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Beyond the Pale #2
An Ocean of Light
Following closely on the events of A Touch of Lightning, Jake and his 18 year-old son, Ben, try to make a place for each other in their own lives, as well as for Jake's fiance, Fox. A honeymoon-slash-graduation gift in Las Vegas leads the men down a path of intrigue when a young man named Eric--a Lycan--comes their way, desperately looking for a way out of his curse. Ben's instincts to protect kick in as his attraction to the careworn drifter evolves, especially knowing that Eric is being pursued...
Will the men find common ground on which to build a life from? Or a home? Is home possible when all one has known was fear and hunger? What do the fates have in store for Ben--the son of a powerful alchemist whose blood has been imbued with that same power?
An Ocean of Light is the second novel in the Beyond the Pale series. Elements of alchemy, magic, and adventure in the present-day world exist side by side. Ocean is a modern fantasy fiction blended with steamy, inventive, M/M romance. Pick up the book and let the journey begin!
Will the men find common ground on which to build a life from? Or a home? Is home possible when all one has known was fear and hunger? What do the fates have in store for Ben--the son of a powerful alchemist whose blood has been imbued with that same power?
An Ocean of Light is the second novel in the Beyond the Pale series. Elements of alchemy, magic, and adventure in the present-day world exist side by side. Ocean is a modern fantasy fiction blended with steamy, inventive, M/M romance. Pick up the book and let the journey begin!
407 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 14, 2019
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November 8, 2019
This was a great continuation, but you definitely need to read book 1 before even trying to read this one. Eric and Ben relationship was so sweet and passionate. Poor Eric had been through so much, but Ben was exactly what he needed. This book has a little more depth to me than the first one, and I really enjoyed it a little more. I'm definitely waiting on book 3. I'm ready to see what will happen next.
I read a complimentary advance copy of the book; this is my voluntary and honest review.
I read a complimentary advance copy of the book; this is my voluntary and honest review.
November 8, 2019
3.5 🌟 hesitantly rounded up
This book was almost a DNF from the first couple of chapters. The story felt forced, stilted, and unnatural (more so than being supernatural). I was really disappointed because I enjoyed the first book so well, but I had to give it a bit more of a go, even if it did seem like the story was starting out a little predictably.
I'm glad I stuck it out; not only did the writing get better, but the storyline became more entertaining. Of course, we now have Jake and Fox who have reunited with Jake's son, Ben. And, Ben has his own emotions and hidden powers, which play a large part of this book's plotline. Then, we have the lost and broken Eric, who wins the innocent yet strong, still facing un-dealt-with feelings regarding his absentee father, and precocious alchemist, Ben.
Eric presents his own complications, and although Papa Bear grumbles and growls, he worms his altered little self into all the men's hearts. But he also brings danger to their new little family, but some interesting things transpire. A little Aether and a bit more alchemy are the only true fantasy aspects to this book, aside from a lycanthrope and a new mystical creature.
The rest of the story is mainly focused on Ben and Eric's relationship, and Ben's ambition to embarrass his dad as often as possible. Fox doesn't help with that much, but he keeps Jake's head on straight. It felt like there was a lot more angst in this story, mainly because of Eric and his past and feelings of self-worth, or lack thereof. There were also plenty of sexy times for both couples, but nothing in constant comparison to the first, IMO.
There were a couple of things that bothered me besides what I have already mentioned. It was my belief that I was receiving a final proof ARC copy, but I really hope that wasn't the case. There were a lot of errors, but the way they appeared, it seemed as though the book was in the editing process, so I'm just going to hope that is that. I noticed the second issue in book one, but it wasn't so redundantly in your face, or maybe it was because the author did it with both couples?, but the whole "big guy/little guy" and the like got really old, really quickly.
Overall, I was entertained, so I will be giving the next book in the series a try if I come across it. I also read this while my 10 year old daughter and I were both sick, so keep that in mind... I may have been a bit harder on it than I might normally have been. But, it does continue the story where book one left off, and it definitely sets the stage for the next installment. However, I wouldn't call this a HEA; I'd say it's more of a wesurvivedthisbutOmgoodnesswhydothesethingskeephappening, ending.
Happy reading!
* I received an ARC of this book and I am leaving my honest review. *
This book was almost a DNF from the first couple of chapters. The story felt forced, stilted, and unnatural (more so than being supernatural). I was really disappointed because I enjoyed the first book so well, but I had to give it a bit more of a go, even if it did seem like the story was starting out a little predictably.
I'm glad I stuck it out; not only did the writing get better, but the storyline became more entertaining. Of course, we now have Jake and Fox who have reunited with Jake's son, Ben. And, Ben has his own emotions and hidden powers, which play a large part of this book's plotline. Then, we have the lost and broken Eric, who wins the innocent yet strong, still facing un-dealt-with feelings regarding his absentee father, and precocious alchemist, Ben.
