Men of Fighters - The Mark

by Michael Sinclair

Step into a fantastical world where the bounds of knowledge and ability are unknown. Following Colik and Cerian, led by their father, Legoriath, out from the only home they ever knew, a cave in the barren land between the human and orc kingdoms. Their entire lives, they were told nothing about the rest of the present world, only what they had read in the books that their father had brought them. Leaving their home only under threat of an invading orc army, the leader without a face and a constant voice. They left their journey to return to the capital, where Legoriath plans to begin a counter-attack with the force of the entire kingdom’s army. Along the way, they are forced, by circumstance and morals to help refugee villagers get their home back from the orc army and its leader. There they meet the allies and rivals that fuel the fight to take back the village, and begin the journey to defeat the faceless leader, Suorius and all who stand with him.

302 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 22, 2016

Reviews

[Rosa Crevan · Rating 2 out of 5]

The story was fine but the writing was a little clunky. I noticed there would be sentences that started by describing something and then end by describing the same exact thing but worded slightly different. I think if this edited a bit more or flowed a little better it could have been a 3.5-4 star