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Hawthorne High
Dylan Hatfield is the outcast in her new town. It isn’t just that her “crazy” grandmother scares people away, but the real problem lies with her best friends: they’re imaginary. Dylan’s bullied by her classmates to the point of physical abuse and there’s no point in reporting it anymore. She knows it’s crazy to still believe in imaginary friends when she’s about to graduate from high school, but they’re her only solace.
Then, they ask Dylan to help them possess the bullies. That’s crazy, right? It will never work.
When it does, horrible things start to happen around town. Dylan’s childhood friends might not be imaginary…they might be evil. Dylan must uncover the town’s past before there’s nothing left, and she loses her family and the boy she has always loved.
Then, they ask Dylan to help them possess the bullies. That’s crazy, right? It will never work.
When it does, horrible things start to happen around town. Dylan’s childhood friends might not be imaginary…they might be evil. Dylan must uncover the town’s past before there’s nothing left, and she loses her family and the boy she has always loved.
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Published September 3, 2019
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September 14, 2019
Her only friends were imaginary. Dylan Hatfield was the object of brutal bullying in school, one of the current issues written about these days. Jordan Elizabeth put her own little spin on this tale when those imaginary friends may be much, much more than Dylan realizes. Are they on her side or do they have their own agenda? Bullies beware…this ghost story is for you.
HAWTHORNE HIGH by Jordan Elizabeth tackles a new way to deal with bullies, which may or may not work for real life victims. Entertaining and a different approach to a topic that never should exist in the first place. Written for young adults, this quick read is a great offering without being preachy about “how to handle a bully,” because the mature way sure isn’t going to work!
I received a complimentary copy from Jordan Elizabeth! This is my honest and voluntary review.
Publisher: CHBB Publishing (September 3, 2019)
Publication Date: September 3, 2019
Genre: YA Paranormal | Bullying
Print Length: 151 pages
Available from: Amazon
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HAWTHORNE HIGH by Jordan Elizabeth tackles a new way to deal with bullies, which may or may not work for real life victims. Entertaining and a different approach to a topic that never should exist in the first place. Written for young adults, this quick read is a great offering without being preachy about “how to handle a bully,” because the mature way sure isn’t going to work!
I received a complimentary copy from Jordan Elizabeth! This is my honest and voluntary review.
Publisher: CHBB Publishing (September 3, 2019)
Publication Date: September 3, 2019
Genre: YA Paranormal | Bullying
Print Length: 151 pages
Available from: Amazon
For Reviews, Giveaways, Fabulous Book News, follow: http://tometender.blogspot.com
September 27, 2025
3 - 3.5 stars
Hawthorne High presents a gripping young adult horror narrative that explores the unsettling realities lurking beneath the veneer of teenage life. High school can feel like a battleground, with treacherous cliques wielding their power to inflict emotional pain on others.
The story centres on Dylan, a socially isolated teen who has endured relentless bullying, assault, and harassment from her peers. Amidst the turmoil, she has found solace in her so-called imaginary friends, but as the plot unfolds, she discovers that these entities may not be as benign as she believed. The narrative takes a dark turn when the prospect of possession is presented, leading to an unravelling of madness and chaos.
The book features several genuinely chilling moments that contribute to its eerie atmosphere, although it leans more towards a ghostly drama and angst than outright horror. Themes of paranoia emerge as she navigates a world where trust is scarce. Additionally, her relationship with her grandmother, who is grappling with the debilitating effects of dementia, adds layers of complexity to the story.
Dive into Hawthorne High to witness the tangled web of friendships, fears, and the haunting presence that escalates into chaos.
Hawthorne High presents a gripping young adult horror narrative that explores the unsettling realities lurking beneath the veneer of teenage life. High school can feel like a battleground, with treacherous cliques wielding their power to inflict emotional pain on others.
The story centres on Dylan, a socially isolated teen who has endured relentless bullying, assault, and harassment from her peers. Amidst the turmoil, she has found solace in her so-called imaginary friends, but as the plot unfolds, she discovers that these entities may not be as benign as she believed. The narrative takes a dark turn when the prospect of possession is presented, leading to an unravelling of madness and chaos.
The book features several genuinely chilling moments that contribute to its eerie atmosphere, although it leans more towards a ghostly drama and angst than outright horror. Themes of paranoia emerge as she navigates a world where trust is scarce. Additionally, her relationship with her grandmother, who is grappling with the debilitating effects of dementia, adds layers of complexity to the story.
Dive into Hawthorne High to witness the tangled web of friendships, fears, and the haunting presence that escalates into chaos.
April 5, 2020
Dylan is an outcast at school. Thanks to the mean clique, she’s never fit in. To make up for it, she has imaginary friends. Or at least she THINKS they’re imaginary. When one of them makes the leap to possessing Dylan’s top bully, she’s forced to learn the truth of what her imaginary friends really are.
Jordan Elizabeth is quickly becoming a favorite author of mine. I love the suspenseful prose and the way the characters are created. The twist of male and female names in this story I thought was also interesting. Dylan was a very easy to relate to protagonist. I felt sympathetic toward her, and I loved how we got to see her evolve into a stronger character at the end.
The bit about her grandmother suffering dementia hit home for me. It was written in a very realistic lighting that made the book feel even realer. The plunge of normalcy to paranormal was also done well.
Narration was perfect.
This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.
Jordan Elizabeth is quickly becoming a favorite author of mine. I love the suspenseful prose and the way the characters are created. The twist of male and female names in this story I thought was also interesting. Dylan was a very easy to relate to protagonist. I felt sympathetic toward her, and I loved how we got to see her evolve into a stronger character at the end.
