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Hopewell Coven #1
Witch Dance
Centuries ago, The Cailleach entrusted the Hopewell Coven with the honor of guiding the Apacik Indians, a Native American tribe hailing from the Mississippi Flatwoods. Natural-born Healers, the Apacik’s innate ability, to either restore the sick or inflict pain upon the healthy, made them vulnerable and desperate for clear direction about how to use their gift. The Hopewells could advise them, instruct them, even befriend them, but under no circumstances could they fall in love. Pure bloodlines were essential to power, and as the Supreme Order of Witches, The Cailleach demanded all their members marry within covens.
Birthed out of the forbidden marriage between an Apacik man and a Celtic witch, fifteen-year-old Starling Hopewell is the only one of her kind. A half-breed. The Cailleach never allow her or her parents to forget it. Because of her mother’s position as leader of the Hopewells, Starling is allowed to train for Elementals, testing that will confirm if she is worthy to enter their Order, but evil lingers. Within The Cailleach—dark magick infiltrates its leader and its Elders—and will stop at nothing to bring the half-breed down.
Four trials. Four elements. Four weeks to master them all.
Embrace Destiny. Face the Fire.
Birthed out of the forbidden marriage between an Apacik man and a Celtic witch, fifteen-year-old Starling Hopewell is the only one of her kind. A half-breed. The Cailleach never allow her or her parents to forget it. Because of her mother’s position as leader of the Hopewells, Starling is allowed to train for Elementals, testing that will confirm if she is worthy to enter their Order, but evil lingers. Within The Cailleach—dark magick infiltrates its leader and its Elders—and will stop at nothing to bring the half-breed down.
Four trials. Four elements. Four weeks to master them all.
Embrace Destiny. Face the Fire.
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376 pages, ebook
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About the author
Elizabeth Burgess
11 books57 followersFor Elizabeth Burgess, writing is not only what she loves to do, it is freedom, salvation, and escape. It is life. Introduced to the art of words at a young age by Junior High English teacher, she poured herself into a self-study of all things poetry and prose throughout the entirety of her high school and college career—hoping to one day become a lyricist in Nashville. As the years went on, her dreams changed and morphed, but her love for words did not.
A nurse by trade, Elizabeth loves incorporating the medical field in each book she writes. Her favorite characters are always flawed, and if you see her wearing any color besides black, you know she’s sick. Thanks to her maternal grandparents, she believes she can do anything if she sets her mind to it, and will always offer you a glass of sweet tea if you come over.
When she’s not working on her next novel, she enjoys Saturday nights in Death Valley, listening to Fleetwood Mac on rainy days, and taking pictures of her beloved Louisiana. Elizabeth is the author of two series, Counterplay and the Hopewell Coven. She lives in Northeast Louisiana’s farming country with her partner Terri, two Catahoula Curs, Bowie and Pike, and host of spoiled cats.
Learn more about Elizabeth at: http://liddyburgess.com
A nurse by trade, Elizabeth loves incorporating the medical field in each book she writes. Her favorite characters are always flawed, and if you see her wearing any color besides black, you know she’s sick. Thanks to her maternal grandparents, she believes she can do anything if she sets her mind to it, and will always offer you a glass of sweet tea if you come over.
When she’s not working on her next novel, she enjoys Saturday nights in Death Valley, listening to Fleetwood Mac on rainy days, and taking pictures of her beloved Louisiana. Elizabeth is the author of two series, Counterplay and the Hopewell Coven. She lives in Northeast Louisiana’s farming country with her partner Terri, two Catahoula Curs, Bowie and Pike, and host of spoiled cats.
Learn more about Elizabeth at: http://liddyburgess.com
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June 13, 2016
I've received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Starling's grandmother (Morganza) is the biggest bitch ever! Every time I've read a scene with her I had Umbridge in my mind but less pink and sweet.
Starling's grandmother (Morganza) is the biggest bitch ever! Every time I've read a scene with her I had Umbridge in my mind but less pink and sweet.
April 25, 2016
I’d like to start by saying thank you to the author. Elizabeth Burgess contacted me regarding a review request, offering up (and I quote) a “new paranormal series about a fifteen-year-old half witch/half Native American girl”. Of course, I agreed. It sounded right up my street. Whilst I adore a good crime thriller, I never say no to a good paranormal read. In fact, as of late I’ve been on a paranormal and fantasy binge – so this couldn’t have come at a better time.
I know my three stars might scare a few people off, but know I’m hard to please. It is a great start to the series – I’m more than ready to see what happens next – yet it was not enough to leave me with those crazy feels whereby I’m incapable of doing anything until I get my hands on the next book.
I’ll start with the story itself. It is one that we have seen before in the young adult fantasy genre but, as you would hope, it is not a copy and paste. It is the story of a girl finding her way in the supernatural world, although this time she enters with knowledge. Props for the author right there – I’m seriously tired of main characters waking up one day and realising they have powers. Our main character knows from the start, and what we’re seeing is her initiation into the world. Unfortunately, due to her heritage she is not accepted by all. Enter the trouble.
As I said, it is something of what you would expect. Our main character has hidden powers – she is a special snowflake because of the things people frown upon – and we witness the revelation of these powers. Of course, there is more to the story than her powers coming out. We have secrets and lies within the world, mysteries our main character is trying to solve. Personally, I felt as though more depth could have been added to the unveiling of certain details. I know more books are to come in the series, yet I felt as though we focused upon too little in this book. I wanted more, in short. I’m aware that there is to be mystery, but it seemed as though we focused upon very few aspects of the overarching story.
Don’t get me wrong, I did enjoy the story. I just wanted it to be more substantive. I felt as though things were kept from us for too long, things that would have helped us understand. We found things out after they came into play, which slowed the pace at times. It may be because I’m more accustomed to thrillers, but I feel as though the mystery and intrigue could have been played out better. That being said, there were some really nice points when it came to certain characters that I did not see coming. I cannot begin to explain how much one of the revelations at the end of the book brought a smile to my face – it was so nice to have something surprise me.