Eric presents his own complications, and although Papa Bear grumbles and growls, he worms his altered little self into all the men's hearts. But he also brings danger to their new little family, but some interesting things transpire. A little Aether and a bit more alchemy are the only true fantasy aspects to this book, aside from a lycanthrope and a new mystical creature.
The rest of the story is mainly focused on Ben and Eric's relationship, and Ben's ambition to embarrass his dad as often as possible. Fox doesn't help with that much, but he keeps Jake's head on straight. It felt like there was a lot more angst in this story, mainly because of Eric and his past and feelings of self-worth, or lack thereof. There were also plenty of sexy times for both couples, but nothing in constant comparison to the first, IMO.
There were a couple of things that bothered me besides what I have already mentioned. It was my belief that I was receiving a final proof ARC copy, but I really hope that wasn't the case. There were a lot of errors, but the way they appeared, it seemed as though the book was in the editing process, so I'm just going to hope that is that. I noticed the second issue in book one, but it wasn't so redundantly in your face, or maybe it was because the author did it with both couples?, but the whole "big guy/little guy" and the like got really old, really quickly.
Overall, I was entertained, so I will be giving the next book in the series a try if I come across it. I also read this while my 10 year old daughter and I were both sick, so keep that in mind... I may have been a bit harder on it than I might normally have been. But, it does continue the story where book one left off, and it definitely sets the stage for the next installment. However, I wouldn't call this a HEA; I'd say it's more of a wesurvivedthisbutOmgoodnesswhydothesethingskeephappening, ending.
Happy reading!
* I received an ARC of this book and I am leaving my honest review. *
April 17, 2020
Alchemy, pecans and so much love
This book continues from A Touch of Lightning left off. It can be read as a stand one but it is way better if you read the first book and also easier to understand. Ben has now joined his dad Jake and Fox in their adventures, never a dull moment. Alchemy to learn, werewolf to cure, images to avoid and definitely trying not to be killed. This book also has a lot more sex scenes, since now Ben has found his partner, we get to read about both couples (not gonna lie and say I didn't skip some cause I did). But definitely still an interesting series that I'm gladly following.
This book continues from A Touch of Lightning left off. It can be read as a stand one but it is way better if you read the first book and also easier to understand. Ben has now joined his dad Jake and Fox in their adventures, never a dull moment. Alchemy to learn, werewolf to cure, images to avoid and definitely trying not to be killed. This book also has a lot more sex scenes, since now Ben has found his partner, we get to read about both couples (not gonna lie and say I didn't skip some cause I did). But definitely still an interesting series that I'm gladly following.
November 7, 2019
This is the second book in The Beyond the Pale Series. You will want to read the first book before this one. A spellbinding book with good writing. The plot was entertaining and it was steady throughout the book. I found the story and characters intriguing. The characters were developed and thought out. Jake and Fox are MC’s, but we are introduced to a new couple Ben and Eric. This was an enjoyable book and I can recommend it as a good read even though it does ends with a cliffhanger and a HFN. I voluntarily read an advance copy of this book for an honest review.
November 8, 2019
This fantastic book carried on the fascinating, fast paced, action packed, gripping, gritty, intense, smoking hot, poignant, and totally awesome story from A Touch of Lightning. Filled with mystery, magic, mayhem, madness, and more twists and turns than a roller coaster, I was hooked from beginning to end, and can't wait to see what happens next!
November 2, 2019
read book 1 first.. this isnt one to be read as a standalone.. it was really good.. interesting.. fast paced.. keeps me curious. it was a very enjoyable story
October 30, 2019
This is an awesome follow up to the first book, Jake and Fox continue to improve on their skills, while helping Ben with his special talent. They move to San Diego for Ben to prepare for college but before that they stay in Vegas for a few days for Jake and Fox’s honeymoon. Whilst there Ben helps a young man by drawing out silver from his wound, the man runs off but the next day leaves a message to meet up with Ben. Eric asks for help so Ben asked his dads to meet and help Eric, Eric explains everything that’s happened to him, he brings a new battle of magic. Jake isn’t happy that Ben and Eric have a relationship but soon realised that he’s just like him, thanks to Fox. This now becomes very interesting a challenge for all, Kit knows how to keep the drama coming, but also allows for some witty dialogue and pleasurable intimate scenes. A different unique take on magic I’m enthralled by this storyline. The ending is not what I was expecting, all I can say is WOW.
An absolute must read, I voluntarily reviewed an arc of this book for my honest opinions of which I’m under no obligation to do so.
An absolute must read, I voluntarily reviewed an arc of this book for my honest opinions of which I’m under no obligation to do so.
June 26, 2020
New action and intrigue are abound in Kit Fortier’s An Ocean of Light! Jake, Fox, and Ben are looking for something of a normal life as they travel to Las Vegas for vacation. Unfortunately, normal isn’t in their family’s magic genes as they encounter Eric, a lycan who is being hunted and looking for refuge. I love Fortier’s blend of steamy romantic intrigue with epic supernatural battles! This series has always managed to offer thrills of one type or another, something that hasn’t slowed down with the sequel! The journey doesn’t stop here, so I’m excited to see where this crew heads next and how their dynamic evolves from here!