The bit about her grandmother suffering dementia hit home for me. It was written in a very realistic lighting that made the book feel even realer. The plunge of normalcy to paranormal was also done well.
Narration was perfect.
This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.
September 14, 2019
5 CRANKY STARS
This is a YA story that will appeal to all ages. Set in a small town in Upstate New York, it is about a high school senior. I enjoyed reading about an area I am familiar with which made it seem even more real. High schoolers are the same no matter where you live, and bullying has become a real problem. Same stupid reasons all over- the main character is different. She talks to herself, or so the other students think. Actually, she sees ghosts but even she doesn’t know this. To Dylan, these are her imaginary childhood friends. They should have disappeared long ago.
Now, imagine you are eight-years old and move to a new school. You know no one. To make matters worse, you came from a big city to a small farm town. Your mother has dressed you in a dress, not the jeans and t-shirts everyone else has on. Plus, to make matters worse, you have what everyone considers a boy’s first name. Not a good start in a new school. One day these two girls, Mary and Amelia make friends with you. More trouble! As you talk to them, you realize no one else can see them.
Then you grow up and move to middle school. The damage is already done but your friends are gone. No more talking to yourself. Now, you are in high school. The district has renovated your old elementary school into the high school. Oops!! Your two friends are back. How could that happen and why? You must read the book to find the answers to these questions. Dylan also discovers several other mysteries surrounding this town and her family. Imaginative and fun story from start to finish.
This is a YA story that will appeal to all ages. Set in a small town in Upstate New York, it is about a high school senior. I enjoyed reading about an area I am familiar with which made it seem even more real. High schoolers are the same no matter where you live, and bullying has become a real problem. Same stupid reasons all over- the main character is different. She talks to herself, or so the other students think. Actually, she sees ghosts but even she doesn’t know this. To Dylan, these are her imaginary childhood friends. They should have disappeared long ago.
Now, imagine you are eight-years old and move to a new school. You know no one. To make matters worse, you came from a big city to a small farm town. Your mother has dressed you in a dress, not the jeans and t-shirts everyone else has on. Plus, to make matters worse, you have what everyone considers a boy’s first name. Not a good start in a new school. One day these two girls, Mary and Amelia make friends with you. More trouble! As you talk to them, you realize no one else can see them.
Then you grow up and move to middle school. The damage is already done but your friends are gone. No more talking to yourself. Now, you are in high school. The district has renovated your old elementary school into the high school. Oops!! Your two friends are back. How could that happen and why? You must read the book to find the answers to these questions. Dylan also discovers several other mysteries surrounding this town and her family. Imaginative and fun story from start to finish.
October 24, 2019
I've never read a book like this, and as interesting as it soubds, I don't think I am the right audience for it. I spent the entire book confused and frustrated; especially compaired to the other readers reviews.
What I did enjoy was the mystery of the main character's imaginary friend. I kept thinking he was just in her mind, but then something would happen and I would think he's real. They is what helped me to finish this book. The idea behind the story is wonderful but the execution didn't work for me.
The characters were good and well written, the detailed in the descriptionsvwere great, I just couldn't connect to the story as a whole. I will continue to read this author in the future. I received an ARC via Booksprout and I am leaving an honest review. 2.5 stars.
What I did enjoy was the mystery of the main character's imaginary friend. I kept thinking he was just in her mind, but then something would happen and I would think he's real. They is what helped me to finish this book. The idea behind the story is wonderful but the execution didn't work for me.
The characters were good and well written, the detailed in the descriptionsvwere great, I just couldn't connect to the story as a whole. I will continue to read this author in the future. I received an ARC via Booksprout and I am leaving an honest review. 2.5 stars.
October 23, 2019
This story was very odd (in a good way), it took me a while to get into it then I flew through it. Something strange is going on in this school, Dylan seems in tune with it but is she the only one. Who are these imaginary friends of hers, are they good or evil? Great plot and interesting characters, I really enjoyed it.
September 19, 2019
wow... so this is YA.. and i enjoy ya but sometimes im not in the mood.. i decided i wanted to try this one because the blurb sounded good and it totally didnt dissapoint me.. it was amazing and so much fun. i loved the ghosts.. i loved dylan and she was just... amazing. haha.. it was fun
April 3, 2020
Elizabeth transports the trappings of a classic ghost story to the tawdry dystopia of a US high school, amplifying the exclusion faced by those whose life includes—or publicly includes—other than the narrow list of socially acceptable things.
Dylan Hatfield’s grandmother suffers from dementia. And, ever since moving to Hawthorne, Dylan has been followed by imaginary friends. Either of these might be enough to make a teenager outcast; together they ensure she is assaulted mentally and physically by her classmates; and her school refuse to admit it’s even happening. She’s certain her imaginary friends are just a coping mechanism, until one of them offers to possess one of her assailants, to make her more pleasant.
Elizabeth conjures an entirely too plausible image of the abuse of out-groups perpetrated by in-groups in school, right down to a vilified weirdo becoming everyone’s friend the moment a popular child is pleasant to them; and the delinquency of authorities and parents. Her portrayal is granted all the more banal horror by the untouchable nature of one of the abusers highlighting the “money is morality” rot at the heart of US society.
As such, a story of fighting back by supernatural means risks becoming simply a wish-fulfilment fantasy. However, Elizabeth skilfully seeds both Dylan’s imaginary friends and the suggestion of possession with a subtle otherness that distinguishes it from the pristine “power to make everything right” dream of the abused.