I think what stopped me from truly enjoying the story at first, though, was the writing style. The way in which characters were always referred to by their names, even when it was situations whereby it could have been labelled ‘X and her mother’ or ‘X and his daughter’ and so on. Such a thing meant I wasn’t completely pulled into the story, as I was trying to wrap my head around who was who. Once I had it all sorted out in my head, however, I found myself enjoying it a lot more.
Overall, despite how negative certain aspects of this review may sound, it was a fun start to the series. I really am interested to see where things head next – I have high hopes of the next book being a worthwhile read!
Once again, thanks for giving me the chance to read this Elizabeth Burgess – I really appreciate it!
I know my three stars might scare a few people off, but know I’m hard to please. It is a great start to the series – I’m more than ready to see what happens next – yet it was not enough to leave me with those crazy feels whereby I’m incapable of doing anything until I get my hands on the next book.
I’ll start with the story itself. It is one that we have seen before in the young adult fantasy genre but, as you would hope, it is not a copy and paste. It is the story of a girl finding her way in the supernatural world, although this time she enters with knowledge. Props for the author right there – I’m seriously tired of main characters waking up one day and realising they have powers. Our main character knows from the start, and what we’re seeing is her initiation into the world. Unfortunately, due to her heritage she is not accepted by all. Enter the trouble.
As I said, it is something of what you would expect. Our main character has hidden powers – she is a special snowflake because of the things people frown upon – and we witness the revelation of these powers. Of course, there is more to the story than her powers coming out. We have secrets and lies within the world, mysteries our main character is trying to solve. Personally, I felt as though more depth could have been added to the unveiling of certain details. I know more books are to come in the series, yet I felt as though we focused upon too little in this book. I wanted more, in short. I’m aware that there is to be mystery, but it seemed as though we focused upon very few aspects of the overarching story.
Don’t get me wrong, I did enjoy the story. I just wanted it to be more substantive. I felt as though things were kept from us for too long, things that would have helped us understand. We found things out after they came into play, which slowed the pace at times. It may be because I’m more accustomed to thrillers, but I feel as though the mystery and intrigue could have been played out better. That being said, there were some really nice points when it came to certain characters that I did not see coming. I cannot begin to explain how much one of the revelations at the end of the book brought a smile to my face – it was so nice to have something surprise me.
I think what stopped me from truly enjoying the story at first, though, was the writing style. The way in which characters were always referred to by their names, even when it was situations whereby it could have been labelled ‘X and her mother’ or ‘X and his daughter’ and so on. Such a thing meant I wasn’t completely pulled into the story, as I was trying to wrap my head around who was who. Once I had it all sorted out in my head, however, I found myself enjoying it a lot more.
Overall, despite how negative certain aspects of this review may sound, it was a fun start to the series. I really am interested to see where things head next – I have high hopes of the next book being a worthwhile read!
Once again, thanks for giving me the chance to read this Elizabeth Burgess – I really appreciate it!
April 29, 2016
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Starling is a product of two powerful bloodlines: Cailleach and Apacik. This makes her powerful and a target for those who fear or lust after power. She has help in her trials to join the Cailleach from mysterious sources and her loving family or rather just half of them since most of the other half looks down on her Apacik heritage. Being thrust into life threatening situations makes Starling realize the grave danger she and her coven is in. She must race against time to fight the odds or she might lose them all or worse, her own life.
I really liked this book. I really really liked it. That was unexpected because we now have these not-so-good trends in YA fantasy/ paranormal books which make things predictable. This book wasn't predictable even though we get to read so many different POVs. People's true intentions and deepest thoughts are revealed as we move ahead but still, the twists and turns were surprising and thrilling.
We are often supposed to focus on the few main characters and their families are rarely involved but in this book, there was so much family to experience. I loved that! The relationships were complex and constantly developing. Nothing is static really. The plot keeps shifting and the pace is fast. Although at times I did think some transitions could have been executed better to make the story less jerky.
I found the dialogues meaningful and even quotable. The romance in every generation was so touching. I actually felt like the one between Harlan and Starling was unnecessary.
I can't wait to see what happens next in the series. If you love witches and magic then this book definitely deserves to be on you To Read List :) (less)
Starling is a product of two powerful bloodlines: Cailleach and Apacik. This makes her powerful and a target for those who fear or lust after power. She has help in her trials to join the Cailleach from mysterious sources and her loving family or rather just half of them since most of the other half looks down on her Apacik heritage. Being thrust into life threatening situations makes Starling realize the grave danger she and her coven is in. She must race against time to fight the odds or she might lose them all or worse, her own life.
I really liked this book. I really really liked it. That was unexpected because we now have these not-so-good trends in YA fantasy/ paranormal books which make things predictable. This book wasn't predictable even though we get to read so many different POVs. People's true intentions and deepest thoughts are revealed as we move ahead but still, the twists and turns were surprising and thrilling.
We are often supposed to focus on the few main characters and their families are rarely involved but in this book, there was so much family to experience. I loved that! The relationships were complex and constantly developing. Nothing is static really. The plot keeps shifting and the pace is fast. Although at times I did think some transitions could have been executed better to make the story less jerky.
I found the dialogues meaningful and even quotable. The romance in every generation was so touching. I actually felt like the one between Harlan and Starling was unnecessary.
I can't wait to see what happens next in the series. If you love witches and magic then this book definitely deserves to be on you To Read List :) (less)
April 30, 2016
Kindly Received an ARC from the author :)
What is witch Dance? As Ms.Burgess so precisely surmised it, as her new paranormal series about a fifteen-year-old half witch/half Native American girl who must pass harrowing elemental trial's in order to be accepted into her Witch Coven. However certain people and dark magic, bitter about her mixed bloodline are conspiring to set Starling up for no easy entrance exam!
