming up short story ideas, but despite my carefully laid plans, my characters always manage to change things up! I've learned to pay attention to them though, they're usually right.
You can find me on Instagram @netts_shorts
Check out my Reference Guide Blog for Author’s Notes and excerpts for all of my stories!
https://nannettekreitzman.blogspot.com/
You can find me on Instagram @netts_shorts
Check out my Reference Guide Blog for Author’s Notes and excerpts for all of my stories!
https://nannettekreitzman.blogspot.com/
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February 19, 2021
Another great short from Nannette Kreitzman. I thought this was going to be a sweet love story, but Kreitzman crafted a clever twist, flipping it into a much darker tale. Easy to read (not that I wanted to stop at any point because I was definitely hooked) flowing dialogue and just enough description to flesh out the background while keeping the plot on a good simmer. I love Nannette's style and always enjoy her shorts.
January 28, 2020
A Tense and Sexy Short Story
I’m usually not a fan of the Romance genre, though I did enjoy “Fire and Ice” by Nannette Kreitzman. There was a lot packed into this short story. It was fast paced, exciting, and sexy with tension weaved throughout.
My criticism for this story is the same criticism that I have for most Romance stories (that I’ve read), which is a reliance on stereotypes such as the overbearing, controlling rich man, or the woman who is too lovestruck to see the red flags directly in front of her. That being said, these characters (and the overall plot) were still interesting and compelling enough to allow me to be genuinely entertained by this short story while wishing there was more of it to read. I would definitely recommend “Fire and Ice" to lovers of the Romance genre.
I’m usually not a fan of the Romance genre, though I did enjoy “Fire and Ice” by Nannette Kreitzman. There was a lot packed into this short story. It was fast paced, exciting, and sexy with tension weaved throughout.
My criticism for this story is the same criticism that I have for most Romance stories (that I’ve read), which is a reliance on stereotypes such as the overbearing, controlling rich man, or the woman who is too lovestruck to see the red flags directly in front of her. That being said, these characters (and the overall plot) were still interesting and compelling enough to allow me to be genuinely entertained by this short story while wishing there was more of it to read. I would definitely recommend “Fire and Ice" to lovers of the Romance genre.
July 20, 2023
Vivid writing, which moved me as a reader. Nannette Kreitzman knows and shows unique details of courtship and romance. She’s not shy of showing heartbreak, either. I enjoyed that she consistently showed these strongly defined characters in the midst of change.
The only drawback for me? I’m squeamish about male violence being visited on women.
The only drawback for me? I’m squeamish about male violence being visited on women.
October 7, 2022
A delicious little bite with such a satisfying ending!
If you're into . . .
She had a weakness for guys who took control.The whole time I was reading this I was waiting for the other shoe to drop, and drop it did! Loved it.
If you're into . . .
✔ short stories. . . you've found your next read!
✔ dark-ish romance
✔ possessive alphas
✔ plot twists
July 21, 2021
Intense!
Another fantastic read. Kreitzman packs a lot of punch into her short stories. Fire and Ice will have you on the edge of your seat! It’s a must read.
Another fantastic read. Kreitzman packs a lot of punch into her short stories. Fire and Ice will have you on the edge of your seat! It’s a must read.
January 1, 2021
Fire and Ice by Nannette Kreitzman is a superb, well written story about a woman who falls in love with the wrong man. It's cleverly written, pacey and the characters are believable. My only fault with it was that it wasn't long enough. Nannette is such a talented writer that I think she needs to treat us to a full length novel.
May 6, 2022
A fast-paced and exciting short story. I had to read it straight through once I started. From the very first pages, I fell in love with the Greek ambiance surrounding the main character Theona. That was unexpected and so heartwarming. "Fire and Ice" is an excellent story masterfully exposing an iron fist in a velvet glove. Great job!
October 20, 2023
This story touched a personal nerve with me. Theona loves her evenings out dancing with her friends and it takes her mind off her struggling boutique. Then she meets a man. Despite her reluctance to form an attachment to him, he persists and Theona wonders if she has finally met The One.
But do we ever know what goes on inside the mind of another person? Harrowing and thought-provoking, this tale acts as a cautionary warning to trust your instincts and never lose sight of who you are.
But do we ever know what goes on inside the mind of another person? Harrowing and thought-provoking, this tale acts as a cautionary warning to trust your instincts and never lose sight of who you are.
January 5, 2024
Manipulation and Desire
Theona loves to dance and goes to the club to blow off steam. When a man saves her from an uncomfortable situation she finds herself drawn to him. But she doesnt have time to date, needing to focus on her business. So when business picks up due to an ad she didnt pay for, she starts a whirling romance that takes some surprising turns.
Once again Nannette proves that you dont need a full novel to tell a gripping story. Amazing.
Theona loves to dance and goes to the club to blow off steam. When a man saves her from an uncomfortable situation she finds herself drawn to him. But she doesnt have time to date, needing to focus on her business. So when business picks up due to an ad she didnt pay for, she starts a whirling romance that takes some surprising turns.
Once again Nannette proves that you dont need a full novel to tell a gripping story. Amazing.
January 4, 2021
All I have to say about this one is WoW!
In the course of an hour, which is all it takes to read this short story, I laughed, I was swept off my feet and was totally horrified. This sweet looking little book has a dark edge that keeps you on your toes right to the very end. I'm not going to say too much more other than it's not what I thought it was going to be and I loved it!
In the course of an hour, which is all it takes to read this short story, I laughed, I was swept off my feet and was totally horrified. This sweet looking little book has a dark edge that keeps you on your toes right to the very end. I'm not going to say too much more other than it's not what I thought it was going to be and I loved it!
December 14, 2019
Fire and Ice - a cautionary tale
Nanette Kreitzman has written a powerful story with compelling characters that explores the illusion of strength within the darker side of relationships. Fascinating and chilling.
Nanette Kreitzman has written a powerful story with compelling characters that explores the illusion of strength within the darker side of relationships. Fascinating and chilling.
December 19, 2020
This is a fast paced story, with enough twists to keep the surprise factor alive throughout. Fire and Ice is a breezy read. It does a good job of keeping the reader guessing on what's going to happen next.
February 24, 2021
A great short story!
This is my first book from this author and it certainly won't be the last. This is a great short story, a dark, sexy tale full of suspense, twist and turns. I was hooked on it and read it in one go. Loved it.
This is my first book from this author and it certainly won't be the last. This is a great short story, a dark, sexy tale full of suspense, twist and turns. I was hooked on it and read it in one go. Loved it.
January 4, 2020
A succinctly written dark tale of obsession, manipulation, and consequences.
January 24, 2021
Fire and Ice is a short story that I just adored. It was a quick and thrilling little story, not to mention super sexy. It just had the feel of the kind of romance that will sweep the reader off their feet along with the characters. It also had a darker side, an evil side, a crack in the veneer of a perfect relationship. It's just a straight to the point short story that will stick with you.
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