This sense of not solving everything and potentially not being ideal is supported by the dementia of Dylan’s grandmother: even if the possession is possible, it won’t remove the stress of her grandmother disintegrating before her eyes; and—by implication—possession is much like someone “losing their mind”.
Elizabeth unfolds the plot using the standard techniques of a ghost story: creepy events that might have a mundane explanation; a sense of dread that fits the paranoid mindset of the oppressed. However, she also takes advantage of the presence of abusers who might wish to scare or implicate their subjects.
Elizabeth weaves a teen romance subplot through the abuse and paranormal uncertainty. However, unlike some YA stories, this is a plausible evocation of friendship and awkwardness rather than a grand passion for an unseeing object or a choice between two airbrushed hotties. As such, it forms a realistic contrast to the implausibility of mystical events, a source of strength, and another thing that could be lost to a reputation for weirdness.
Dylan is a sympathetic character, not exceptional in ability or morality but commendably free of angst given the abuse she faces on a daily basis and the lack of support from adults. This evocation of an ordinary teenager treated cruelly is likely to resonate with younger readers experiencing peer abuse themselves and avoid more mature readers finding her overly mired in self-pity.
The supporting cast are divided almost along age lines: the teenagers with more than brief page-time have a subtle complexity; whereas most adults seem drawn with a slightly broader brush. This adds to the sense that Dylan’s story occurs in a real world, but that she cannot access the adult part of it that should be countering the abuse.
Overall, I enjoyed this book. I recommend it to readers seeking YA fantasy that portrays both the horror of peer abuse and the bitter-sweet complexity of solutions.
I received a free copy from the author with a request for a fair review.
Dylan Hatfield’s grandmother suffers from dementia. And, ever since moving to Hawthorne, Dylan has been followed by imaginary friends. Either of these might be enough to make a teenager outcast; together they ensure she is assaulted mentally and physically by her classmates; and her school refuse to admit it’s even happening. She’s certain her imaginary friends are just a coping mechanism, until one of them offers to possess one of her assailants, to make her more pleasant.
Elizabeth conjures an entirely too plausible image of the abuse of out-groups perpetrated by in-groups in school, right down to a vilified weirdo becoming everyone’s friend the moment a popular child is pleasant to them; and the delinquency of authorities and parents. Her portrayal is granted all the more banal horror by the untouchable nature of one of the abusers highlighting the “money is morality” rot at the heart of US society.
As such, a story of fighting back by supernatural means risks becoming simply a wish-fulfilment fantasy. However, Elizabeth skilfully seeds both Dylan’s imaginary friends and the suggestion of possession with a subtle otherness that distinguishes it from the pristine “power to make everything right” dream of the abused.
This sense of not solving everything and potentially not being ideal is supported by the dementia of Dylan’s grandmother: even if the possession is possible, it won’t remove the stress of her grandmother disintegrating before her eyes; and—by implication—possession is much like someone “losing their mind”.
Elizabeth unfolds the plot using the standard techniques of a ghost story: creepy events that might have a mundane explanation; a sense of dread that fits the paranoid mindset of the oppressed. However, she also takes advantage of the presence of abusers who might wish to scare or implicate their subjects.
Elizabeth weaves a teen romance subplot through the abuse and paranormal uncertainty. However, unlike some YA stories, this is a plausible evocation of friendship and awkwardness rather than a grand passion for an unseeing object or a choice between two airbrushed hotties. As such, it forms a realistic contrast to the implausibility of mystical events, a source of strength, and another thing that could be lost to a reputation for weirdness.
Dylan is a sympathetic character, not exceptional in ability or morality but commendably free of angst given the abuse she faces on a daily basis and the lack of support from adults. This evocation of an ordinary teenager treated cruelly is likely to resonate with younger readers experiencing peer abuse themselves and avoid more mature readers finding her overly mired in self-pity.
The supporting cast are divided almost along age lines: the teenagers with more than brief page-time have a subtle complexity; whereas most adults seem drawn with a slightly broader brush. This adds to the sense that Dylan’s story occurs in a real world, but that she cannot access the adult part of it that should be countering the abuse.
Overall, I enjoyed this book. I recommend it to readers seeking YA fantasy that portrays both the horror of peer abuse and the bitter-sweet complexity of solutions.
I received a free copy from the author with a request for a fair review.
October 10, 2025
Hawthorne High is YA Paranormal, supernatural horror set in a haunted high school built on the grounds of a former asylum, adding eerie atmosphere and historical mystery. It contains themes of bullying, exclusion, family dynamics, mental health, coping mechanisms, psychological drama, supernatural elements such as ghosts and possession, and a touch of romance. The story centers around Dylan Hatfield, a high school senior and social outcast. Dylan is bullied and isolated, with only her “imaginary” friends for comfort. When these friends suggest possessing her bullies, things spiral into chaos, revealing they may not be imaginary at all.
The book contained an eclectic and interesting cast of characters that all contributed in their own way to the mental health and wellness of Dylan. The “imaginary” friends, Amelia and Mary, are initially comforting, but they later reveal darker intentions, blurring the line between protectors and manipulators. Their ability to possess others suggests they are ghosts or spirits tied to the town’s haunted past. They serve as both emotional crutches and catalysts for chaos, pushing Dylan to confront her trauma and the town’s secrets. Dylan’s grandmother has dementia which adds emotional weight and complexity to Dylan’s home life. Her grandmother represents memory, loss, and the fragility of reality, mirroring Dylan’s own psychological journey. Ashley, Dylan’s love interest, is kind and supportive and offers a rare source of genuine connection and affection for Dylan. His presence offers emotional stability and contrasts the eerie, chaotic elements of the story.
