Chocolate by Kashamba: Africa is the daughter of a sugar step daddy and cruel mom who thinks her 16y/o is seducing him the way she once had. Normally, authors would present this problem as a misunderstanding between parent and child or molestation that looks ambiguous, but this one is true. Africa is doing it out of revenge because her mom has always degraded her. When they hook up, it’s hot until we hear typical cringey erotica phrasing like “Dark juice canal,” and “his package of meat,” but I like the bullying bits and incest adjacent themes to give it gravity.
Pace is bullet-train: kicked out at 18 so the mom can salvage her relationship w/ the cheater, working at White Castle, seeking more trad sugar daddies, meeting up w/ her stripper and secretly pimpy MIA cousins (real and colloquial fam). The latter, includes a dude called Rock who thinks he can turn butterface Africa out on a bet. He’s a smooth romancer.
The middle and love and quip of her cousins are great, more realistic than some of the stupid decisions that still are too common. The end and violence is rather overwhelming, a lot of destruction disguised as self love. It’s like the girl has a man’s libido brain and her financial schemes seem to go to well for so many first time ventures. Then double or triple that drama, to where I don’t care as much by last couple chapters.
The next story is by Joy, about Harmony who’s a pretty, budding bookworm that falls for another—not that you’d know it, since he’s turned to fronting hard since his belittling dad died. It’s a little too fluffy with the teen dream lightness so I give up after a few chapters, when I want more humor, hotness, and/or quick uniqueness.
Nikki Turner pens the last story “Once a Hood Rat, Always.” Kitty killed an Atlanta man to protect hers after a sideways drug deal. Unique (a character from her last book) is her prison mate. “Fingering her fish market,” I’m dead, WTF. Conning their way to freedom, multi-level man-ipulation with baby mama drama, sugar baby life-styling,, “bisexual” users, aka coke and heroin partakers. Club hookups, though I wish the characters were a bit livelier in voice than hard. The end is a good twist, maybe will lead to a better story.