I was interested in this book, because in the current ocean of EMP based literature in this genre, this was about the break down of democracy and society. I might have missed that this was young adult fiction, but the raging hormones of Zach, the first person character was overwhelming. It was constant when he missed his girlfriend and then went nuclear when they met again. It nearly submerged the plot about threat of the breakdown of society and potential loss of freedom and life. I liked that the Mom was the primary engine for prepping and acting, but then it was clear she was not all that good at it. The plan to bug out was hastily thrown together and executed poorly (the image I had of their overly stuffed vehicle was the truck from the Beverly Hillbillies). The parents did nothing to educate or prepare their kids so that they could pack and behave appropriately. This kids argued and complained constantly. Absolutely none of these people had a quiet voice when trying to evade the bad guys. I guess prepping a long time does not mean prepping well (please watch some Creek Stewart or something, lady). The bad government guys, trying to be mean and scary, were content to just ransack the house unannounced and take the Dad's computer and then park a black vehicle to watch them...ominously. Maybe they just need time to learn how to be properly oppressive. I felt like the author's writing style was pretty good and there were not a lot of editing errors, but the characters really let the story down. I'm kind of interested in what follows, but I don't think I can take more of Zach.