Starling is a very genuine girl, she's proud of her heritage and is strong in the face of quite direct hatred from her grandmother Morgana, who feels her Coven has been disgraced by the mixed blood. Family dynamic's and relationships are core aspects of Witch Dance. The love between Starling and her family, as well as her curiosity about her heritage is well captured by Burgess however the amount of different names made it really confusing to follow who was who in the beginning.
The story took a while to ramp up to the climax, but I liked how, although Starling is quite literally one of a kind with her heritage in terms of her Coven, she does struggle in the beginning with her powers, which made the trials more realistic, rather than her falling into the stereotypical "Special snowflake trope". However some parts of the book did drag a bit.
While I liked the originality of Starling, her fierceness and authenticity as a character, the dialogue and language in the novel made it really difficult for me to picture starling being 15/16 and felt she would be more accurate at an age of 12/13. Small thing's, like her relationship with in the beggining Harlan, felt a bit young for me? and I think that this book would be best enjoyed by a middle-grade audience :) .
What is witch Dance? As Ms.Burgess so precisely surmised it, as her new paranormal series about a fifteen-year-old half witch/half Native American girl who must pass harrowing elemental trial's in order to be accepted into her Witch Coven. However certain people and dark magic, bitter about her mixed bloodline are conspiring to set Starling up for no easy entrance exam!
Starling is a very genuine girl, she's proud of her heritage and is strong in the face of quite direct hatred from her grandmother Morgana, who feels her Coven has been disgraced by the mixed blood. Family dynamic's and relationships are core aspects of Witch Dance. The love between Starling and her family, as well as her curiosity about her heritage is well captured by Burgess however the amount of different names made it really confusing to follow who was who in the beginning.
The story took a while to ramp up to the climax, but I liked how, although Starling is quite literally one of a kind with her heritage in terms of her Coven, she does struggle in the beginning with her powers, which made the trials more realistic, rather than her falling into the stereotypical "Special snowflake trope". However some parts of the book did drag a bit.
While I liked the originality of Starling, her fierceness and authenticity as a character, the dialogue and language in the novel made it really difficult for me to picture starling being 15/16 and felt she would be more accurate at an age of 12/13. Small thing's, like her relationship with in the beggining Harlan, felt a bit young for me? and I think that this book would be best enjoyed by a middle-grade audience :) .
April 25, 2016
*The author sent me a copy in exchange for a review*
I'll be completely honest, I didn't finish this one. Normally, when I can't get through the book it's an automatic one star, "don't read this book because it's terrible" review. However, for this book, the concept is there, it's just the execution that does it a disservice, which is extremely frustrating because I wanted to like this book. I mean, I am a sucker for anything that has to deal with witches, so this should have been right up my alley! Unfortunately, though, the book read more as a draft than it did an actual, completed book.
For example, there's a lot of info dumping early on that throws the reader for a loop; you have to put the book down and process everything that is happening instead of just sliding seamlessly into the story. This is tough, because you don't want to overwhelm your readers right out of the gate, yet this is exactly what happens. There are a lot of characters and backstories and powers that need to be explained and, by the time you get past that, you're wondering if you even want to continue any further for fear of running into that situation again.
There is also a lot of "telling", with events simply being explained to the reader instead of being built upon as the story went on. I want some mystery in my supernatural novels and I felt like every question that I asked (or didn't ask) was immediately answered in the first 50 pages. I mean, that's why I didn't feel the need to finish this book because a) I felt like I already knew what was going to happen and b) I couldn't dig through the unnecessary plot summaries anymore. If the main character is going to be learning about the secrets that surround her family, I want to be surprised too. I don't want to learn about them through other people's POVs because where's the fun in that? Now I, as the reader, know what's going to happen, but I still have to sit through the main character figuring it out for herself. If this was a movie, you could probably get away with it, but as a book, you have to keep the suspense building. Otherwise, there's no reason to keep the reader coming back for more.
I'll be completely honest, I didn't finish this one. Normally, when I can't get through the book it's an automatic one star, "don't read this book because it's terrible" review. However, for this book, the concept is there, it's just the execution that does it a disservice, which is extremely frustrating because I wanted to like this book. I mean, I am a sucker for anything that has to deal with witches, so this should have been right up my alley! Unfortunately, though, the book read more as a draft than it did an actual, completed book.
For example, there's a lot of info dumping early on that throws the reader for a loop; you have to put the book down and process everything that is happening instead of just sliding seamlessly into the story. This is tough, because you don't want to overwhelm your readers right out of the gate, yet this is exactly what happens. There are a lot of characters and backstories and powers that need to be explained and, by the time you get past that, you're wondering if you even want to continue any further for fear of running into that situation again.
There is also a lot of "telling", with events simply being explained to the reader instead of being built upon as the story went on. I want some mystery in my supernatural novels and I felt like every question that I asked (or didn't ask) was immediately answered in the first 50 pages. I mean, that's why I didn't feel the need to finish this book because a) I felt like I already knew what was going to happen and b) I couldn't dig through the unnecessary plot summaries anymore. If the main character is going to be learning about the secrets that surround her family, I want to be surprised too. I don't want to learn about them through other people's POVs because where's the fun in that? Now I, as the reader, know what's going to happen, but I still have to sit through the main character figuring it out for herself. If this was a movie, you could probably get away with it, but as a book, you have to keep the suspense building. Otherwise, there's no reason to keep the reader coming back for more.