The character of Dylan is relatable because she is introverted, isolated, and emotionally distant due to relentless bullying. However, despite the abuse, she maintains a quiet strength and a deep emotional sensitivity, especially toward her grandmother who has dementia, and her imaginary friends. Her reliance on imaginary friends reveals both her creativity and her need for emotional support in a hostile environment. Dylan starts as a lonely teen, emotionally battered and clinging to imaginary friends for comfort. By the end of the book Dylan evolves into a more assertive and courageous character, confronting the dark truths of her town and her own psyche. This book is a must read for anyone looking for suspenseful storytelling, emotional depth, a relatable protagonist, and creepy ambiance.
The book contained an eclectic and interesting cast of characters that all contributed in their own way to the mental health and wellness of Dylan. The “imaginary” friends, Amelia and Mary, are initially comforting, but they later reveal darker intentions, blurring the line between protectors and manipulators. Their ability to possess others suggests they are ghosts or spirits tied to the town’s haunted past. They serve as both emotional crutches and catalysts for chaos, pushing Dylan to confront her trauma and the town’s secrets. Dylan’s grandmother has dementia which adds emotional weight and complexity to Dylan’s home life. Her grandmother represents memory, loss, and the fragility of reality, mirroring Dylan’s own psychological journey. Ashley, Dylan’s love interest, is kind and supportive and offers a rare source of genuine connection and affection for Dylan. His presence offers emotional stability and contrasts the eerie, chaotic elements of the story.
The character of Dylan is relatable because she is introverted, isolated, and emotionally distant due to relentless bullying. However, despite the abuse, she maintains a quiet strength and a deep emotional sensitivity, especially toward her grandmother who has dementia, and her imaginary friends. Her reliance on imaginary friends reveals both her creativity and her need for emotional support in a hostile environment. Dylan starts as a lonely teen, emotionally battered and clinging to imaginary friends for comfort. By the end of the book Dylan evolves into a more assertive and courageous character, confronting the dark truths of her town and her own psyche. This book is a must read for anyone looking for suspenseful storytelling, emotional depth, a relatable protagonist, and creepy ambiance.
October 6, 2025
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth
4 Stars
Dylan Hatfield is the new girl in town (or at least feels totally out of place). Her grandmother’s eccentric reputation and Dylan’s imaginary friends set her apart at school. She suffers under the daily cruelty of bullies—and eventually, with the encouragement of Amelia and Mary, her “imaginary” friends, she takes drastic steps: they begin to possess the bullies, ostensibly to teach them a lesson. But as the supernatural escalates, Dylan learns that perhaps these friends are not what she thought—and that the past of the asylum that once occupied the ground beneath Hawthorne High holds dark secrets. Problems spiral, things become dangerous, and Dylan has to decide how far she’ll go to save herself, her loved ones, and the boy she cares about.
The haunted-asylum-turned-high school setting is creepy and evocative. Transforming something historical and sinister into something that defines the everyday environment (school life) is effective — it brings the paranormal close to the mundane in a way that heightens tension. Dylan’s feelings of isolation, being misunderstood, and bullied are well-drawn. Even when paranormal elements take over, you can still empathize with her because the more ordinary struggles (fitting in, wanting acceptance) are believable. The story builds well, moving from school-drama to full supernatural horror, which keeps things interesting. If you like ghost stories, supernatural suspense, or dark YA fiction, this hits a lot of the right beats. It offers both horror elements and emotional drama.
Hawthorne High is a strong entry in the YA paranormal genre. It’s creepy, emotionally resonant, and offers enough twist and mystery to keep you turning the pages. It’s not perfect — some characters and plot threads could be more polished, and the ending leaves a few questions floating — but the book’s strengths (mood, protagonist, stakes) carry it a long way.
4 Stars
Dylan Hatfield is the new girl in town (or at least feels totally out of place). Her grandmother’s eccentric reputation and Dylan’s imaginary friends set her apart at school. She suffers under the daily cruelty of bullies—and eventually, with the encouragement of Amelia and Mary, her “imaginary” friends, she takes drastic steps: they begin to possess the bullies, ostensibly to teach them a lesson. But as the supernatural escalates, Dylan learns that perhaps these friends are not what she thought—and that the past of the asylum that once occupied the ground beneath Hawthorne High holds dark secrets. Problems spiral, things become dangerous, and Dylan has to decide how far she’ll go to save herself, her loved ones, and the boy she cares about.
The haunted-asylum-turned-high school setting is creepy and evocative. Transforming something historical and sinister into something that defines the everyday environment (school life) is effective — it brings the paranormal close to the mundane in a way that heightens tension. Dylan’s feelings of isolation, being misunderstood, and bullied are well-drawn. Even when paranormal elements take over, you can still empathize with her because the more ordinary struggles (fitting in, wanting acceptance) are believable. The story builds well, moving from school-drama to full supernatural horror, which keeps things interesting. If you like ghost stories, supernatural suspense, or dark YA fiction, this hits a lot of the right beats. It offers both horror elements and emotional drama.
Hawthorne High is a strong entry in the YA paranormal genre. It’s creepy, emotionally resonant, and offers enough twist and mystery to keep you turning the pages. It’s not perfect — some characters and plot threads could be more polished, and the ending leaves a few questions floating — but the book’s strengths (mood, protagonist, stakes) carry it a long way.
October 11, 2025
Hawthorne High is a dark, atmospheric psychological thriller that blends the haunting loneliness of adolescence with the creeping terror of the supernatural. Jordan Elizabeth crafts a story that is as emotionally raw as it is unsettling, centering on Dylan Hatfield — a high school senior trapped between trauma, isolation, and a chilling truth she never expected to face.
