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The past is always mysterious. It neither leaves completely, nor stays fully. Who would know it better than Ayaan. He was its victim. And so was Avani. When these two crumbled souls met, they realized in their togetherness that only a broken piece can complete another. Together, they start fighting the pain of their past, feeling the bliss of the present and appreciating their lives. But just when they thought things were perfect, life played its cards. Ayaan, who was trying to put life’s pieces together, broke down when he was held responsible for a closed one's murder. And Avani… well, her life was going to take such sharp turns that she would crave for death. Alas, this was just the beginning of what destiny had planned for them! Will Avani wait for the scars to heal or will she fight with her bruised soul? Why does the truth keep going deeper as she chases it? Deeply sensitive and brutally thrilling, Till The End Of Forever is a romantic thriller that takes a dig in the dark sides of god, nature of human pain, power of selfless care, and proves how true love can make you live till the end of forever.

232 pages, Paperback

Published June 10, 2018

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Profile Image for Samidha; समिधा.
762 reviews
July 1, 2018

Review: 


2.5 Stars.


🌟🌟.5

*Note: A Review copy was provided by the author in exchange of an honest review. I would like to thank the author for the copy.*

I am always wary of Contemporary Indian Romances because they set such exceptionally high standards in terms of dating and love, which is a far cry from the truth.


Following the similar line of clichés that have been served to us before is Till the End of Forever. I can’t say that I disliked this book, because I did like some aspects. I thought the latter half of the book was very well written, and even the pacing increased as should be the case with a romance thriller. I liked how it ended, with letters and emails. Ayaan’s ideas on God and his eloquence in terms of writing his life narrative, all of these were very well handled.




“The generation of thousands of years ago didn’t know why things happened the way they did, so they believed what was written in these books.”



Unfortunately, that’s about all the good I could muster from this book. Onto the negatives now. I really did not like the characterization, almost all characters were cut outs, not dense and only there to serve a purpose. There was no depth in their tasks, and the only depth Avani and Ayaan had were their shared sense of family feuds, that they were done wrong/blamed when they were younger. That is really not a point of connection for a reader, which completely segregated me from the novel and made it more fictitious than it actually was.


The second aspect is the writing. Don’t get me wrong the writing is good but the way it is employed is not. There is a very sensual scene in the book which is glorified to no extend. I mean, if this is supposed to be second person, I am sure no human being talks like that while feeling love/lust. Then there was that fluctuating narrative point. The italics “yes he can, bitch” and “you’re a witch you will kill him someday” were so random? What was the point behind this? Self deprecation, but who was saying these things? Do they come from Ayaan’s consciousness or Avani’s?


Avani as a character was hugely problematic for me, not only was she slut shaming herself through the entire novel, she even bothers to get back with a certain someone, even after she is allegedly “in love” with someone else. Also the sexual tension within the characters was zero, straight off the bat you could tell that they were definitely not meant for each other. It was physically hurting me to watch them get on with their lives, together. Also Ayaan’s staple “everything is an illusion” is a bit ironic considering in Hinduism, Krishna is a bearer of this ideology. So, like I said before, lack of characterization was just screaming at me from across the page.


I know I’ve been harsh, but I would not rule out the novel completely. No matter what, I was invested in what happened next in the story, and as a thriller it did do its job. If only it was more psychological and gore-y and less on the romance side of things, it would’ve been a huge hit for me.


-SAMIDHA.
Profile Image for Adeena Syed.
209 reviews19 followers
July 10, 2018
I did not find the book much satisfactory. The writing style was not gripping enough, the story had loopholes and the characters were not described enough.
The book was fast paced thus missing many points. It was obvious from the starting that who the golden couple of the book will be yet they fall in love to quickly. And then the things started to happen quickly and ended in same way.
The character of Ayan was the only one with a well explained character and a background. On the other hand, Avani was irritating as she was over reactive and too easy to manipulate.
While making fiction, the author tried to put the real things into it but if you Google the verses of Bible he mentioned in the book, you will find a slight different in the lines. The topic of the speech in which the verses of Holy Books were mentioned was atheism yet there was no proper discussion in the designed speech.
The book is full of incomplete dialogues. The characters are interfered by something or other in the middle of their discussion. The best example of this is the unfinished speech of Ayan and the last story of Mr. Colton.
Overall the book was depressing and suddenly happily ever after. I won’t call it a light read as it definitely was not, with un-gripping writing style and story too scattered.
Profile Image for Anukriti Malik .
183 reviews126 followers
June 28, 2018
** A copy was provided by the author for review. .However, review is unbiased and of my own.**

"We’re the souls broken. We’re the hearts shattered. There is no face in this world that hasn’t reeked of dry tears on the strokes of midnight."


Time and again I pick up romance novels by indian authors to either be disappointed or be highly in love. Till the End Of Forever by Vivaksh Singh is the tale of how pain finds pain. Avani and Aayan have had their shares of ups and downs in their life. Pain has been a constant companion and when these two broken souls meet , they realize that a broken soul can only be fixed by another broken soul.

The synopsis looked promising but this was a highly disappointing read. The book was all over the place

First and foremost , the writing style was a let down. The narration kept shifting from Aayan to Avani without a proper mention and it was hard to keep a track of who said what. The occurrence of events were not properly explained and they abruptly started and ended.