April 26, 2016
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
This is my first Elizabeth Burgess book and I am absolutely hooked. The story was detailed, intricate and complex, managing to surprise me on many occasions. The characters were dynamic and I very much enjoyed how many central characters the book featured. While Starling's perspective is the most prominent, throughout the book we get to read from several different perspectives including Harlan, Payne, Lansing, Gates, Maitland, Jackie, Morganza, and Eamon. While the amount we saw from each perspective varied, they each delivered their own insights. At first I thought it might get annoying with the perspective bouncing around, but I quickly got used to it. I fell in love with so many of the characters, even Seraphine in the end. While I can't bring myself to despise Morganza, I can't say I'm exactly in love with her either. Eamon, however, is pure evil and as despicable as they come. Unfortunately, I doubt we've seen the last of him. Starling is the daughter of a Celtic fire witch and peaceful Apacik warrior. As a half-breed, there are some who don't approve of her being able to join The Cailleach and will go to great lengths to stop her. Unfortunately for them (and fortunately for everybody else), Starling is far more powerful than anybody could've ever imagined. With the help of those who love her and the guidance of her paternal grandfather's spirit, she makes through the first three Elemantal tests (earth, water, and air) with surprising ease. The end of the book brought a lot of surprises with it, most of them joyous. I read this book in one sitting, captivated the entire time I was reading. The ending is HFN. While the results of Starling's fire Elemental test are a great victory fr the Hopewell Coven, there is clearly much more trial to come. I, for one, cannot wait to see what happens next in Queen of Angels!
This is my first Elizabeth Burgess book and I am absolutely hooked. The story was detailed, intricate and complex, managing to surprise me on many occasions. The characters were dynamic and I very much enjoyed how many central characters the book featured. While Starling's perspective is the most prominent, throughout the book we get to read from several different perspectives including Harlan, Payne, Lansing, Gates, Maitland, Jackie, Morganza, and Eamon. While the amount we saw from each perspective varied, they each delivered their own insights. At first I thought it might get annoying with the perspective bouncing around, but I quickly got used to it. I fell in love with so many of the characters, even Seraphine in the end. While I can't bring myself to despise Morganza, I can't say I'm exactly in love with her either. Eamon, however, is pure evil and as despicable as they come. Unfortunately, I doubt we've seen the last of him. Starling is the daughter of a Celtic fire witch and peaceful Apacik warrior. As a half-breed, there are some who don't approve of her being able to join The Cailleach and will go to great lengths to stop her. Unfortunately for them (and fortunately for everybody else), Starling is far more powerful than anybody could've ever imagined. With the help of those who love her and the guidance of her paternal grandfather's spirit, she makes through the first three Elemantal tests (earth, water, and air) with surprising ease. The end of the book brought a lot of surprises with it, most of them joyous. I read this book in one sitting, captivated the entire time I was reading. The ending is HFN. While the results of Starling's fire Elemental test are a great victory fr the Hopewell Coven, there is clearly much more trial to come. I, for one, cannot wait to see what happens next in Queen of Angels!
July 20, 2016
Witch Dance is a perfect example of how to create an urban fantasy story with depth. I've gotten to the point where I actively avoid this genre now because I've been thoroughly disappointed with others in the past. The most obvious issue is the "love at first sight" that every single character seems to have, but there are also all the instances of vapid or one-dimensional characters as well as a dull plot or villain.
We don't fall into those same tropes here. There's a bit of misdirection with who the bad guy is and I loved it. Again, with other books I've seen the author make it so glaringly obvious who the villain is just with the description. "Cold blue eyes" is a perfect example. You see that, you know he's a baddie.
More importantly though, I loved the dynamics of the families. I'll admit it took me a long time to establish who was who. I couldn't remember the relationships between the characters for the most part, until the author snuck in a title to remind me. Like "Starling looked at her mother" and then I go, "Right, yeah, okay. So that one's her mother." But despite getting confused with the familial ties, I still loved the dynamics between the relatives. There's animosity and hostility, but also love and acceptance. The author did a great job of striking a balance between a caricature family and one that takes itself too seriously (I don't even know if that makes sense, but it makes sense to me so whatever).
It's a quick read, and a good one. I'm glad I read it.
We don't fall into those same tropes here. There's a bit of misdirection with who the bad guy is and I loved it. Again, with other books I've seen the author make it so glaringly obvious who the villain is just with the description. "Cold blue eyes" is a perfect example. You see that, you know he's a baddie.
More importantly though, I loved the dynamics of the families. I'll admit it took me a long time to establish who was who. I couldn't remember the relationships between the characters for the most part, until the author snuck in a title to remind me. Like "Starling looked at her mother" and then I go, "Right, yeah, okay. So that one's her mother." But despite getting confused with the familial ties, I still loved the dynamics between the relatives. There's animosity and hostility, but also love and acceptance. The author did a great job of striking a balance between a caricature family and one that takes itself too seriously (I don't even know if that makes sense, but it makes sense to me so whatever).
It's a quick read, and a good one. I'm glad I read it.
May 11, 2016
I have to say, I generally gravitate away from YA because I like heavier stories, but after reading Witch Dance by Elizabeth Burgess, I'm rethinking that mindset. This tale easily appeals to all readers, young and old. Where you'll find some common paranormal themes- the "chosen one," an impossible trial- Burgess takes these and turns them on their head, weaving a creative, original narrative with exceptionally clear and vivid characters. While Starling is the standout protagonist, you'll find yourself invested in all the supporting cast as well, and holding your breath through certain scenes. The book has a clear voice and purpose, and if you think you know how things will end up, you're wrong. Finally, Burgess treats the Native American culture with both sensitivity, and more clearly, love, integrating a tribe of her own creation. Her research and knowledge of the area shows through, and pulls the reader into the story at a deeper level. This is an author to watch, and a series to follow. Can't wait for the second installment.
April 26, 2016
Witch dance started out a bit confusing with all the name and places and culture-references. Wait it out- it will all of a sudden click in your head.
The rest of the book is fantastic: Starling's story is strong and inspiring. She's not fully-fleshed, but I attribute this to the fact that the narration is from multiple points of view and makes it hard to fully realize her in one book. I take this as a good thing- I am intrigued and wanting to see more.
