She Rode the Bus is the story of Kaeshon “Kay” Anthony, an aspiring rapper walking a fine line between the music he writes about and the streets that provide his inspiration. Kay, after being on the issuing end of a car accident, is forced to temporarily use public transportation. That is when he meets a college student named Ronni, a gorgeous, yet guarded, Latina with an infectious smile, golden-brown eyes and penchant for sarcasm.
Veronica “Ronni” Tomez is in an abusive relationship, which she finds herself cemented only for the love of a little Melissa, her fiancé’s daughter. After the unfortunate accident that brought them together, Ronni finds a persistent Kay hard to get rid of. Each encounter bringing a new revelation that opens her eyes to the positivity and potential hidden under his hard exterior.
A moment arises, which brings Ronni’s abuse to light, and catches the eyes of Kay, who decides to take matters into his own hands. The inevitable happens… Confronted with false camaraderie, betrayal, and the death of a best friend, Kay is forced to step away from the recording booth - and Ronni - to stand behind misguided determination and gun smoke. But unbeknown to him, he has solidified his place in Ronni’s heart and it sends her on a newfound mission to save his life.
I love this book so much. I could see myself reading it over and over again. At time I felt Ronni was to judgment when it came to Kay . This was a beautiful written love story not all about sex. Full drama,suspense, and murder. Congrats Akil Victor you got a new fan my first book but not my last.
This story was a subdued tale of young lives trying to find their place. Kay, an aspiring rapper and Ronnie, a young college student in an abusive relationship meet each other by chance. Through sheer persistence on Kay's part, the two forge an unlikely friendship that leads ultimately to a relationship.
I thought their story was touching overall. However, I could not particularly connect with the characters on an individual level enough to become invested in their outcome. I was never quite pulled into any particular storyline. There was a disconnect for me. I'm not certain if it was because I would be pulled out of a scene or character's monologue when a sentence's flow was thrown off by misplaced words, poor transitions between scenes or if because the character's Kay/Will, Kay/Ronnie, Will/Gina, etc.)emotions for each other failed to translate to me as a reader.
At any rate, it was an okay read and my first by the author. I look forward to seeing what else he has in his catalogue.
This was a different type of read for me and I had to stay determined to get to the end. Pros: Chapters were short. I finished the book. Cons: The storyline seemed to lack excitement for me, the storyline was also typical. Gangs, money, and a girl, not an interest for me. The characters could have been elaborated on more in regards to their personal lives, like reading about Kay's brother. There was a hint into Ronnies past with mention of what happened to her parents. There was no real action accept at the end of the book and that was short and sweet. Then it ended. I have the author's book, The Watcher, but due to the page counts, hmmm. I may check out the other books by this author though it would be like pulling teeth because this book was borderline boring for me. Everyone deserves a second or third chance. No time soon.
Like a love story in the hood...Kay is in the streets. He says he has plans of getting out but it really doesn't seem that way. He's banging & making money but he also spends time in the studio. Then he runs into Ronnie, a college girl who is already in a relationship but her relationship ain't sweet. Hopefully, they can help each other?
Very good well written story. It was a first read from this author for me. He took his time and drew you all the way in. I could appreciate his work because it wasn't rushed or thrown together. We got the history behind the story and Akil's for writing.
Slow paced story with the right amount drama to keep you interested in the story. I felt like I was in a movie when reading this story. I also like how the author wrote in first and third person without it being confusing to the reader. The characters were all intriguing and felt relatable. I would definitely recommend this book.