The story was highly imaginative (despite the disclaimer that some sections are pure imagination) and not logical. Avani and Aayan fly to Venice for a vacation just days after meeting each other. The author could have shown a little more flow in the story to reach this point but the shift of events from one to another felt disconnected.

The second half of the story felt more smooth and easy going. The email conversations were smooth and I really wished the entire book was written with the same flow.

A disappointing read that could have been better if nicely executed. Can be skipped.
Profile Image for Shivangi Rawat.
113 reviews1 follower
September 26, 2018
This is a story of avani and ayaan! Both were shattered because of their past and wgat made them close waa their break down, solace, shatteredness! When they met they felt relife they were very comfortable with each other and the friendship sparks in both of them! They met by their mutual friends and started to grow together but its is saying that life is not that easy to live happy. Story is not only about love and romance it has much more to explore. Character are quite nicely weaved and plot is ok. Cover could have been more attractive. Title is apt for the content inside. There are few glitches but over all a nice read. Recommend to all avid readers.
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637 reviews43 followers
July 12, 2018
The scars of childhood chase you till death. Child is the father of man. Sigmund Freud said that in his psychoanalysis that the repressed memories and childhood trauma shape our life. Can two broken people become whole when they meet?


Ayaan is an atheist who likes to chase his dreams. His mother was killed by his father for being involved in tantric rituals. That damaged his psyche and turned him against God. Avani is an orphan who come in his contact through common friend. The boy meets girl and they fall in love. But Ayaan’s friend Livleen’s sister Luv is brutally murdered. His drunkard father Joban accuses Ayaan of her murder. He has to leave from there and later on another girl accuses him of molestation.

The story tries to cover many bases. One is atheism to which many chapters are devoted. Some arguments are forceful. The love story of Ayaan and Avani is rocky. The story moves from India to Venice and too many incidents happen. The author tried to explain everything in the end by a long monologue.

There are many inconsistencies and too many loose ends in the story. Editing could have been better. 3/ 5 stars.








Profile Image for Neha Yadav.
46 reviews
August 5, 2018
‘Till the end of forever’ by Vivaksh Singh.
It is love mystery thriller story. The cover of the book is attention seeking & the title is catchy & apt according to the plot of the story. The blurb of the book is captivating and perfectly highlighted the core of the story. The language of the story is lucid yet containing powerful words at places & the narration is fast pace descriptive with authentic necessary details which makes the book a gripping & engaging read.
The story is being circled around the two central characters Ayaan & Avani. Both of them have faced different kind of struggles & phases in their life since childhood in different aspects. But pain was the thing that was similar between these two lives and destiny tied their knots through this way only. After fate brought them together, they found comfort & peace of completeness in each other. But then destiny mocked them by showing its cruel side and incidents started to going against them. In one hand, Ayaan was being accused of a murder that tore him into pieces and on the other hand, Avani’s selfless love was there to make him steady as much as possible. But nobody of them realized or guessed that it was not the only suffering they will have to face; fate made them go through such breath taking incidents that their lives did not remain the same. Wounded soul & hidden scars had some shocking truths to reveal….
To know the entire story in detail & to go through the rest of their journey, opt for this book & dive in to this saga of love, pain, destiny & togetherness.
I loved the way author presented the incidents in sequence and connected the dots accordingly. All the emotions are being portrayed here perfectly and I was deeply engrossed in the core story, such is the attracting power of the narrating style. Revealing the turns and touching descriptions forced me to finish this in one go. I completely enjoyed this heart wrenching tale of love, fate & life and I’d love to recommend it to all the avid readers, romance lovers, and crime thriller addicts out there. Must read this is.
5/5 Stars.
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Profile Image for Swapna Peri ( Book Reviews Cafe ).
2,230 reviews82 followers
July 7, 2018
Book Title: Till the end of forever
Author: Vivaksh Singh
Format: Paperback

Book Title:
The title ‘ Till the end of forever ‘ is very emotional and hints to the reader that it’s a story of feelings.

Book Cover:
The book cover image is a beautiful photograph of a young woman’s hand holding a colourful flower bouquet. The cover gives a refreshing feeling to the reader.

Plot:
The female protagonist Avani and the male protagonist Ayaan are two young individuals with no relation to each other are introduced in the story who deal with a painful past and with a hope for a fruitful life in the future. Each of them has a different yet very painful story. Destiny makes them meet in a very dramatic way which the author has visualised in a fantastic way but the emotion could have been carried in a more matured manner. The unexpected twist about a friend’s murder creates more ripples of pain for Ayaan. What’s the story behind the murder and how does he deal with it? What effect it has on his relationship with Avani? How does Avani react? To know more, read the book.

What I like:
1. The storyline
2. The author’s visualisation of two pained hearts mending each other

What I didn’t like:
1. Unrealistic scenes
2. Too much imagination
3. The haphazard shift of scenes and narration
4. An unstable story in the backdrop

Characters:
The characters are good.

Narration:
The confusion in narration among the characters is a turn off while reading. A better plotting of the characters and their voice could have been taken more care.