The story, characters, and world are interesting and well-written. I like that I am in different characters' heads at times, that way the author doesn't need to over-explain anything. Cultures clash; life, death and the everafter are major parts of this story. So is believing in yourself and those you trust and love- which is a lesson multiple people learn (or should).
There is magic, heartache, great relationships, and strength all in one book. I highly recommend reading- I am already chomping at the bit to read the next one!
I received this as an advanced reader's copy in return for my honest opinion.
The rest of the book is fantastic: Starling's story is strong and inspiring. She's not fully-fleshed, but I attribute this to the fact that the narration is from multiple points of view and makes it hard to fully realize her in one book. I take this as a good thing- I am intrigued and wanting to see more.
The story, characters, and world are interesting and well-written. I like that I am in different characters' heads at times, that way the author doesn't need to over-explain anything. Cultures clash; life, death and the everafter are major parts of this story. So is believing in yourself and those you trust and love- which is a lesson multiple people learn (or should).
There is magic, heartache, great relationships, and strength all in one book. I highly recommend reading- I am already chomping at the bit to read the next one!
I received this as an advanced reader's copy in return for my honest opinion.
April 27, 2016
Wow. Once I started reading 'Witch Dance' I could not put it down. It pulled me in and refused to let go. The storyline was brilliantly written and played out in such a spectacular way. The characters were well developed and I felt like I was a part of their story. Starling was an exceptional lead. Sweet, smart, respective and quite surprising in her abilities. Lansing and Payne were amazing parents. Their love for each other and their families was incredible. I loved the respect they had for each others ways, families and their daughters potential. Gates, Maitland, Seraphine were awesome in their own unique way. The creativity throughout this book was exactly what I expected from Elizabeth Burgess. I can't wait to read more in the 'Hopewell Coven Series'. A definite must read. Recommended.
April 26, 2016
I was provided with an ARC from the author for an honest review.
I did enjoy this book but sometimes things seemed very convenient. Also, the ending just seemed really rushed. The post-climax chapter seemed tacked on to explain things that weren't really clear up until then. I know it was supposed to be this big twist but it seemed kind of "oh, by the way." That being said, readers who enjoy supernatural romance YA stories will likely enjoy this one. I am from Louisiana so the settings were especially vivid for me. The inclusion of native American characters mixed well with the witches though the whole guide relationship isn't really explained as fully as I would have liked. It did leave me wanting to know what happens next and that's a success in my mind.
I did enjoy this book but sometimes things seemed very convenient. Also, the ending just seemed really rushed. The post-climax chapter seemed tacked on to explain things that weren't really clear up until then. I know it was supposed to be this big twist but it seemed kind of "oh, by the way." That being said, readers who enjoy supernatural romance YA stories will likely enjoy this one. I am from Louisiana so the settings were especially vivid for me. The inclusion of native American characters mixed well with the witches though the whole guide relationship isn't really explained as fully as I would have liked. It did leave me wanting to know what happens next and that's a success in my mind.
October 21, 2016
Whilst kicking off with connotations of a proverbial witch burning at the stake, Witch Dance quickly jumps back to a month prior to the diabolic opening events of the prologue. Young Starling, once reaching the age of sixteen, is due to negotiate her elemental trials (Elementals). Born to a relic of the past she'll have four weeks to learn to call and control the elementary forces of earth, air, fire, and water. An age old trial of acceptance Starling must prove her abilities at a ritual taking place at the cessation of her training. Four weeks, four elements, one per week she must show The Imperial One, her grandmother, that her tainted half-ling blood has not ruined her ability to function within the Hopewell Coven. Only in prejudice though is Starling seen as anything but an unchartered gift. Never before has there been a child of power, one half celtic witch and one half native Apacik Indian. One half noble power and one half earth protector, her heritage to those with enlightened hearts and eyes is seen as a gift from the God and Goddess they truly revere.
Previously ruled by love and all things of the light, Morganza was irrevocably changed by her husband's (Rossif) presumed death. In Rossif's absence Morganza has become an embittered autocrat seeking recognition in the ways of false divinities. The secrecy of their power and elements, once guarded and hidden from plain sight, is now used to manipulate those without the gift. In Morganza, recognition and affection are now reserved for only those who show proper reverence, such as her eldest daughter Seraphine and her husband Drake. Earmarked to take over because they bow and bend to Morganza's thirsts, Hopewell Coven could go to them. If successful it will establish a further generation of rulers that will have lost their way.
Distracted by her musings over her crush Harlan, and her bicultural heritage and the unknown choices it brings, Starling's training is presumed to fail. If so this will be seen as proof that Morganza's opinions of impurities will be correct. She would happily see her granddaughter and parents forever banished from the ranks. Starling is due to be trained by her aunts and mother, each proficient in one element more than the rest. Little is known of Starling's abilities as she's only initiated into the circle just before her training begins. Unknown completely is an already active ability she hasn't dared to reveal it to anybody. A guiding voice in her head cautions her not to reveal herself, Starling has the vision that allows her to see darkness touching those around her. Starling will soon learn she's a child of prophecy and with her gift she knows the troubles that have racked the covens stems from her missing grandfather's brother.
Eamon makes himself what ever he needs to be in order to get the things he wants. All he covets was once his brother's. Sixteen years of acting are about to pay off. The seed of doubt was cast over the impurity of Starling's birth. The ancient book of shadows of The Cailleach enlists magic to remove all that wasn't his through a new soul bonding with Morganza. By tying himself to Morganza Eamon can swiftly abolish all that was his brother's and replace it with his own. To succeed he knows he must destroy the Hopewell Coven and Starling in particular. Whatever stood in front of the things he wants has been killed or removed. Now, after years of influencing and contaminating he seeks to use what was once seen as a divine addition to The Cailleach.
