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How to Mend a Broken Heart: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Three years after Mr. Darcy’s disastrous marriage proposal to Elizabeth Bennet, they meet again. Due to an unexpected twist of fate, Elizabeth finds herself a guest in the home of Mr. Darcy’s aunt, the Dowager Lady Matlock. Long believing Elizabeth lost to him, Darcy has recently proposed marriage to an old flame, the widow of his friend. Now newly engaged Darcy encounters Elizabeth again and realizes she still owns his heart.
Although bound by honor to another, Darcy sets out to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him. Tension mounts between Darcy and Elizabeth in that pursuit, and Darcy’s betrothed begins to see Elizabeth as a threat to her upcoming marriage. How will Darcy and Elizabeth ever reach their happily ever after?
How to Mend a Broken Heart is a non-canon variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice and is intended for mature readers.
Although bound by honor to another, Darcy sets out to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him. Tension mounts between Darcy and Elizabeth in that pursuit, and Darcy’s betrothed begins to see Elizabeth as a threat to her upcoming marriage. How will Darcy and Elizabeth ever reach their happily ever after?
How to Mend a Broken Heart is a non-canon variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice and is intended for mature readers.
316 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 16, 2016
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L.S. Parsons
2 books2 followersL. S. (LEE) PARSONS is recently retired from a major computer company where she was employed as an Information Technology Specialist. She lives with Sherman, her husband of thirty-plus years, in the Dallas-Fort Worth area of Texas. They have one dog, Emmylou. Lee has been writing Pride and Prejudice fan fiction for more than ten years.
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June 4, 2017
2.46 rounded up to 3
This is a very strange P&P what if. It is really a P&P alternative universe where Lizzy left Kent the morning after the proposal in Kent because of a family emergency. The emergency is that Lydia has eloped from Meryton with Wickham and Mr. Bennet has gone to search for her. This in turn leads to Mr. Bennet's death, the remaining Bennet's being evicted from Longbourn and finding a home with a cousin of Mr. Bennet's Lady Weatherly. When this new cousin discovers how badly Lizzy is being treated by Mrs. Bennet she moves Lizzy into her home as a companion / protege. When the cousin, Emily, dies Lizzy travels to London to settle the estate and visit with the recently widowed Lady Matlock; yes that Lady Matlock- aunt to Darcy & Georgiana, mother to Col. Fitzwilliam. It turns out in order to claim her inheritance Lizzy must spend the season with Lady Matlock. Darcy, had given up all hope of finding Lizzy & the Bennets; had only the day before entered into an engagement with a widow, Mrs. Virginia Wagstaff.
I didn't like this Lizzy. This book is set 2, 3, 4 [it seems to vary] years following the disastrous proposal at Hunsford. Lizzy is still a volatile Miss. When told of her generous bequest from her cousin she immediately refuses it and wants to go back to Hertfordshire. This impulsiveness repeats throughout the story. And I really don't like this Darcy he tends to think with his little head.
If I had to sum up this book in one word it would be masculine. Now you might say who would write a Pride and Prejudice variation that is male oriented? Apparently this author. Here are my reasons for this observations.
If you are looking for Bennets aside from Lizzy they aren't here, despite her being in London she doesn't visit the Gardiners. They only make a brief appearance at the end of the book and they don't even have any lines.
This is a very strange P&P what if. It is really a P&P alternative universe where Lizzy left Kent the morning after the proposal in Kent because of a family emergency. The emergency is that Lydia has eloped from Meryton with Wickham and Mr. Bennet has gone to search for her. This in turn leads to Mr. Bennet's death, the remaining Bennet's being evicted from Longbourn and finding a home with a cousin of Mr. Bennet's Lady Weatherly. When this new cousin discovers how badly Lizzy is being treated by Mrs. Bennet she moves Lizzy into her home as a companion / protege. When the cousin, Emily, dies Lizzy travels to London to settle the estate and visit with the recently widowed Lady Matlock; yes that Lady Matlock- aunt to Darcy & Georgiana, mother to Col. Fitzwilliam. It turns out in order to claim her inheritance Lizzy must spend the season with Lady Matlock. Darcy, had given up all hope of finding Lizzy & the Bennets; had only the day before entered into an engagement with a widow, Mrs. Virginia Wagstaff.
I didn't like this Lizzy. This book is set 2, 3, 4 [it seems to vary] years following the disastrous proposal at Hunsford. Lizzy is still a volatile Miss. When told of her generous bequest from her cousin she immediately refuses it and wants to go back to Hertfordshire. This impulsiveness repeats throughout the story. And I really don't like this Darcy he tends to think with his little head.
