I love stories of quests: the Holy Grail, Jason and the Golden Fleece, the quests of King Arthur's knights. I love all the unusual creatures like the Cyclops, the Medusa, Cerberus that populate these quests and grab my attention and capture my imagination. I love the obstacles and trials that quest seekers must overcome to succeed.
I was expecting more of this in ESTEBAN'S QUEST, but it took to ~ 80% for this "good stuff' to happen : flesh-eating serpents, whirlwinds, thunderbirds, the weeping woman who murdered her children. It was this last part, once Esteban and Ceci were coming close to the Seven Cities , that made the book come alive and work for me.
I could have done without the entire rest of the story: the collapse of the town because of evil men with greedy intentions which simply did not interest me but.... the 7 Cities of Gold did, and it is here that I wish the main concentration of the book had been. Would love to know more about the culture, the Star People sounded interesting, the Great Emperor Acalon, the life of the maiden princesses, the artifact that makes electricity , etc.
I know that magical realism is not my genre, but I certainly do respect the author's writing talent.
Good job, Nick!