Language & Grammar:
Easy language is used, but there are many errors related both linguistic and vocabulary are found. A dedicated editing would have helped the story reading with much interest.

My Final Verdict: After a long wait, the reading has led to much disappointment. Hope the author would take care of the mentioned drawbacks in his future works.

Book Title: 3/5
Book Cover: 4/5
Plot: 2/5
Characters:2/5
Narration: 2/5
Language & Grammar: 2/5

Final Rating: 3/5
Profile Image for Lavanya Rajanala.
71 reviews6 followers
June 26, 2018
Till The End Of Forever by Vivaksh Singh is Love mystery. Even this being debut novel of the author, he crafted the plot so well. I finished it one go. Characterization is perfect. Full of twists and turns which will make it difficult for you to keep the book aside without finishing it. Cover is so beautiful and title can’t be more apt than this.

The story starts When Avani met Ayaan, she knew he was deeply bruised by the past; just like her. When Ayaan met Avani, he knew she was looking for peace; just like him. The bond of pain brought them together, and one broken piece completed another.

But just when the candles of serenity were lit, it rained. Ayaan was left shattered when he was held responsible for a friend’s murder. And when Avani tried to hold his pieces together, it gashed into her flesh. Alas, this was just the beginning. Just the winds before the hurricane of spine-chilling mysteries were going to blow her apart. .

Will Avani wait for the scars to heal or will she fight with her bruised soul? Why does the truth keep going deeper as she chases it? .

Deeply sensitive and brutally thrilling, Till the End Of Forever is a romantic thriller that takes a dig in the dark sides of god, nature of human pain, power of selfless care, and something that won’t last till the end of forever.

Verdict : I highly recommend this book. It worth each penny you spend on it
Profile Image for Vidhya Thakkar.
1,087 reviews140 followers
July 6, 2018
Till the end of forever is a story of Avni and Ayaan. It's about their journey full of ups and downs. will they be one? will there be forever?

Firstly, I loved the cover and the title of the book. It's attractive.  I loved how the author set the plot. It's interesting full of twists and turns. The narration of the story is good, however, then there were many places in which it becomes getting puzzling. I loved how the story started and yes the climax is brilliant. The pace of the story is a little slow. but then as it proceeds, there were twists coming. The characters that the author made were good. I felt bad for Avni. There were many characters, and each individual had their personal significance.

 I loved Luv's and Livleen’s characters the most. Specially Luv's character. I loved How the author described the beauty of Jagah. As the story was proceeding it was getting more complicated. 

There were various themes which we witness in the book. Love, friendship, relationship, struggle and lots of suspense. But there were places where something was missing in the story. The language was simple and connecting. It's a story with strong characters, good plot and crisp narration, but then it could have been much better and less complicated.

Overall, its a light, smooth and quick read.

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57 reviews7 followers
September 24, 2018
I received this book for an honest review. So here it is...The story is based on a couple going through the pain from their past and coping with it. When they meet, they find themselves similar and develop the “bond of pain”. The story is well written yet confusing at some part. The character of Ayan is smart and knowledgeable while Avani is over reactive and too sensitive. The couple fall in love way too quickly for my taste. Avani needed to complete her studies; so she goes back to her hostel and the couple decides not to talk by any means as it might affect Avani’s studies. Seriously? I mean who does that, not talking for six months straight?
There are certain loopholes in the story. Though the writing is simple, it failed to hold my attention for too long. There was no certain plot. There were things that I wanted the character to talk about but they were too busy “not talking” to each other. In the beginning, few chapters were bright and had a proper story but the book from part two was confusing, poorly written and depressing.
There was a cute kind of romance but the thriller part was not good enough. Realest quote from the book ; “ However, if everything everyone wants gets fulfilled, there would remain no difference between reality and dream. And he knew he had to accept the reality, because reality is not a choice.” 😣😭
Profile Image for Heena.
52 reviews3 followers
August 16, 2018
Till The End Of Forever is a story of Avani and Ayaan, who met through a common friend. Both shared pain from the past, which connected them.

Frankly saying, I expected much from this book. But, it disappointed me a bit. I didn't find the story much interesting.

What I liked about the book is :1) The book cover 2)The imaginary place 'Jagah'-I like imaginary places as it shows the place you like, you imagine … that's the best thing 3)Hold of the mysterious part 4)Friendship.


Overall Rating: 3.5
Profile Image for Sangeeta Paik.
161 reviews9 followers
September 2, 2018
Book-till the end of forever
Author-vivaksh Singh
Format-paperback
It's a debute book by the author vivaksh Singh.it's a love mystery and a romantic thriller.
Cover is simply beautiful and title can't be opt than this.
The story starts with the main character avaani and ayaan. They both come closer.their bond of pain brought them together. The sudden death of luv their friend shattered their life completely. Avani tried to held them together but luck make them apart.
All the character is well described but the over imaginary thing which I don't like much about the book.
Verdict- I read some short story of the same author on Facebook timeline but this read made me disappoint.
Profile Image for Sujit Srinivasan.
192 reviews35 followers
October 23, 2018
Cover and Title

A colorful cover of a women holding a bouquet of the violet colored flowers which is pleasing to the eye. The title "Till the End of Forever" is different and heartening,

Plot

Two young individuals Avani and Ayaan have their own painful past. But, both of hopes of a beautiful future. Both of them meet together as designated by fate. As emotions flow through the lives of both the characters. Ayaan's life is impacted by the murder of his friend. What impact the murder makes in his life and how he copes up with it and the impact it makes on his relationship.