If I had to sum up this book in one word it would be masculine. Now you might say who would write a Pride and Prejudice variation that is male oriented? Apparently this author. Here are my reasons for this observations.
If you are looking for Bennets aside from Lizzy they aren't here, despite her being in London she doesn't visit the Gardiners. They only make a brief appearance at the end of the book and they don't even have any lines.
March 26, 2016
Well, this is certainly a very lusty variation of Pride and Prejudice!
I appreciate the complete originality of the storyline. It's a complicated one. As described elsewhere, it begins more than 3 years after Darcy's first proposal to Elizabeth, and he hasn't seen her since that night. She received word from Longbourn that Lydia had gone off with Wickham, and she left Hunsford early the next day. Darcy only learned much later about the family crisis. When he tried to find Elizabeth, she and her family had disappeared. As this book begins, he has finally decided to give up his obsession with Elizabeth and marry another woman he had courted and lost a decade ago, Virginia Wagstaff, who is now a widow. As he begins telling his closest family members, they are not as pleased with his choice as he had expected. Even worse, a week after his proposal was accepted, he is shocked to find Elizabeth now living with his aunt, the Dowager Lady Matlock.
Elizabeth's family was torn apart after Lydia's ruin. Mr. Bennett's health suffered as a result, and he died not long afterward. Fortunately, Mr. Bennett's relations included his cousin Emily, the Countess of Webberley, who was able to intervene when Mr. Collins ejected the family from Longbourn and offer them the dower house on her estate. Lady Webberley recognized Mrs. Bennett's verbal abuse of Elizabeth, appreciated Elizabeth's intellect and wit similar to her father's, and employed Elizabeth as a companion to live in the main house with her. Now Lady Webberley has passed away. Elizabeth is the recipient of an inheritance, incumbent upon the stipulation that she have a London season under the guidance of Lady Webberley's good friend, the Dowager Lady Matlock, with whom this has all been arranged.
That just covers the backstory and the first few chapters.
Naturally, there's all kinds of angst with Darcy finally finding Elizabeth just after he's committed his life to someone else. Georgiana is having HER comeout London season and presentation to the Queen, so the proximity of their homes and his relationship with Lady Matlock make it easy for Darcy to spend lots of his time at Crandall House with Elizabeth. Meanwhile, Darcy's fiancee plots and pressures to get him into her bed and to set a date for their wedding; of course, he is desperately trying to get her to call it off.
There are so many great story elements here, including his relationships with his cousins, General Richard Fitzwilliam and Edward Fitzwilliam, who is the current Lord Matlock, as well as Edward's wife Julia and, of course, Georgiana. Charles Bingley also renews his friendship with Darcy and is shocked and dismayed to learn that Elizabeth's sister Jane is now happily married to someone else.
I have no objection to sexual content when done tastefully and to further the plot or deepen a romantic relationship. With so much already going on within this story, I found too much of the sexual content here to be completely gratuitous and distracting rather than enhancing the plot. Descriptions of the size of Darcy's erection and scenes of both male and female masturbation were unnecessary. What could have been a sweet story of lost love finally found but still out of reach instead just came across as dirty.
I'm sure I'm more of a prude than some readers, however, and I give this author props for having good writing chops and an excellent Pride and Prejudice tale with strong characters. The overuse of sex just ruined it for me, though.
I appreciate the complete originality of the storyline. It's a complicated one. As described elsewhere, it begins more than 3 years after Darcy's first proposal to Elizabeth, and he hasn't seen her since that night. She received word from Longbourn that Lydia had gone off with Wickham, and she left Hunsford early the next day. Darcy only learned much later about the family crisis. When he tried to find Elizabeth, she and her family had disappeared. As this book begins, he has finally decided to give up his obsession with Elizabeth and marry another woman he had courted and lost a decade ago, Virginia Wagstaff, who is now a widow. As he begins telling his closest family members, they are not as pleased with his choice as he had expected. Even worse, a week after his proposal was accepted, he is shocked to find Elizabeth now living with his aunt, the Dowager Lady Matlock.
Elizabeth's family was torn apart after Lydia's ruin. Mr. Bennett's health suffered as a result, and he died not long afterward. Fortunately, Mr. Bennett's relations included his cousin Emily, the Countess of Webberley, who was able to intervene when Mr. Collins ejected the family from Longbourn and offer them the dower house on her estate. Lady Webberley recognized Mrs. Bennett's verbal abuse of Elizabeth, appreciated Elizabeth's intellect and wit similar to her father's, and employed Elizabeth as a companion to live in the main house with her. Now Lady Webberley has passed away. Elizabeth is the recipient of an inheritance, incumbent upon the stipulation that she have a London season under the guidance of Lady Webberley's good friend, the Dowager Lady Matlock, with whom this has all been arranged.