Coming of age, coming into one's destiny, and coming to the conclusions of what must be done are integral themes. This is an enjoyable and entertaining story of a girl born of two worlds, united within one vessel to make them both stronger. Starling must needs stop the corruption and darkness that has whittled it's way to the heart of an ancient past bathed in noble blood. A New Breed and the starting path of a warrior of the light, Starling is gifted with the perception necessary to first and foremost recognise her foe. Coupled with the elements of grief, ambition, and covetness Witch Dance shows that the ways to darkness are not always paved with greed, power, and malice.
It is prevalent too that prejudice is the devil's pitchfork from whence attitudes can be manipulated to conform with those that allow people to partake of hurts against those they discriminate without the rightful accompanying guilt. Few if any characters aren't completing their destined paths. Just as destiny can lead to preordained roads to goodness, so too can they lead to darkness. Balance is the essential harmony which keeps the wheels turning, if too much of either opposing force is expressed then the harmony of centrifugal motion becomes skewed to whichever force is responsible. If allowed to continue unchecked then the spinning wheel gains a buckle that inevitably stops it from spinning altogether.
For The Cailleach there's been a buckle developing for at least the past sixteen years. If successful young Starling will be the counterweight to get it back in harmonious motion. Filled with intrigue the plights of characters within captivate your interest and before you can quite fully grasp why, you're finishing the book knowing you'll need more. All the best experiences happen too quickly and leave you wanting more: not to suggest there's anything missing though. Applicable to a great many ages and genres, Witch Dance is an outstanding read. Without necessarily knowing why, you do know you're learning something important, just as stories are often meant to do.
Previously ruled by love and all things of the light, Morganza was irrevocably changed by her husband's (Rossif) presumed death. In Rossif's absence Morganza has become an embittered autocrat seeking recognition in the ways of false divinities. The secrecy of their power and elements, once guarded and hidden from plain sight, is now used to manipulate those without the gift. In Morganza, recognition and affection are now reserved for only those who show proper reverence, such as her eldest daughter Seraphine and her husband Drake. Earmarked to take over because they bow and bend to Morganza's thirsts, Hopewell Coven could go to them. If successful it will establish a further generation of rulers that will have lost their way.
Distracted by her musings over her crush Harlan, and her bicultural heritage and the unknown choices it brings, Starling's training is presumed to fail. If so this will be seen as proof that Morganza's opinions of impurities will be correct. She would happily see her granddaughter and parents forever banished from the ranks. Starling is due to be trained by her aunts and mother, each proficient in one element more than the rest. Little is known of Starling's abilities as she's only initiated into the circle just before her training begins. Unknown completely is an already active ability she hasn't dared to reveal it to anybody. A guiding voice in her head cautions her not to reveal herself, Starling has the vision that allows her to see darkness touching those around her. Starling will soon learn she's a child of prophecy and with her gift she knows the troubles that have racked the covens stems from her missing grandfather's brother.
Eamon makes himself what ever he needs to be in order to get the things he wants. All he covets was once his brother's. Sixteen years of acting are about to pay off. The seed of doubt was cast over the impurity of Starling's birth. The ancient book of shadows of The Cailleach enlists magic to remove all that wasn't his through a new soul bonding with Morganza. By tying himself to Morganza Eamon can swiftly abolish all that was his brother's and replace it with his own. To succeed he knows he must destroy the Hopewell Coven and Starling in particular. Whatever stood in front of the things he wants has been killed or removed. Now, after years of influencing and contaminating he seeks to use what was once seen as a divine addition to The Cailleach.
Coming of age, coming into one's destiny, and coming to the conclusions of what must be done are integral themes. This is an enjoyable and entertaining story of a girl born of two worlds, united within one vessel to make them both stronger. Starling must needs stop the corruption and darkness that has whittled it's way to the heart of an ancient past bathed in noble blood. A New Breed and the starting path of a warrior of the light, Starling is gifted with the perception necessary to first and foremost recognise her foe. Coupled with the elements of grief, ambition, and covetness Witch Dance shows that the ways to darkness are not always paved with greed, power, and malice.
It is prevalent too that prejudice is the devil's pitchfork from whence attitudes can be manipulated to conform with those that allow people to partake of hurts against those they discriminate without the rightful accompanying guilt. Few if any characters aren't completing their destined paths. Just as destiny can lead to preordained roads to goodness, so too can they lead to darkness. Balance is the essential harmony which keeps the wheels turning, if too much of either opposing force is expressed then the harmony of centrifugal motion becomes skewed to whichever force is responsible. If allowed to continue unchecked then the spinning wheel gains a buckle that inevitably stops it from spinning altogether.
For The Cailleach there's been a buckle developing for at least the past sixteen years. If successful young Starling will be the counterweight to get it back in harmonious motion. Filled with intrigue the plights of characters within captivate your interest and before you can quite fully grasp why, you're finishing the book knowing you'll need more. All the best experiences happen too quickly and leave you wanting more: not to suggest there's anything missing though. Applicable to a great many ages and genres, Witch Dance is an outstanding read. Without necessarily knowing why, you do know you're learning something important, just as stories are often meant to do.
July 23, 2018
Not a bad read. I quite enjoyed it. Drama, witchcraft and a lot of suspense.
April 12, 2016
ARC provided by author for a review
Overall, it's a fairly standard story of a girl that is a special snowflake and things fall into place very nicely.
So, I feel like this had potential but these things bothered me:
The Narration
I found it exceedingly confusing that this was told in third person -- but would refer to everyone by their first names. Like, instead of saying "Starling's mother..." it kept referring to her by name. So, "Starling and Lansing did..." instead of "Starling and her mother did..." This definitely threw me off.
The Dialoge
Some of the dialogue seemed.. juvenile? Or it was repetitive. So, at one point Starling tells Jackie something. And we are aware of the whole conversation. Then Jackie talks to Payne... and rehashes the whole conversation we (as readers) are privy to.
