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Mated to the Elites
Jennifer was just your average young woman, she was loving her life, the only thing she wanted was someone to fix her non-existant love life. Then one day she meets her mate, and another mate, and another! How is she supposed to handle having three mates? But trouble is around the corner. Can her mates protect her from what is to come?
This is an erotic short story. This title contains erotic situations, graphic language, explicit scenes, and multiple sex partners.
This is an erotic short story. This title contains erotic situations, graphic language, explicit scenes, and multiple sex partners.
81 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 20, 2017
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May 10, 2017
3.5 stars!
May 9, 2017
Not bad,not great.....
I want to be helpful ,I know writing this and putting yourself out there isn't easy and I applaud that ... Good for Ms.Winters for taking this 1st step,your further soo many others are...
And I Love a good ménage rreverse harem type story where any and all the romantic and sexual attention is in the woman, but (yeah, bet you saw that coming) there just wasn't enough story here...
Jennifer goes from clueless and kinda hungry for a mate to having 3 mates falling in her hard and ready in what felt like a heartbeat , no real build up at all and as much as I enjoy a good sex scene in a story , ( clean in a romance can get me running the other direction ) but if there's more sex than story ? If you can read a story and know there wouldn't be hardly anything left to it if all the sex scenes were removed (like here) then something's not quite right... and what happened at the end ,w/the other guy ?
Sorry,but I saw that going a mile away just like you did my but at the beginning of my review...
Please keep trying,I think you've got a good imagination and I hope to see more of your work,you've really hit a sweet spot of mine w/the while ménage/reverse harem where the woman gets all the loving ... but need more story developed around them ...
But congrats on getting this far!!!
Good for you !!!
I want to be helpful ,I know writing this and putting yourself out there isn't easy and I applaud that ... Good for Ms.Winters for taking this 1st step,your further soo many others are...
And I Love a good ménage rreverse harem type story where any and all the romantic and sexual attention is in the woman, but (yeah, bet you saw that coming) there just wasn't enough story here...
Jennifer goes from clueless and kinda hungry for a mate to having 3 mates falling in her hard and ready in what felt like a heartbeat , no real build up at all and as much as I enjoy a good sex scene in a story , ( clean in a romance can get me running the other direction ) but if there's more sex than story ? If you can read a story and know there wouldn't be hardly anything left to it if all the sex scenes were removed (like here) then something's not quite right... and what happened at the end ,w/the other guy ?
Sorry,but I saw that going a mile away just like you did my but at the beginning of my review...
Please keep trying,I think you've got a good imagination and I hope to see more of your work,you've really hit a sweet spot of mine w/the while ménage/reverse harem where the woman gets all the loving ... but need more story developed around them ...
But congrats on getting this far!!!
Good for you !!!
March 22, 2017
Short and Smutty
Jennifer is a werewolves who has thinks she has 3 mates, which is unheard of! What follows this discovery is a lot of sex. That's the main thing that's happening here. If you're looking for a nice plot with fleshed out character then you're going to be upset. This book is quick and sexy with a couple of action scenes thrown in for good measure. Now there are a few grammar mistakes (look at the title) but it's not overwhelming and annoying.
If you're interested in a short, sexy, reverse harem story, then this is for you.
Jennifer is a werewolves who has thinks she has 3 mates, which is unheard of! What follows this discovery is a lot of sex. That's the main thing that's happening here. If you're looking for a nice plot with fleshed out character then you're going to be upset. This book is quick and sexy with a couple of action scenes thrown in for good measure. Now there are a few grammar mistakes (look at the title) but it's not overwhelming and annoying.
If you're interested in a short, sexy, reverse harem story, then this is for you.
March 22, 2017
Story was rushed
Was not able to get to know any of the men. Too many details about mundane and tedious tasks. No real conflict other than heroine getting attacked a couple of times and her men running to the rescue. I skipped over a lot in this book, just really couldn't get into it.
Was not able to get to know any of the men. Too many details about mundane and tedious tasks. No real conflict other than heroine getting attacked a couple of times and her men running to the rescue. I skipped over a lot in this book, just really couldn't get into it.
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