Jump to ratings and reviews
Rate this book

The 13th Hour

Rate this book
The Thirteenth Hour is the hour after midnight on All Hallows Eve, when Satan and his minions are most powerful—and dangerous!
Thirteen teenage vampires kidnap a thirteen-year-old-girl, Emily, and are planning to sacrifice her to Satan during The Thirteenth Hour. A successful sacrifice would increase their powers thirteen-fold.
Emily’s friend, Amanda, finds out their gruesome plan, but she knows she can’t fight the vampires alone. With the help of Hurts, a worn-out, old, private detective, they must find Emily before The Thirteenth Hour.
Will they find her? Can they save her?

120 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 18, 2019

6 people want to read

About the author

Alan Zacher

12 books133 followers
After being a "struggling" actor in Los Angeles for many years, I returned home to St. Louis and turned to writing. I have had four novels published: I'm No P. I.; A Ghoulish Good Time; Murder, Vampires and Leprechauns and For They Shall Wait. I have been a member of Goodreads for some years now, but for a year, in 2015, I was in a rehab house--my MS finally took its toll on my body. I'm back now; I know both physical and mental pain, and I need much laughter to endure it all. Hopefully, my novels do just that--give much laughter. My email address is: zacher123.mail.com. Alan

Ratings & Reviews

What do you think?
Rate this book

Friends & Following

Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!

Community Reviews

5 stars
0 (0%)
4 stars
1 (100%)
3 stars
0 (0%)
2 stars
0 (0%)
1 star
0 (0%)
Displaying 1 of 1 review
Profile Image for J.B. Richards.
Author 6 books146 followers
February 15, 2020
Overview: Looking to increase their powers thirteen-fold, thirteen teenage vampires kidnap Emily, a thirteen-year-old girl whom they plan to sacrifice to Satan during The Thirteenth Hour, on All Hallows’ Eve.

Author Alan Zacher puts his best detective, James Hurts—a familiar protagonist to his fans—on the case when Emily’s friend, Amanda, learns about the teen vampires’ gruesome plan and convinces him to launch a rescue. What ensues is a raucous and rowdy, albeit dark and dangerous mission to save Emily from certain death.

The telling of this modern story comes off like an old crime novel from the Spillane era with supernatural undertones and a passel of vampires added in for good measure. Zacher’s no-nonsense writing style flows naturally, with each sentence punctuating the one before in a bullet format, leading the reader directly into the nitty, gritty world of his grumpy, worn-out detective with the heart of gold.

One drawback to this modern story is the underlying antiquated attitudes expressed by the main protagonists toward different groups of people, such as the gay community. For example, young Amanda—a teenager—describes a young man as “WEIRD” because he’s gay, “... more boy than girl”, to which Detective Hurts—with his old-fashioned mindset—responds, “Oh, you mean queer.” Amanda then expresses minimal outrage by defending a lesbian friend, describing her as “... the best”, even though her prior statement hints that she, herself, has a general malaise toward the gay community. Authors sometimes imbue their characters with inherent prejudices to serve a purpose in a story, but this tale could have been told just as effectively without demeaning anyone due to their race, religion, or sexual orientation.

Aside from the aforementioned issue, Zacher’s characters are larger than life, his overall story contains more than a healthy dose of dark humor, and there is plenty of danger to go around. “The 13th Hour” hits the mark for its particular genre. This occult horror story is a fun and entertaining read. The author finds a way to create scenes that are, at the same time, scary as heck yet quite humorous. I recommend this read to anyone (ages 13 and up) who enjoys occult horror and detective novels with a supernatural twist.
Displaying 1 of 1 review