November 2, 2019
Great second book
This was another great.
I loved the multiple POVs and the relationships that develops between all the men.
I really enjoyed Ben and Eric's love story. Eric's back story was hard to read at times, and I loved the way Ben tried his hardest to be there for him and show him everything he could be.
Like in the first book, I really loved how the supernatural part of the story intertwined with the love story.
The end was lovely and heartbreaking all at once. I can't wait for the next book
This was another great.
I loved the multiple POVs and the relationships that develops between all the men.
I really enjoyed Ben and Eric's love story. Eric's back story was hard to read at times, and I loved the way Ben tried his hardest to be there for him and show him everything he could be.
Like in the first book, I really loved how the supernatural part of the story intertwined with the love story.
The end was lovely and heartbreaking all at once. I can't wait for the next book
November 13, 2019
Oh my goodness, that ending.
I absolutely loved this second book in the series. I hope and pray there is another one. I was hooked from the very beginning. Even with the seriousness, emotional and intense moments I found myself chuckling at times and it help to bring a lighter side to the story compared to the first. The story pace was much faster and it kept me interested the entire time.
I loved how protective and passionate Ben was, and how Eric soaked up all the deserved attention. Jake and Fox were sweet like before. I liked how Fox had to help remind Jake that Ben wasn’t a kid anymore and to let him make is own choices, right or wrong.
There’s a bit of alchemy and magic again in this story and I really enjoyed it, especially with the little twist towards the end with Eric.
I would definitely recommend this book but the first book should be read first.
I absolutely loved this second book in the series. I hope and pray there is another one. I was hooked from the very beginning. Even with the seriousness, emotional and intense moments I found myself chuckling at times and it help to bring a lighter side to the story compared to the first. The story pace was much faster and it kept me interested the entire time.
I loved how protective and passionate Ben was, and how Eric soaked up all the deserved attention. Jake and Fox were sweet like before. I liked how Fox had to help remind Jake that Ben wasn’t a kid anymore and to let him make is own choices, right or wrong.
There’s a bit of alchemy and magic again in this story and I really enjoyed it, especially with the little twist towards the end with Eric.
I would definitely recommend this book but the first book should be read first.
November 9, 2019
An Ocean of Light by author Kit Fortier is the second book in the Beyond the Pale series. In some ways, this book is the best so far and in others, I was frustrated with this one. I am not really into cliff hangers or a happy for now, that is what this book is. Other than that, I loved this book!! This series keeps getting more original every time.
This story has us catching up with Jake and Fox. How they feel about where they left off in the last book, and where they are going now.
Also, this is a book about Ben, Jake’s son. He has graduated from high school and is going to college. He is also experiencing his first love. I like Ben he is very naïve in some ways and wise in others.
Eric is a Lycan looking for a way out of his curse. He has been through hell and back. He really deserves a love like Ben. He has been at the bottom of humanity and finally has found people to trust.
Overall, I loved this one, the ending not so much but just leaves me wanting more! I cannot wait for book three and see what happens next.
Five Shooting Stars
This story has us catching up with Jake and Fox. How they feel about where they left off in the last book, and where they are going now.
Also, this is a book about Ben, Jake’s son. He has graduated from high school and is going to college. He is also experiencing his first love. I like Ben he is very naïve in some ways and wise in others.
Eric is a Lycan looking for a way out of his curse. He has been through hell and back. He really deserves a love like Ben. He has been at the bottom of humanity and finally has found people to trust.
Overall, I loved this one, the ending not so much but just leaves me wanting more! I cannot wait for book three and see what happens next.
Five Shooting Stars
November 12, 2019
Wow!! I absolutely loved this book! I can’t wait for the next one! Fox, Jake, Ben and Eric are just wonderful! They are making a family together. I was very happy to see Jake reunite with his son Ben. The supernatural/magical elements are a plus too.
November 8, 2019
We pick up where we left off in the first book.
It was wonderful seeing more of Jake and Fox. I absolutely loved seeing their relationship develop and also getting to know Ben and see his father work together and finally have a relationship.
Eric was a welcome addition and his back story was horrible.
We're left with a teaser for the next book and I can't wait.
It was wonderful seeing more of Jake and Fox. I absolutely loved seeing their relationship develop and also getting to know Ben and see his father work together and finally have a relationship.
Eric was a welcome addition and his back story was horrible.
We're left with a teaser for the next book and I can't wait.
March 4, 2020
I thought that the story was better than the first book. The writing was much more focused and had an amazing storyline. This is not a genre that I usually read, but I felt that it was a page-turner that I absolutely couldn’t put down. I love the magical and alchemy elements of the story. You could see character growth from the last book to this one. My favorite character was Ben and his coming of age story and his experiences with love and alchemy. This really is a solid story. I am purposely keeping my review a little vague as not to reveal anything, but don’t let that fool you. This is a really really great read. I would love to see this as a Netflix series or something. This was a fun book to read!
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