Kristen "Na'Tiva" Davis had everything a woman in her 20's could ever want. Success, beauty, and money. Yet everything drastically changes when she receives one phone call that will turn her life upside down. Now forced to return to the very place that she abandoned, can Na'Tiva cope with the cold mean streets of Akron? Find out what happens in part one of the hot new urban series from T.L. Joy!
This book was good. It kept me focused it was hard to put it down. the story line was good. it kept me in full suspense. I found myself guessing which is good. so now I'm currently waiting for my next check to purchase Part 2 lol
This is clearly a very young author. It's mostly action and dialogue with pacing that makes it go too quickly. It is set in Akron, a city I actually live near, but it doesn't give a real description of any part of it. My advice to the author would be to slow down, do more showing than telling, and research the cities she writes about. The best fiction has some truth in it.
The story was just starting to develop then proof! It's over. I'm confused are they twins? It says that NaTaya is younger but they have twin names. If Brandon is rich, why steal Na'tiva's identity? What's the deal with him? Is it me or doesn't it seem like neither of them cared that their mom is dead? She was just killed and they don't seem to interested with who and why. They're out for revenge for themselves but aren't they the trifling ones here? This left me with too many unanswered questions for it to have ended so quickly. This book didn't draw me in and make me feel like I wanna rush and get to part 2. It's too choppy and may lead to too many parts.
Interesting quick read about two sisters and their different choices. One chose to leave the small town behind tand never look back while the other chose to embrace the opportunity toake quick money by any means necessary to obtain then sustain a hood-rich lifestyle. When their mother is murdered Tiva comes home to bury her. The one that thing I didn't like was she NEVER once asked her sister what trouble she had gotten into that her mother said she'd fix herself. Nor did she question the police account of her mother's murder so I'm left with the question of exactly how gully she was alleged to be vs how gullible she turned out to be
I agree with many of the other readers that this one was too short. The dialogue reads so that you can hear the southern accent behind it all, but not annoyingly so. I don't feel like I really got to know Na'Tiva or Na'Tya, which is sad because they're the main characters. It definitely could've been fleshed out a little more. There're a couple explicit sex scenes to break up the dialogue, but for the most part I found myself wondering why things were going down the way they were. I won't spoil the end, but it definitely needs more explanation. I just don't know if I'm interested enough to give #2 or #3 a try.
Tiva was very conceited and arrogant but I don't feel that was justification to get done the way she did. I truly didn't see that coming from Brandon. Some people fake it so well...
I must admit this teaser has me wanting to find out what happens next. I was all into Brandon until I found out he was trifling or so it appears. Definitely a quick read. Guess ill get the next part to find out what happens. Enjoyed
This book is short but written precisely and throughly. It amazed me because I underestimated the length and its content. This author has talent and has me dying to see what happens next. I recommend this book to anyone who is a killer for a good urban story.
This was my first read from this author. This book was a short read but good all together. You have to read this book to understand why I believe it was sooooo good. I don’t wanna give away any details but read it for yourself you won’t be disappointed.