Language and Vocabulary

Simple language is used throughout the book which makes it a wonderful read for beginners and speaking about the vocabulary, I could notice grammatical errors in the book which was mainly due to inadequate editing works.

What I liked
The plot of the book overall is beautiful.
Picturization of the characters in the book

What I didn't like
A non-viable story-line at some places of the book.
An irregular shifts in the narration pattern between the characters of the book
Profile Image for  Ananya thefoodandbooklife.
303 reviews18 followers
June 28, 2018
Till the End of Forever begins with two girls on their vacation, planning to spend three days with one of their family. Here Avani meets Ayaan, a kindred soul like her and they develop a special bond. Their dark pasts threaten to overwhelm them but they find solace in each other's company. The author tried to add an element of mystery by not being very specific about the dialogues. This continued for the rest of the book with a lot of scenes ending without a definite conclusion. The happenings are left to the reader's interpretation when the same scene continues a few pages later. While this could be a result of trying to condense a long story into a commercially favorable length, the onus of making the story understandable lies both on the author as well as the editorial team.

What I liked about the book was Ayaan's speech where he compared religion and evolution. There were a lot of valid points and the argument was well structured. However, grammatical errors like "his face was untrimmed" or "buzz boy" for 'busboy' were difficult to accept. Inaccuracies such as "[...]his cell phone was on the table and he was staring at it restlessly, as if waiting for someone to pop out of it" followed by the sentence "his cell phone was in his hands and head on the table" were jarring. A better job at proofreading and editing could have avoided these blunders along with mistakes like not matching the right pronoun for the gender. All in all, a confusing story and a poorly edited book that certainly requires more pages to gently ease the reader into its many folds. If the author had concentrated on just a couple of the twists that he has come up with, the book would have been easier to read.
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July 11, 2018
‘Till the end of forever’ by Vivaksh Singh.
I got interested into this book only because of two things. One, the title of this book, because I wanted to know what is still remains or if anything remains till the end of forever; and the second is, after reading the blurb. That blurb caught my entire attention. Both are perfect for this book.
Even the cover is eye catching too, and simple soothing design is carrying the main noticing element of the story. Simple language, effortless fast pace narration and some authentic words made the book a hooking and interesting read. Scenes and events are very descriptive and visualizing in a way or the other. Most importantly, characters in the story are portrayed in a highly connecting and relatable way. I never felt that I am reading about them, I felt that I am seeing them and knowing them personally with time and events. The main two central characters of the story is Ayaan and Avani.
Especially, the Love & Crime Mystery Thriller theme of the story is another reason to choose this book among others.
The main story revolves around the two characters I mentioned earlier and it includes lots of other emotional and breathtaking events and characters surrounding them that have given their journey the shape of this book. Ayaan & Avani were such persons whom we can call the constant companions of pain. Because, either of them had nothing in their respective lives thus they could be considered as ‘happy’. Be it any aspect, like, childhood and innocence, parents, relationships (I am combining both)- in any matter, their fate kept them on the tougher side and they had seen their lives the hardest way possible. Their heart and soul did pass through many such situations that left them broken & scattered only. But it was not that there was no optimism. In such situation, fate made them crossed each other’s path and very soon after their interaction, they started to realize that both have passed one kind of similar things in their lives and that is ‘Pain’. They started to find solace in each other by wiping away each other scars and help each other to heal and complete their half. Their struggles were different but depth of pain was not. This depth of pain brought them closer and made their bond tighter.
Things were going smoothly, but when was life so blessed to them? Since the beginning they learnt to get used to with scars, so how it could be different this time? Destiny took its troll and made Ayaan faced such thing that he was least expected to or prepared for. Accusation of a murder was not an easy thing to deal with for any person, and that too if it includes a friend! Ayaan was scattered and broken into pieces and found no way around him. But he was not alone this time, because Avani was there for him to heal him by composing his broken soul. Little did she know that, it was nothing compared to what was awaiting their destiny in future…. ‘Hurt’ and ‘Devastated’ will be too little words to explain what her soul faced after that. But was it the end of everything? No, it certainly not. Destiny made her face such unbearable truths that can alter the course of life itself and the fate as well… Sometimes, the deepest scars hide the darkest truth; it may not be visible, but it is there for sure…
I will not reveal the core suspense here. All I can say that do pick your copy of this unputdownable book now to know their entire journey, their fate & whatever destiny has in store for them and to know what it means to stay till the end of forever…
I got myself engrossed and hooked in reading this book and especially, it was a very emotional roller coaster ride for me. There were lots of phases where tears never stopped flowing from eyes and sever lines pierced through my heart. Scenes in the beginning have been portrayed in such a way by the author that I was touched by the descriptions completely. The thrill and revelations in exact time kept me at the edge of my chair and I literally gulped the core extract of the story. The twists, the touching events, the pain, the separation, the tears, the scars, the silent screams, the love, the bonding, the tolerance ability, the never give up mentality, the optimistic nature, the different and other side of God, life and the core of atheism, the deep dive into the darker phase, and ultimately, what life is all about- everything is portrayed and clear here evidently. Inspiration and to move ahead in life and find the exact significance of Happiness and how to overcome the deepest scars of soul to find the meaning of forever and eternity, is what the story contains all over.
It is certainly a must read for every romance, crime mystery, dark thriller lovers and every avid reader.
I would like to rate it- 5/5 stars.
189 reviews3 followers
June 26, 2018
BOOK DETAILS

