As with every other Paranormal Public book there were quite a few inconsistencies in the story. The story itself is still very good, and I love the premise. It's just getting slightly annoying that even after 11 other books the amount of inconsistencies isn't changing. I do not say this to be mean, because as I've said, I love the story, but it would be a REALLY good idea to invest in an editor who can help you out with all these inconsistencies. It might take a few more days to upload that book, but it will make your writing better in the long run.