Dylan is the quintessential outcast: bullied to the point of physical harm, emotionally bruised, and burdened by the stigma surrounding her eccentric grandmother. But it’s her imaginary friends — remnants of a childhood long gone — that make her truly different. What begins as a surreal exploration of mental survival soon veers into terrifying territory when those “imaginary” friends offer Dylan a way out: let them possess her tormentors. What sounds like a twisted fantasy becomes horrifyingly real, and the town of Hawthorne will never be the same.
Elizabeth’s writing is sharp and immersive, weaving themes of abuse, mental health, and morality into a story that refuses to give easy answers. Is Dylan a victim? A villain? A pawn in something older and darker than anyone realizes? The book keeps you guessing as the stakes rise, lives unravel, and the line between imaginary and evil begins to blur.
What sets Hawthorne High apart from standard teen horror is its emotional core. Dylan’s internal struggle — her desperate need for connection, her guilt, her gradual unraveling — is compelling and deeply human. The slow revelation of the town’s hidden past adds rich layers to the narrative, making the ending feel both inevitable and deeply tragic.
Fans of Stephen King’s Carrie or Stranger Things will find themselves right at home in Hawthorne’s eerie halls. It’s a story about power, pain, and the monsters we create — both in our heads and in our hearts.
Dylan is the quintessential outcast: bullied to the point of physical harm, emotionally bruised, and burdened by the stigma surrounding her eccentric grandmother. But it’s her imaginary friends — remnants of a childhood long gone — that make her truly different. What begins as a surreal exploration of mental survival soon veers into terrifying territory when those “imaginary” friends offer Dylan a way out: let them possess her tormentors. What sounds like a twisted fantasy becomes horrifyingly real, and the town of Hawthorne will never be the same.
Elizabeth’s writing is sharp and immersive, weaving themes of abuse, mental health, and morality into a story that refuses to give easy answers. Is Dylan a victim? A villain? A pawn in something older and darker than anyone realizes? The book keeps you guessing as the stakes rise, lives unravel, and the line between imaginary and evil begins to blur.
What sets Hawthorne High apart from standard teen horror is its emotional core. Dylan’s internal struggle — her desperate need for connection, her guilt, her gradual unraveling — is compelling and deeply human. The slow revelation of the town’s hidden past adds rich layers to the narrative, making the ending feel both inevitable and deeply tragic.
Fans of Stephen King’s Carrie or Stranger Things will find themselves right at home in Hawthorne’s eerie halls. It’s a story about power, pain, and the monsters we create — both in our heads and in our hearts.
September 27, 2025
3.4 Stars
Dylan has two imaginary friends, Amelia and Mary. They are always there to offer support when she is bullied and make her feel less alone. When Mary approaches Dylan with a suggestion that she can make her life at school easier, Dylan can’t pass it up. Problem is, things aren’t what they seem, and when terrible things start happening around her town, Dylan is forced to question who exactly Amelia and Mary are, and what secrets her town holds.
I really enjoyed this story. It was a quick read that managed to pack in a whole lot of spooky and a whole lot of mystery. I’ve got to say this book really packs a punch, especially Dylan's experience of bullying. I do not think my heart was prepared. I absolutely loved Ashley; that dude is a prince, and his connection with Dylan is just so sweet and was adorable to read. I would recommend this to anyone who likes a spooky tale with plenty of mystery and paranormal elements. I think this would make a perfect read for teenagers between the ages of 13 and 18, although even adults will find something to enjoy here. The ending did feel like it wrapped up very quickly, and maybe more time could have been spent on what happened in the past and the people who were affected. That being said, Elizabeth really nailed the complex emotions of the characters, and the deep hurt we can all carry, and how this can make us treat others. I really didn’t think that the book would make me even slightly empathise with some of the bullies, but colour me surprised.
I think this would be perfect for anyone looking to read a paranormal mystery, with plenty of spooky moments. If you’re looking for a quick, creepy read for around Halloween, then this is the book for you.
Dylan has two imaginary friends, Amelia and Mary. They are always there to offer support when she is bullied and make her feel less alone. When Mary approaches Dylan with a suggestion that she can make her life at school easier, Dylan can’t pass it up. Problem is, things aren’t what they seem, and when terrible things start happening around her town, Dylan is forced to question who exactly Amelia and Mary are, and what secrets her town holds.
I really enjoyed this story. It was a quick read that managed to pack in a whole lot of spooky and a whole lot of mystery. I’ve got to say this book really packs a punch, especially Dylan's experience of bullying. I do not think my heart was prepared. I absolutely loved Ashley; that dude is a prince, and his connection with Dylan is just so sweet and was adorable to read. I would recommend this to anyone who likes a spooky tale with plenty of mystery and paranormal elements. I think this would make a perfect read for teenagers between the ages of 13 and 18, although even adults will find something to enjoy here. The ending did feel like it wrapped up very quickly, and maybe more time could have been spent on what happened in the past and the people who were affected. That being said, Elizabeth really nailed the complex emotions of the characters, and the deep hurt we can all carry, and how this can make us treat others. I really didn’t think that the book would make me even slightly empathise with some of the bullies, but colour me surprised.
I think this would be perfect for anyone looking to read a paranormal mystery, with plenty of spooky moments. If you’re looking for a quick, creepy read for around Halloween, then this is the book for you.