Title: Till The End of Forever

Author: Vivaksh Singh

Paperback: 232 pages

Publisher: Srishti Publishers & Distributors; First edition (10 June 2018)

Language: English

ISBN-10: 9387022218

ISBN-13: 978-9387022218

Package Dimensions: 19.5 x 13 x 3.1 cm

BLURB

We have lived a death everyday

It’s time we live like death

No sorrow. No jitters. No trauma

Just you, I and peace.

When Avani met Ayaan, she knew he was deeply bruised by the past; just like her. When Ayaan met Avani, he knew she was looking for peace; just like him. The bond of pain brought them together, and one broken piece completed another.

But just when the candles of serenity were lit, it rained. Ayaan was left shattered when he was held responsible for a friend’s murder. And when Avani tried to hold his pieces together, it gashed into her flesh. Alas, this was just the beginning. Just the winds before the hurricane of spine-chilling mysteries were going to blow her apart.

Will Avani wait for the scars to heal or will she fight with her bruised soul? Why does the truth keep going deeper as she chases it? .

Deeply sensitive and brutally thrilling, Till The End of Forever is a romantic thriller that takes a dig in the dark sides of god, nature of human pain, power of selfless care, and something that won’t last till the end of forever.



REVIEW

Cover - The beautiful cover of the book speaks a lot. Purple flower decor represents success, dignity and pride above all. With these, it conveys a message of admiration and accomplishment.

Title - The name of the book fits perfectly with the story which Author wants to convey to all the readers. Till eternal, uncountable and admirable.

Plot -  The story counts with the protagonists Avani and Ayaan where both have had a shattered pieces of their hearts from the past. In this story, Avani is an orphan girl where her love in the past has broken into pieces and in case of Ayaan, he has been accused by the law for his mother's murder. 

Through the story, you will find out whether he has already killed his mother?

Why did Avani and Ayaan fell for each other?

Will they sustain everything and win the hearts of each other?

Or will they fall apart?



Characters - Characters and protagonists are created strongly and portrayed well according to the story demand. 



Pace - The story narration was easy and systematic and the thing which calculates the pace is the font and its size, this thing was calculative and well planned. 



Language - Simple and easy format with no errors. Every part was crisp and flawless. Constructive and formulated statements, phrases and quoted lines did fantastically. 



RATINGS

Cover - 4/5

Title - 4/5

Characters - 4/5

Plot - 4/5

Pace - 5/5

Narration - 4.5/5

Overall - 4.5/5
Profile Image for Sumith  Chowdhury.
831 reviews23 followers
July 8, 2018
Till the end of forever

Cover looks beautiful. It has been designed skeptically, keeping in mind specifically the readers who prefer a dark thriller book.
Title is interesting & has been selected in a beautiful manner.
Theme is versatile & the book talks about religion, love, pain, separation, trust, bond, joy, happiness, family, relationships, life, nature, sadness,

Now coming to the main point. I won't talk about story or plot or anything like that. What I would like to discuss is whether this book is worth picking up & investing your time or not? Now let me begin with the analysis one by one.

Though the plot, story & everything seemed okay for me, but it could have been a lot better considering the way the cover & title have been designed & pickup up respectively. However, it lacked certain things which made it hard for me to recover my pace to finish the book. The lackadaisical approach to thriller & unnecessary overdragging of issues. Also, the monotonous way of storytelling & narration just to drag the suspense was what made it difficult for me to decipher the context & which made it rather difficult for me to finish the book.

Now coming to language, it's simple & easy to understand. Can be easily read through by any reader. Certainly the book has a lot of minor errors & unwanted mistakes across various sections from time to time. What makes the matters worse are the typesetting errors which we can encounter often hitherto in the book. Even the grammatical errors aren't worth ignoring, added with the nonchalant pace of the plot makes things ever more worse. Basically, a thorough editing & proofreading could have done the trick. It seems the book was published with haphazardly & done anyhow without much research or whatsoever which resulted specifically in the imbalance plot & storyline which jumps at places.

Narration accompanied by dialogues, quotes lacked the requisite punch needed to make it a better choice to read. Even the synchronisation & sequential analysis was amiss. At the first impression, it may look exciting or tempting, but as the reader dwells deep within the book, it makes him realise, how wrong he was! At times, I just regret my decision to grab this book.

To be honest, I was a lot excited to read this & was looking forward to learn something new from this book due to all the hype everywhere & also the newsletters which came associated in the descriptions. Anyway my bad, not everything which is shown as good doesn't necessarily have to be good. However, I must say I'm rather disappointed.