The Apacik
This part is shrouded in mystery... and I have no idea why. Starling basically grows up knowing NOTHING about her father's side of the family/culture. And the only reason given is "they've died out so what's the point". That... seems backwards. I would think that IF YOU WERE LAST OF THE LINE you'd probably be taught about your cultural history on principle.
Another thing that bothered me is that the book blurb states the Apacik "needed" guides to harness their power. These guides are The Cailleach. BUT THIS IS NEVER TALKED ABOUT IN THE BOOK. It's never explained! And I find it incredulous that a group of (native) people that possess powerful magic on their own need some other magic people to "guide" them for generations..... ? Like, for what purpose? It just seems like a weird racialized relationship between two groups of powerful magic users.
The Characters
I feel like there's not much character development here. And while I realize I'm reading a book about WITCHES I find it hard to believe a 15 year old is just like, "Yup. I have a great destiny. Just found out two weeks ago, NBD." And Harlan! Seriously? A 17 year old suddenly is like I'M YOUR PROTECTOR. I WILL DIE FOR YOU. WE JUST SPOKE 3 WEEKS AGO.
Probably one of the weirdest (?) things in this book is the antiquated notion of "dating" or "asking parental permission" .... as in, Harlan goes to Starling's parents TO APOLOGIZE FOR DRIVING HER SOMEWHERE without their permission....? Like, he needed to ask their permission TO BE HER FRIEND and Starling and Gates were apprehensive about being grounded... because a boy took a girl in his car and drove her to a location. ALL.MY.WHATS. Is this 1940?
Overall, it's a fairly standard story of a girl that is a special snowflake and things fall into place very nicely.
So, I feel like this had potential but these things bothered me:
The Narration
I found it exceedingly confusing that this was told in third person -- but would refer to everyone by their first names. Like, instead of saying "Starling's mother..." it kept referring to her by name. So, "Starling and Lansing did..." instead of "Starling and her mother did..." This definitely threw me off.
The Dialoge
Some of the dialogue seemed.. juvenile? Or it was repetitive. So, at one point Starling tells Jackie something. And we are aware of the whole conversation. Then Jackie talks to Payne... and rehashes the whole conversation we (as readers) are privy to.
The Apacik
This part is shrouded in mystery... and I have no idea why. Starling basically grows up knowing NOTHING about her father's side of the family/culture. And the only reason given is "they've died out so what's the point". That... seems backwards. I would think that IF YOU WERE LAST OF THE LINE you'd probably be taught about your cultural history on principle.
Another thing that bothered me is that the book blurb states the Apacik "needed" guides to harness their power. These guides are The Cailleach. BUT THIS IS NEVER TALKED ABOUT IN THE BOOK. It's never explained! And I find it incredulous that a group of (native) people that possess powerful magic on their own need some other magic people to "guide" them for generations..... ? Like, for what purpose? It just seems like a weird racialized relationship between two groups of powerful magic users.
The Characters
I feel like there's not much character development here. And while I realize I'm reading a book about WITCHES I find it hard to believe a 15 year old is just like, "Yup. I have a great destiny. Just found out two weeks ago, NBD." And Harlan! Seriously? A 17 year old suddenly is like I'M YOUR PROTECTOR. I WILL DIE FOR YOU. WE JUST SPOKE 3 WEEKS AGO.
Probably one of the weirdest (?) things in this book is the antiquated notion of "dating" or "asking parental permission" .... as in, Harlan goes to Starling's parents TO APOLOGIZE FOR DRIVING HER SOMEWHERE without their permission....? Like, he needed to ask their permission TO BE HER FRIEND and Starling and Gates were apprehensive about being grounded... because a boy took a girl in his car and drove her to a location. ALL.MY.WHATS. Is this 1940?
April 19, 2016
Witch Dance by Elizabeth Burgess
This is the first book in the "Hopewell Coven" Series
She was just a teenager with a magical, mysterious family. Her coming of age was dawning.
Her trials would start soon. But what no one knew was in store for everyone.
Not everything is as it seems.
Not everyone will understand.
Not everyone will survive
I got this book sent to me in exchange for an honest review.
I have read others by this writer "The waiting Series", which I highly recommend people check out and read.
Yet again this story does not disappoint!!
Written with a supernatural feel, of witches, warlock, old tribal ways etc. A new unique twist on the usual supernatural stories out there.
The writer really knows how to tell a tale and surround it with mystery and intrigue from the very beginning. Another complex story, which in my opinion really sucked me in from the beginning, I just knew that the tale would get better as more things happened and came to light.
Another large family group, all intertwined in some way, with the usual family traits of anger, trust, betrayal affecting even a magical group. I lot of feeling in all the characters and how they interact together makes the story more interesting, especially to find out how they all end up and if it is a happy ending??
Not really much to be disappointed about, only that you have to wait for the next installment to find out what happens next!!
Another rip roaring read from Elizabeth Burgess
***** FIVE STARS *****
This is the first book in the "Hopewell Coven" Series
She was just a teenager with a magical, mysterious family. Her coming of age was dawning.
Her trials would start soon. But what no one knew was in store for everyone.
Not everything is as it seems.
Not everyone will understand.
Not everyone will survive
I got this book sent to me in exchange for an honest review.
I have read others by this writer "The waiting Series", which I highly recommend people check out and read.
Yet again this story does not disappoint!!
Written with a supernatural feel, of witches, warlock, old tribal ways etc. A new unique twist on the usual supernatural stories out there.
The writer really knows how to tell a tale and surround it with mystery and intrigue from the very beginning. Another complex story, which in my opinion really sucked me in from the beginning, I just knew that the tale would get better as more things happened and came to light.