October 11, 2025
Hawthorne High is a fast-paced supernatural teen fiction novel that blends the anxieties of high school with a compelling paranormal mystery. The story centers on Dylan Hatfield, a bullied high school outcast whose only solace comes from her two lifelong "imaginary friends," Amelia and Mary. The central conflict ignites when her "friends" convince Dylan to help them possess her bullies as a form of revenge. When this terrifying plan actually works, Dylan realizes her imaginary companions are, in fact, ghosts tied to the dark history of the town and a former asylum where the school now stands. The story transitions quickly from a relatable high school drama into a supernatural thriller as Dylan must race to uncover the town's tragic past to stop the vengeful ghosts before they destroy everything—including her family and the boy she loves. Jordan Elizabeth's writing style is engaging, successfully building a world where the line between reality and the supernatural is constantly blurred. The book is particularly strong in its suspenseful atmosphere and the moral dilemma faced by Dylan. This story offers a satisfying and often chilling read for fans of YA paranormal fiction who enjoy a mix of contemporary high school drama and a strong ghost story.
October 2, 2025
This book is by an author that is fast becoming one of my favorites. I enjoy their attention to details that not only make the plot pop but the characters as well. I also enjoy how this author is able to pull me into the characters' world and keep me engaged throughout. This is a young adult story about Dylan and her imaginary friends. Dylan is about to graduate from high school but when her imaginary friends decide to go after Dylan’s bullies things start going crazy. Now she is about to lose everything but will she be able to uncover the town’s past and stop the evil before it is too late? I enjoyed Dylan and what she brought to the story. She is a strong character that I felt for throughout the story with the bullies and her imaginary friends didn’t make it any easier for her either. I also enjoyed how supportive the other characters were of her character. The growth of this story made it easy to read and hard to put down. I found this story to be fast paced and one of my favorites by this author. I look forward to seeing what is next for this author. I highly recommend this book.
October 10, 2025
Dylan is a new girl in a small town that doesn't have many friends. In fact, her only friends are her boyfriend, a pen pal...and the rest are imaginary. She knows that as someone almost ready to graduate high school that she's really too old for imaginary friends, but she is desperate for a sense of kinship and the bullies at school are so brutal that they assault her. Her mom is struggling to care for her grandmother, who is suffering from dementia and is scared and confused these days. No one is doing anything to help her, so when she believes her imaginary friends are her subconscious offering her a bit of a feeling like she isn't so alone, Dylan accepts it.
One day when the imaginary friends ask Dylan to help them possess her bullies so that they will stop being so awful to Dylan, she wonders if her friends really are imaginary. When she takes a chance to make her life feel a little less desperate, weird things start happening in town. Will Dylan be able to stop things before they get worse? Is she really dealing with evil, instead of her imagination?
One day when the imaginary friends ask Dylan to help them possess her bullies so that they will stop being so awful to Dylan, she wonders if her friends really are imaginary. When she takes a chance to make her life feel a little less desperate, weird things start happening in town. Will Dylan be able to stop things before they get worse? Is she really dealing with evil, instead of her imagination?
October 10, 2025
This YA ghostly mystery kept me hooked throughout. Having a “crazy” grandmother who scares people away hasn’t helped Dylan make friends in her new town. She is also being bullied at school and even though it’s turned to physical abuse she doesn’t believe it’s worth reporting it anymore. However, Dylan can always rely on her best friends, except they are imaginary or she thought they were, until they asked for her help to possess the bullies. Dylan soon learns that her childhood friends might be evil when horrible things start to happen in the town. In order to save the town and her family she needs to uncover the town’s past and who her imaginary friends actually are. The descriptive narrative brought the setting vividly to life making me feel fully immersed in the story. The storyline had a rather creepy feeling to it and was a great mix of mystery and drama. I really felt for Dylan and the portrayal of her bullying was an emotional read. I found her a complex character who was likeable and relatable, and I expect YA will really engage with her.
June 11, 2020
This is what I consider to be a horror story but not a simple one. Dylan is 17 and been the subject of a lot of bullying. A lot. She has two 'imaginary friends', Amelia and Mary. She has seen them for years and they are still with her in high school.
Dylan lives with her mother and her grandmother, who has dementia. It seems that Amelia and Mary are trapped at school, though. It also seems they have her best interests in heart and they have a way to stop the bullying. Dylan accepts their idea.
Things go downhill fast from there with a house set on fire, a library set on fire and a former asylum that had its own mad doctor, mad experiments and a whole bunch of ghosts. The two main ghosts have their own backstories. So Dylan is going to have to figure out just how high a price is she willing to pay for freedom from bullying? Does her grandmother see something she doesn't? Will her boyfriend abandon her once he finds out what is really going on?
It's a quite good book.
Dylan lives with her mother and her grandmother, who has dementia. It seems that Amelia and Mary are trapped at school, though. It also seems they have her best interests in heart and they have a way to stop the bullying. Dylan accepts their idea.
Things go downhill fast from there with a house set on fire, a library set on fire and a former asylum that had its own mad doctor, mad experiments and a whole bunch of ghosts. The two main ghosts have their own backstories. So Dylan is going to have to figure out just how high a price is she willing to pay for freedom from bullying? Does her grandmother see something she doesn't? Will her boyfriend abandon her once he finds out what is really going on?
It's a quite good book.
October 10, 2025
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth. This is a teen horror book and it is really good. It's the story of Dylan who is the new girl in high school so she becomes the outcast and gets bullied. Her grandmother is kind of different and most people are scared of her so that gets rolled onto Dylan. The only friend she has is the boy she really likes, Ashley. She does have a few other friends but they are actually imaginary friends. With the encouragement of her imaginary friends, Dylan decides to possess her bullies but what ends up happening is scarier than anything Dylan can imagine. She now has to figure out how to stop these very real "imaginary friends" and keep them from destroying everything she cares about. On top of this she is trying to do all the high school girl things and take care of her Grandmother who has dementia. Such a good book filled with horror, sadness and just a bit of things that go bump in the dark. I loved it!