Nevertheless, there's nothing new about this book. A typical bollywood parody just enhanced with a set of poor twists & turns to prolong the story of the book.
I won't recommend this book to anyone, unless the drawbacks & mistakes that I've highlighted have been worked & rectified without much delay.
Profile Image for Anshul Goel.
34 reviews
July 9, 2018
This book is a story about love, lust, commitment, friendship, family, and career. Avani is Luv’s friend. They both study together in the same college and this vacation Luv decided to take her friend Avani along with her to her home in Jagah. Luv’s brother Liveleen and friend Ayaan come to the station to pick them up. Ayaan and Avani soon become friends and they discovered that they both had one thing in common i.e. they both were in pain and broken beyond repair because of their terrible past. They had a special bond between them, the bond of pain. This made them like each other and eventually they were in love and felt complete. The author has hurriedly described the events which took place which were not appropriately timed. The plot of the book was hazy. The author has not properly executed the events which took place in the book. It has been mentioned in the book that Avani has skipped her college for days and went to Venice with Ayaan whom she knew only for a handful of days. I don’t know how she agreed to go with him! Another thing which made me wonder was that how could Avani stay with Ayaan without confronting her for the rape he committed in the story! The book has innumerous twists and turns. The author has used names of locations to be as common hindi nouns like “Jagah”, “Illaka” amongst others which could have been better thought of. It truly is an roller coaster ride. The book could have been made better if the events in the book were properly executed and timed according to reference. Overall the book was not good but okay. Also the book hasn’t been properly edited and proof read. But being a debut book it was a fine attempt.
I recommend these books to those who wish to have a roller coaster ride without asking much from the plot. It is a quick read and the author has written some good lines which will touch your heart.
22 reviews
July 20, 2018
Quote: Mysteries are the darkest thing something as bright as love can produce

Story: Till the end of forever by Vivaksh singh is an emotional ride of sadness, pain, anger selflessness and love
Avani is an orphan with a painful past. She always wanted to settle in life and live her life to fullest..
The story begins when Avani came to a vacation with her friend Luvleen, where she meets a protogonist an atheist Ayaan anand who is with a painful past searching for peace. As both had a painful pasts they become close to each other with the same bond pain. They found themselves healing from their wounds with their togetherness..
The story takes a turn when Ayaan became responsible for Luvleen's murder, so they tried changing their place and here begins many twists and turns unwraping the story..
Why is Ayaan anand responsible for Luvleen's murder?
Was Ayaan really a cold blooded murderer?
What happened to Ayaan and Avani when they changed the location?
Did Ayaan succeded marrying Avani?
To unrevail the mystery grab your copy now!

Review:The cover page is so attractive and beautiful and tittle is apt to the story. Author narrated the story in a different way unlike all authors. He tried introducing all genres in one book with his literary skills. The language is simple and lucid. The characters in the story are well defined, each role having its importance in the story grabing readers attention towards the book. The twists and turns in story makes you finish it in one go.. I wondered when I came to know that author wrote this story when he was seventeen..The story is so good..this doesn't seem to be his debut novel. Loved his style of narration.
A must read for those who loves romantic thrillers.
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80 reviews
July 30, 2018
We have lived a death everyday
It’s time we live like death
No sorrow. No jitters. No trauma
Just you, I and peace.

Romance, suspense and thriller are highly popular genres. And what if a book is the amalgamation of all three of them. Yes, this book "Till the end of forever" by vivaksh singh is one such book.

Story opens with the meeting of Ayaan and Avni through the common friend Luvleen. Both of them had a really painful past and in the very first meeting they got to know that both of them are searching for peace. Later this bond of pain they share brought them together. But life starts getting Topsy-turvy for Ayaan when he was held responsible for the murder of his friend Luvleen. Later some unwanted and unpredictable circumstances made them leave that place and they visited many places like Seher, kasba, ilaaka and even to Venice but all they got is bad luck and sadness. They got seperated because of very sad lies. Will they ever get together? What was their dark past continuously poking them? How can the bond of pain bring two souls together?

This book is a mix of emotions. The plot is very good with many unexpected twists and revelations. It is a quick read as well as a fast paced novel. Narration is quite nice but sometimes characters confuses me. Author uses simple words to describe such deep feelings. Climax was totally unexpected.

Ayaan was shown as a very philosophical person and people who like such things will definitely love his character. I personally didn't like any of the character in this book and at the same time didn't hate anyone of them.

Overall this book is very good read, definitely more than what I thought. Blurb was great, plot was crisp, characters were good, narration is quick. In short this book is a must read.
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451 reviews5 followers
August 7, 2018

Blurb-

When Avani met Ayaan, she knew he was deeply bruised by the past; just like her. When Ayaan met Avani, he knew she was looking for peace; just like him. The bond of pain brought them together, and one broken piece completed another.

But just when the candles of serenity were lit, it rained. Ayaan was left shattered when he was held responsible for a friend’s murder. And when Avani tried to hold his pieces together, it gashed into her flesh. Alas, this was just the beginning. Just the winds before the hurricane of spine-chilling mysteries were going to blow her apart. .

Will Avani wait for the scars to heal or will she fight with her bruised soul? Why does the truth keep going deeper as she chases it? .

