What I liked
- the mystery does get thicker and thicker as you read on, dual perspective really carrying the plot forward, which I liked. However, since it was dual perspective, it lacked the element of surprise as one side was the drug dealers' and the other was the author's. I already knew what would happen / who the culprit was because the book would show the dealers' perspective first.
-The mystery was interesting, as we got to see how Cameron and the detective will solve the crime.
What I didn't like
- The writing style was not really for me. I tend to prefer writing style that does a lot more showing than telling + a lot of description of the scene / characters so I can infer their emotions rather than it being through the character talking. In this book, there were more telling than showing, which did not help me to get into the story.
-the characters did many things that I didn't agree with, not just the drug dealers obviously but Cameron and other characters. Their actions did not really align with the scene / their emotions - e.g) I found it odd that Cameron was happy and bought a boat after finding out his friend was brutally murdered. - he was sad and then after a little while he was happy seeing a new boat.
-the way the characters speak (again personally disliked the writing style) was very flat in my opinion, and did not feel like what actual people would say in these situations. I wish we had more deep / developed conversations that show the different sides of the characters.
-The whole drug on books raised many questions - did the dealers really think that their authors would not question anything? It's just so immoral to deceive the authors like that and to deceive the readers. What if the readers do not want to get addicted? Not that I would know of drug dealing business (thankfully), there were many clear holes that the dealers in the book did not consider.
-one of the lines said something along the lines of 'strong personality' / 'extroverted and likeable'. I thought this implied that introverts are not likeable or have strong personality, which are not true!