October 1, 2025
Hawthorne High is a YA mystery and a fast read at under 200 pages. Dylan is the bullied outcast at Hawthorne High and the target of the "mean girls". What the others don't know is that Dylan really IS different from them. She has friends that no one else can see or hear. She believes they are imaginary, but they bring her comfort and keep her company. That is, until her imaginary friend decides to posses one of her bullies....now Dylan must come to terms with who/what they really are. This book really gets into the mind of a young girl going through turmoil and emotions, all around. She is bullied, has a "boy's" name, and her grandmother suffers from dementia. That is alot for ANY young girl to endure, without the lingering ghosts! If you can read this from a youth standpoint, since that is the intended audience, you will most likely really enjoy this one.
October 4, 2025
Hawthorne High had me hooked and haunted. It’s not just a ghost story—it’s a raw, emotional ride through bullying, trauma, and the kind of possession that makes you question what’s real. I felt every ounce of Dylan’s pain, isolation, and fear. The ghosts aren’t just creepy—they’re angry, and they want revenge. And when they start using Dylan to get it, things get dark fast.
There’s this slow build of dread that gave me full-body chills. The school setting, the twisted history, the way even teachers turn on her—it all felt too real. And just when I thought I knew where it was going, it flipped everything. I wasn’t ready.
If you love horror with heart, ghosts that don’t play nice, and stories that make you feel something deep and uncomfortable, Hawthorne High delivers. I’ll be thinking about this one for a while.
There’s this slow build of dread that gave me full-body chills. The school setting, the twisted history, the way even teachers turn on her—it all felt too real. And just when I thought I knew where it was going, it flipped everything. I wasn’t ready.
If you love horror with heart, ghosts that don’t play nice, and stories that make you feel something deep and uncomfortable, Hawthorne High delivers. I’ll be thinking about this one for a while.
October 4, 2025
Hawthorne High By Jordan Elizabeth was a good YA mystery read that I could not put own. Dylan, is bullied and outcasted in the new town she lives in. The town fears her grandmother and it does not help that all her friends are imaginary. Her imaginary friends are her only escape from the treatment and torture of kids at school. Evil and bad things starting happening around the town and Dylan is now worried her “Friends are real, and VERY EVIL.” Dylan needs to get to the bottom of this before she loses everything.
This was such a good read and I loved Dylans character. I was pulled right into the story and I didn’t want to leave. The only issue I had with this book was that it was not a long book and I prefer longer. I could have gotten lost in Dylans story for hours. I do recommend this YA read!
This was such a good read and I loved Dylans character. I was pulled right into the story and I didn’t want to leave. The only issue I had with this book was that it was not a long book and I prefer longer. I could have gotten lost in Dylans story for hours. I do recommend this YA read!
October 4, 2025
This YA Mystery/Thriller/Supernatural story focuses on Dylan. She is bullied by her classmates...to the point of assault and abuse. She does have some friends that she takes solace in...even if they are imaginary. However, when these some of these friends begin to possess the bullies, she needs to find a way to reign them in before really bad things happen. These imaginary friends are causing real life chaos.
This is a short read but it packs a big punch. My heart was breaking for the situation that Dylan is in. She an outcast that is being bullied and her grandmother is deemed "scary" by others and has dementia. The way the author weaves in the supernatural world of spirits and possession in a way that brought a very spooky vibe to this story. Quite an interesting story from beginning to end!
This is a short read but it packs a big punch. My heart was breaking for the situation that Dylan is in. She an outcast that is being bullied and her grandmother is deemed "scary" by others and has dementia. The way the author weaves in the supernatural world of spirits and possession in a way that brought a very spooky vibe to this story. Quite an interesting story from beginning to end!
October 11, 2025
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth is a dark, spooky YA read that mixes bullying, ghosts, and mental health in a really unique way.
Dylan Hatfield is the outcast at her high school, constantly picked on and ignored. Her only comfort comes from her imaginary friends… until she realizes they might not be imaginary at all.
When one of them takes over her bully’s body, things spiral fast into creepy, supernatural chaos.
I loved how real Dylan felt, awkward, lonely, but strong underneath it all. Her relationship with her grandmother, who has dementia, added a lot of emotion and realism too. The story starts slow but builds into a haunting, twisty ride full of eerie moments and heart.
It’s not your typical ghost story, it’s weird, emotional, and hard to put down. Perfect for anyone who likes their YA with a bit of chill and a lot of feeling.
Dylan Hatfield is the outcast at her high school, constantly picked on and ignored. Her only comfort comes from her imaginary friends… until she realizes they might not be imaginary at all.
When one of them takes over her bully’s body, things spiral fast into creepy, supernatural chaos.
I loved how real Dylan felt, awkward, lonely, but strong underneath it all. Her relationship with her grandmother, who has dementia, added a lot of emotion and realism too. The story starts slow but builds into a haunting, twisty ride full of eerie moments and heart.
It’s not your typical ghost story, it’s weird, emotional, and hard to put down. Perfect for anyone who likes their YA with a bit of chill and a lot of feeling.