Deeply sensitive and brutally thrilling, Till the End Of Forever is a romantic thriller that takes a dig in the dark sides of god, nature of human pain, power of selfless care, and something that won’t last till the end of forever. .

Review-

Religion, Ayaan, and Love.

I loved the combination of this trio. I loved the way author has penned down this complete tale filled with thrill, romance and friendship. Sometimes the memories of past haunt us in such a way that night go sleepless. Pain sometimes needs a support and in this 2 soul who were carrying pain in along with them in their journey choose to come out of their pain by falling in love with each other. This book would make your nights go sleepless until and unless you reach the end part of this amazing book.

I believe that a little proper editing would have made this book a better read. The cover page of this book is different and attractive from that of other romantic tales.

Overall ratings- 4.2/5

Narration- 4/5

Characterization- 5/5

Plot- 4.5/5

Title- 4/5

Cover- 4/5

Blurb- 3.5/5
4 reviews
October 30, 2018
"It shows up in all promises
But happens ,l guess,never
A myth on the layer of reality
It's a thing called forever"

So these are few lines from the novel which describe it's title at it's best, had it been the whole novel , it might not fall flat. So I really liked the idea of the novel which was I think really relateable to every second person who is quite introverted in his /her life. The set up of novel is like every other Bollywood screenplay where girl meets boy , & eventually fall in love ( expected as it is a romantic thiller) then suddenly mishap happpens & things become complicated....
But actually isn't it basic structure of any other romantic thiller.In my opinion I think it lacked a bit of originality, in the first half the writing is slow paced & small moments also serve beautifully in first part( that's what readers crave for in a romance novel) .we do understand the theory of "bond of pain" which is quite acceptable in first half but gradually it becomes quite exaggerated in the second half .The character were not explained at times but that's okay because it's just to maintain a thrill .

When coming to second part the whole setup was turned topsy turvy & all romance takes a back seat & comparatively is fast paced but what I found was all thing were dramatic & lacked reality.As Ayaan says "every is a illusion", but himself contradict at times , also I find the title is also not really justified but that's complete fine as it depends on person to person .Apart from that there is nothing you could leave it in novel .So it's definitely a one time read .I give it ⭐⭐⭐⭐/5 stars.
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168 reviews18 followers
July 2, 2018
I'm not a fan of romance novels but that doesn't mean I don't read them occasionally and I do know how they should be, most of the times.

At first I thought this book is going to be superb as the ratings were so high and well it started off good too. But just after reading one chp I knew this was not for me.

Frankly speaking, this book was all over the place. So many characters but no development and even no base. The story is about of course the two broken souls but whenever I read them, they seemed perfectly delusional and unreachable. They were so far away from my reach that I didn't even get a thing they were about.

Now, the imagination of the author was good. The book took place somewhere from his imagination but again why it was not sculptured properly? Why that place had so many things from different aspects when clearly it shouldn't.

There are many things which were totally umm, unnecessary. Many things that have missing pieces. I would've enjoyed the book if it was atleast written with a pace but it was also missing. One time this was happening and the other time that. And that just made me drop the book at a time.

Now, what's good is author can write good and his writing skills are somewhat polished just need to have more insight.

Not gonna recommend the book but you're free to know it yourself. :P
81 reviews4 followers
July 4, 2018
Name- Till the End of Forever
Author- Vivaksh Singh
Genre- Romance, Thriller
Pages- 220
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.'Till the End of Forever' by Vivaksh Singh is the story of the life, love and heartbreaks of Avani and Ayaan and how they face it.

The story begins with Avani visiting her friend Luvleen's house to spend holidays. There she meets Ayaan who is the best friend of Livleen, Luvleen's brother. Avani's bruised past and Ayaan's search for peace gets their life intertwined and they confide in each other. Everything is all roses till the time Luvleen is murdered and the blame falls on Ayaan. Things become worse when Ayaan finds himself alone in the vicious circle and is unable to prove his innocence. The story follows his journey to prove his innocence and reunite with Avani.

The book is very fast paced. A little more details in the first half would have added to the experience. But everything is very well sorted and explained in the end. The climax is totally unexpected. The writing is simple but kept me engaged. The twists and turns took my breath away. I love how the author has created an entirely imaginary world by giving the places names such as Jagah, Ilaaka and Seher. Ayaan's philosophical character is sure to attract readers who like philosophy. The book is an amazing reader for those who like fast-paced novels. For me, it is definitely a promising work by Singh.
2 reviews
August 7, 2018
Till the end of forever by Vivaksh Singh is a romantic thriller. It's definitely not my genre still the cover and blurb made me pick this book. Much to my relief, plot didn't disappointed me. The story started little slow but it gained the pace later on. Characterization is to the point. Language used is simple and easily understandable. And the way male protagonist character portrayed in different shades made the plot a thrilling read. The story will it's twists and turns didn't let me put it down. Finished in one go.

Blurb :

When Avani met Ayaan she knew that he was deeply bruised by the past just like her. when Ayaan met Avani he knew she was looking for peace just like him. The Bond of pain brought them together and broken piece completed another.

