Patricia C. McKissack was the Newbery Honor, Coretta Scott King Award-winning author of The Dark-Thirty and Porch Lies an ALA Notable Book. She collaborated with Jerry Pinkney on Goin' Someplace Special (Coretta Scott King Award winner) and Mirandy and Brother Wind (Coretta Scott King Award winner and Caldecott Honor Book).
Personally, though this might sound pretentious, I think books for beginning readers ought to have better grammar. "And watch your garden grow" is the sentence (fragment) to which I am referring. Yes, I'm being picky, but I also feel that books that introduce children to reading should introduce children to complete sentences and punctuation. Why not teach good habits from the start?