October 11, 2025
This was such an incredibly creepy read! It wasn't my first book by this author but it is now definitely my favorite. Dylan is bullied nonstop, but honestly, it’s the imaginary crew that keeps her going through high school. But then, things take a dark turn when her friends start asking her to, well, possess the bullies. At first, it sounds ridiculous, but when it actually works, it’s like opening a Pandora’s box of chaos. The whole town starts falling apart, and Dylan’s left wondering if her childhood friends were ever really imaginary at all. If you're into suspense with a supernatural twist and a protagonist who’s both heartbreaking and badass, this book will keep you turning pages. Trust me, it’s a mix of creepy, emotional, and totally unexpected. You won’t see the ending coming, I promise.
September 29, 2025
3 - 3.5 Stars
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth is a YA supernatural horror story that delves into themes of bullying, loneliness, and resilience. Jordan Elizabeth crafts her story around Dylan Hatfield, a 17-year-old girl, an outcast who faces relentless bullying and isolation at school. Her only friends are imaginary…. but are they? And it is this element that really gave the story it’s intriguing layer of mystery and suspense...
The author delves into Dylan’s struggles – and paints a raw depiction of her pain as she navigates all her challenges. The supernatural elements are well-woven into the story, adding depth and intrigue without overshadowing the emotional core of the storyline.
This is a short story of only 15pages - which makes it a quick and easy read.
Happy Reading…
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth is a YA supernatural horror story that delves into themes of bullying, loneliness, and resilience. Jordan Elizabeth crafts her story around Dylan Hatfield, a 17-year-old girl, an outcast who faces relentless bullying and isolation at school. Her only friends are imaginary…. but are they? And it is this element that really gave the story it’s intriguing layer of mystery and suspense...
The author delves into Dylan’s struggles – and paints a raw depiction of her pain as she navigates all her challenges. The supernatural elements are well-woven into the story, adding depth and intrigue without overshadowing the emotional core of the storyline.
This is a short story of only 15pages - which makes it a quick and easy read.
Happy Reading…
October 11, 2025
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth
5 Star Review
This is one of the most entrancing young adult book that I have read in a very long time. The book grabbed me at page one with Dylan and her imaginary “friends”. The way that they mingle in and out of the storyline is entertaining and peeked my interest. The characters are unique and creative. I love that there is the typical “mean girl” situation, that winds up being a huge part of the mystery. I couldn’t help but to need to solve the connection of the “spirits” and the mysterious events in the small town.
Again Jordan Elizabeth has proven that she is a fantastic storyteller and writer. This is my new favorite of hers. I am definitely sharing it with my grandchildren.
5 Star Review
This is one of the most entrancing young adult book that I have read in a very long time. The book grabbed me at page one with Dylan and her imaginary “friends”. The way that they mingle in and out of the storyline is entertaining and peeked my interest. The characters are unique and creative. I love that there is the typical “mean girl” situation, that winds up being a huge part of the mystery. I couldn’t help but to need to solve the connection of the “spirits” and the mysterious events in the small town.
Again Jordan Elizabeth has proven that she is a fantastic storyteller and writer. This is my new favorite of hers. I am definitely sharing it with my grandchildren.
October 2, 2025
This book was an intriguing YA mystery story that tackled a common high school problem – bullying. The author did a great job of portraying what it is like to be a kid in school getting bullied, and the emotions that that invokes. The inclusion of the imaginary friends was a brilliant turn, and one that really make the book quite exciting to read.
The book kept me intrigued to whole way through, unsure how things might turn out. This author is one I have become recently familiar with, and each of her books brings something different. This one is a great story with some truly interesting characters.
The book kept me intrigued to whole way through, unsure how things might turn out. This author is one I have become recently familiar with, and each of her books brings something different. This one is a great story with some truly interesting characters.
October 5, 2025
Hawthorne High by Jordan Elizabeth is a young adult horror story featuring Dylan Hatfield, who is new in town, is the outcast the target of bullies at school. Her friends are imaginary and her only reprieve from the torture on her bullies. When one of Dylan’s imaginary friends possess one of her bullies, bad things start happening around town. Dylan comes to realize that her “friends” are very real and very evil. This book does an incredible job of showing the emotional side of Dylan and everything she is dealing with including her grandmother’s dementia without letting the supernatural storyline overshadow her teen angst.
October 5, 2025
I was interested from the start. Dylan is trying to make it through Senior year but it’s not easy. Between the bullying and figments of her imagination, she’s struggling. At least she has Ashley, though he has his own struggles.
Dylan knows that the way she thinks about herself isn’t positive, but she struggles finding a bright side. When the bullying doesn’t stop after school and she isn’t even safe at home thanks to social media, she’s finding it difficult to be happy anywhere.
When she learns the truth about her imaginary friends and the lengths they’re willing to go through for their own agenda, she starts to wonder what’s really been going on in this town.
Dylan knows that the way she thinks about herself isn’t positive, but she struggles finding a bright side. When the bullying doesn’t stop after school and she isn’t even safe at home thanks to social media, she’s finding it difficult to be happy anywhere.
When she learns the truth about her imaginary friends and the lengths they’re willing to go through for their own agenda, she starts to wonder what’s really been going on in this town.
October 10, 2025
"Hawthorne High" by Jordan Elizabeth is an engaging and captivating read that effortlessly pulls you into the world of high school drama and intrigue. The characters are well-developed, relatable, and full of depth, making it easy to connect with their struggles and triumphs. Elizabeth's writing style is crisp and vivid, painting a realistic picture of teenage life while weaving in suspenseful twists that keep you eagerly turning pages. The plot is both fresh and compelling, balancing heartfelt moments with unexpected surprises. This book is a delightful blend of emotion and excitement—highly recommended for anyone looking for a thought-provoking and entertaining story.
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