I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Okay, so.
The story itself has some good foundation and good bones - the idea is VERY sound. A woman falls in love with a guy who then becomes a ghost so they need to overcome that if they want to be together.
That's all well and good, but there's a lot of additional plotholes along the way.
Plotlines seem to just disappear into thin air occasionally, or things are mentioned once but never again after, and the main character isn't exactly the most likeable person either, which is a shame. Mary HAD the makings of a really great character, but she was basically a pushover who let Paul boss her around and couldn't stand up for herself no matter what, not until the end in any event.
And the kicker here is that she KNOWS all the time that Paul is basically a creep and a possessive idiot, yet her excuse is that he's nice to her.
No, woman, no. That's him luring you in, how stupid can you get?
But aside from that, my issue with the book is more the writing style and the grammatical errors all around. I think it must be because this was an ARC not a published copy, because as I understand it, the author is an English major, which means they have a good grasp on the language, but there were errors in the use of tense, gender occasionally, words were missing, or parts of sentences would be missing. The editor had their work cut out for them, I think.
Also, I don't know why, but a lot of what was said or done in this book reminded me strongly of what you might see on television, in a rom-com, where things abruptly end or turn around, or someone says something and then the action or sequence cuts because it's such a witty line. I don't know if it was intentional, but it came across as a little bit weak in terms of the written medium, to me at least.
So all in all, this HAD potential, but between a lukewarm main character, the fact that you keep getting the feeling people use English like foreigners would, and different problems with the text makes me think I won't be picking up the sequel to this story.
It's a good story, don't get me wrong, just not great.