But just when the candles of serenity lit, it rained. Ayaan was left shattered when he was held responsible for a friend's murder and when Avani try to hold his pieces together it gashed into her flesh. Alas this was just the beginning, just this winds before the hurricane of spine chilling mysteries were going to blow her apart .

Will Avani wait for the scars to heal or will she fight with her bruised soul? why does the truth keep going deeper as she chases it?

Final verdict :

It's a 3.8 star for me. If you are a reader of romantic thrillers this book won't disappoint you.
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11 reviews1 follower
June 20, 2018
This story has a plethora of emotions – sadness, pain, anger, selflessness and of course LOVE, a love so strong that’ll last ’till the end of forever’ or even more. The author has also dedicated a portion of the story to highlight the unscrupulous deeds that happen under the facade of religion. There is also a section dedicated to atheism. The story has so many unexpected twists and turns that it’ll leave you breathless. A perfect mixture of romance and thrill, this book is going to take you through the roller coaster ride of Avani and Ayaan’s life.

This is one of the few books by a debut author that I couldn’t find any faults in. The language is lucid, characters are well defined. At no point does the plot drag or goes off track. Though a lot is going on in the story which is merely 220 pages long, everything wraps up beautifully in the end. Also, the cover is very pretty and instantly catches your eye.

I daresay the author is already at par with the other established Indian authors of this genre. Wishing him all the success for his future endeavors.

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Author 7 books14 followers
July 20, 2018
Filled with tons of beautiful lines, which would make the readers pause, think and reflect on the words that are vividly etched on the pages of the book, "Till the End of Forever" by Vivaksh Singh is definitely a page turner.

The story begins with a spine-chilling scene that keeps haunting the readers, hooking them to the story by hinting at an upcoming misfortune.

"Till the End of Forever" by Vivaksh Singh is a romantic thriller, where two souls bruised by their past meets and the bond of pain promises to bind them together. But just when the two broken pieces began to complete each other, their friend gets murdered, and Ayaan is held responsible for the same. Surrounded by guilt and mystery, the story begins to take a fateful turn from there.

Filled with suspense and several mysterious twists and turns, "Till the End of Forever" is one of those unputdownable books that keeps the readers glued till the last line. But at the same time, it is one of those beautiful books that makes one wish that the story never ends.

The magnificent book cover, along with vivid descriptions, outstanding similes, brilliant presentation of certain psychological facts accompanied by the juggling of words, makes one marvel at the book and is sure to make one fall in love.
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105 reviews4 followers
August 13, 2018
The initial lines in the blurb made me to read the book and they were,
"We have lived a death everyday
It's time we live like death
No sorrow. No jitters. No truma.
Just you, I and peace"

"Till the end of forever" is debut novel by Vivaksh Singh and it is ficiton book which has touch of romantic thrill in it. The title and cover of book is appreciable. The cover literally gives the idea that the book is romantic as it includes a girl holding flowers in her hand. But, as go on reading the book takes you to something different story. The story is about characters named Ayaan and Avani who had sad and painful past. They both were seeking for peace in their lives. As they shared their past stories to each other they developed a kind of bond in between them. Due to circumstances Ayaan held responsible for murder of his friend. What happened next to Ayaan? Will there be peace comes in both lives of Avani and Ayaan?
The language used in the book is lucid and grammar is simple. Regardless few errors which I didn't liked in the book but it is debut novel everything is upto the mark in the book. The plot, presentation and writing is easy to understand which is pageturner. The dark story keeps a reader hooked in the story until the very end.
My final rating- 4/5 stars
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140 reviews4 followers
August 15, 2018
‘Till the End of Forever’ by Vivaksh Singh is a romantic thriller starring Avani and Ayaan, two broken souls trying to fix each other’s pain, and both unknown of the other’s mysterious past. This book takes a dig into the dark sides of human nature. Destiny brought them together and soon they learnt that one was incomplete without the other. Just when they thought their life was now sorted, life took a toll on them. Ayaan was accused of a murder he wasn’t responsible for. Since then, their life turned upside down. While Ayaan was engulfed in guilt, Avani hid his scars and stood beside Ayaan to keep a hold onto him. After facing a lot of difficulties and struggling through them, they bring their life back on track. And when finally they believed they can be happy, life pushed them into intolerable levels of hardships.

I do not want to disclose the whole plot of the story here. All I can say is that you would find a lot of twists and turns in this story. And some might even seem to you a little too imaginative.
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148 reviews1 follower
July 24, 2018
The story encoded with love, faith, misrie , fantasy and brutal truth.

Till the End of Forever' by Vivaksh Singh is The story describes different shades of life like the pain, betrayal, anger, regrets of life . I think author has done a great work. The lecture by Ayaan is one example of excellence. His logic is perfectly fine in some scenes, but in some cases there is a little bit more imagination or fiction. This book captured my attention and wouldn’t let it go. The story begins with a spine-chilling scene that keeps haunting the readers, hooking them to the story by hinting at an upcoming misfortune. It is a romantic thriller, Filled with suspense and several mysterious twists and turns, "Till the End of Forever" is one of those unputdownable books that keeps the readers glued till the last line. Though the plot is simple , it takes the readers on a steer of emotions. Good characterization, lucid language , attractive cover and a simple narration makes the novel a nice one time read. allover it's a must read book.
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