Another large family group, all intertwined in some way, with the usual family traits of anger, trust, betrayal affecting even a magical group. I lot of feeling in all the characters and how they interact together makes the story more interesting, especially to find out how they all end up and if it is a happy ending??
Not really much to be disappointed about, only that you have to wait for the next installment to find out what happens next!!
Another rip roaring read from Elizabeth Burgess
***** FIVE STARS *****
April 20, 2016
I read this book in an exchange for an honest review.
I feel like this book had so much potential to be great but didn't manage to attain that bar. While I enjoyed the storyline, I didn't enjoy the way it was delivered. I also had problems with certain aspects.
One of the problems wasnhat fact rhat I didn't believe that Starling was almost 16. I thought she was 10 based on the way her character was portrayed.
I also didn't like that Harlan had to get all sorts of permission just to be friends with Starling. It just seemed so unrealistic.
Another thing that bothered me was that Morganza's anger and hatred just seemed fake. I never actually believed it.
Something else that got to me was how the events layed out. I felt that everything came forcefully and they just didn't flow together. In my opinion, the links between events were corny therefore making them seem unrealistic.
I really did like the main idea though. I think it has great potential and it's definitely unique.
I feel like this book had so much potential to be great but didn't manage to attain that bar. While I enjoyed the storyline, I didn't enjoy the way it was delivered. I also had problems with certain aspects.
One of the problems wasnhat fact rhat I didn't believe that Starling was almost 16. I thought she was 10 based on the way her character was portrayed.
I also didn't like that Harlan had to get all sorts of permission just to be friends with Starling. It just seemed so unrealistic.
Another thing that bothered me was that Morganza's anger and hatred just seemed fake. I never actually believed it.
Something else that got to me was how the events layed out. I felt that everything came forcefully and they just didn't flow together. In my opinion, the links between events were corny therefore making them seem unrealistic.
I really did like the main idea though. I think it has great potential and it's definitely unique.
April 25, 2016
Full disclosure: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I really, really wanted to like it. The story isn't bad, honestly, it just suffers from wish fulfillment at the end, and it needs some polishing. My biggest stylistic gripe is the lack of indication for when someone is thinking or communicating telepathically. Give me italics. Quotation marks. Something.
I was pleased to see a depiction of a teenage boy practicing consent on the first date, so that was good. I noticed that Lansing is pro LGBTQ+, so that's also a plus. And those two things make me think that the one thing I absolutely hated about the book (the zillion Native tropes) was done innocently. Innocent or not, they ruined the story for me because they're loud, obvious, and they occur constantly.
Overall I wouldn't recommend this to friends, but I also didn't DNF it. It has an interesting concept, but needs stronger delivery.
I really, really wanted to like it. The story isn't bad, honestly, it just suffers from wish fulfillment at the end, and it needs some polishing. My biggest stylistic gripe is the lack of indication for when someone is thinking or communicating telepathically. Give me italics. Quotation marks. Something.
I was pleased to see a depiction of a teenage boy practicing consent on the first date, so that was good. I noticed that Lansing is pro LGBTQ+, so that's also a plus. And those two things make me think that the one thing I absolutely hated about the book (the zillion Native tropes) was done innocently. Innocent or not, they ruined the story for me because they're loud, obvious, and they occur constantly.
Overall I wouldn't recommend this to friends, but I also didn't DNF it. It has an interesting concept, but needs stronger delivery.
April 27, 2016
Can't wait for 2nd :)
Tons of complicated characters and intertwining stories, some twists and of course love connections are exactly what I expected from Elizabeth. And she so delivered!
I loved that main character was a teenage girl, who didn't have typical "oh I am so ordinary and not very attractive, what does he see in me...." attitude. It was refreshing to read about someone who was confident, sweet, and good.
*** Doctor characters also work at Rivers ;) ****
Tons of complicated characters and intertwining stories, some twists and of course love connections are exactly what I expected from Elizabeth. And she so delivered!
I loved that main character was a teenage girl, who didn't have typical "oh I am so ordinary and not very attractive, what does he see in me...." attitude. It was refreshing to read about someone who was confident, sweet, and good.
*** Doctor characters also work at Rivers ;) ****
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 30, 2016
I really enjoyed this book. I didn't expect to at first. It was a tad slow in the beginning, until I realized the slow pace was necessary to the plot.
It was reminiscent of two other witch series. But as it got going the plot drew me in. I really loved Sterling. I can only hope that not too much tragedy hits her in the next books.
I can't wait for the next book.
*** I received an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
It was reminiscent of two other witch series. But as it got going the plot drew me in. I really loved Sterling. I can only hope that not too much tragedy hits her in the next books.
I can't wait for the next book.
*** I received an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
April 29, 2016
I enjoyed reading this story. Starling learns that she is a major part of a prophecy and handles everything that comes her way with ease, understanding, and acceptance. She also has a chance to fall in love with Harlan who turns out to be her protector. Family is important to her and the love gives you strength. The story is part of a series and I look forward to reading more.
April 29, 2016
I absolutely loved this book! Rich, convoluted plots and a coming of age tale are interspersed with vast numbers of subplots those who've read Burgess's other books will recognize. I love YA Paranormal, and this story knocked that genre out of the park! ***I received an advanced copy of this book in exchange for my honest opinion.
April 12, 2016
2.5 stars - I liked the basic premise of this story, but was disappointed in its implementation and conclusion. Sorry, I wanted to love it.
April 19, 2017
I was provided with an ARC from the author for an honest review.
To be fair, I didn't finish this book. I found that I was forcing myself to read it about ~1/3 of the way in. The plot line and characters give this book (and author) so much potential. Unfortunately, the storytelling was poor and not at all captivating.
To be fair, I didn't finish this book. I found that I was forcing myself to read it about ~1/3 of the way in. The plot line and characters give this book (and author) so much potential. Unfortunately, the storytelling was poor and not at all captivating.
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