That just covers the backstory and the first few chapters.
Naturally, there's all kinds of angst with Darcy finally finding Elizabeth just after he's committed his life to someone else. Georgiana is having HER comeout London season and presentation to the Queen, so the proximity of their homes and his relationship with Lady Matlock make it easy for Darcy to spend lots of his time at Crandall House with Elizabeth. Meanwhile, Darcy's fiancee plots and pressures to get him into her bed and to set a date for their wedding; of course, he is desperately trying to get her to call it off.
There are so many great story elements here, including his relationships with his cousins, General Richard Fitzwilliam and Edward Fitzwilliam, who is the current Lord Matlock, as well as Edward's wife Julia and, of course, Georgiana. Charles Bingley also renews his friendship with Darcy and is shocked and dismayed to learn that Elizabeth's sister Jane is now happily married to someone else.
I have no objection to sexual content when done tastefully and to further the plot or deepen a romantic relationship. With so much already going on within this story, I found too much of the sexual content here to be completely gratuitous and distracting rather than enhancing the plot. Descriptions of the size of Darcy's erection and scenes of both male and female masturbation were unnecessary. What could have been a sweet story of lost love finally found but still out of reach instead just came across as dirty.
I'm sure I'm more of a prude than some readers, however, and I give this author props for having good writing chops and an excellent Pride and Prejudice tale with strong characters. The overuse of sex just ruined it for me, though.
March 31, 2016
“Oh, if only I had waited…..”
How many times in life or in novels does one read this phrase used as a starting point or the main premise?
This story was totally engrossing and I found myself with blurry eyes at the very end. As the book description and other reviews tell us, three years after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford, Darcy has reached a point of resolve that in not being able to forget nor locate Elizabeth, in not being able to prove to her he has taken her reproofs to heart, he must move on with his life, even if it means as a shell of a man.
Darcy has learned that Mr. Bennet has died and his heir, Collins, has taken over Longbourn and forced Mrs. Bennet and her daughters to vacate the premises. He has not learned of the debacle of Lydia’s elopement. (That is revealed much later in this story.) Darcy has searched for E. with no satisfaction. Residents of Meryton can give him no information. His cousins, Lord Matlock - Edward, and Richard (now General Fitzwilliam) and Bingley remain close and intimate friends. Georgiana is on the verge of her presentation to the Queen and her first season in London. Edward’s wife is expecting her sixth child and has in attendance not only Georgiana (as Julia is sponsoring G.) but also a friend, a widow, who shows up insisting that she will be there to help her in guiding Georgiana as Julia’s confinement will drain her energies. Darcy sees this woman, Virginia Wagstaff, in a positive light and as he had courted her at the same time she was being wooed by her first husband, just prior to Darcy’s father’s death, remembers how attracted he was to her at that time and sees her as a suitable person to fill the roles his wife would be required to fill. He makes an impulsive decision to propose without discussion of such with any of his family or friends and thus, as we immediately hear that they all ask “Why didn’t you talk this over with me?”, we know that is more to the woman and her character than we have learned about in reading of Darcy’s thoughts.
Meanwhile: Elizabeth, her mother and sisters have been cruelly forced out of Longbourn BUT rescued by a distant cousin of Mr. Bennet’s, one Emily, the Countess of Webberley, who not only provides the family with a place to live, but also intervenes when witnessing the relationship between Mrs. Bennet and Elizabeth. In taking Elizabeth in to live at her home she finds a missing part of her life – a substitute daughter. And what is even more ironic is the fact that Emily is best friends with Susan, the Dowager Lady Matlock. So upon Emily’s death Susan steps in to continue Emily’s role as friend and mentor to Elizabeth. And the icing on the cake is that Emily’s will now forces a decision on Elizabeth which finds ODC once again in each other’s acquaintance and vicinity. Crandall House and Darcy House sit back to back.
So the story goes. A man engaged finds a lost love and can see no way to end his engagement without ruining his family’s reputation much less having to pay out a lot of money for jilting that “lady”. And the other part of this triangle finds the more she is in his company the more her feelings are becoming the opposite of what they were 3 years ago. And don’t even ask what the reaction of the third party is – she is not going to take this situation in a manner anywhere calm or reasonable. What a tangled web! General Fitzwilliam perceives the dilemma early. We, the readers, are told in detail (too many at times) of the passions and desires on the part of our players. And we, along with our dear couple, are not just sure how this is going to be resolved…although you know, you must know, we will get our HEA.
Susan is such a dear and wise mother-figure for her sons, her nephew and her “adopted daughter”, Elizabeth. She is not fooled by Darcy’s plan to aid E. in her preparing for her presentation. And she does give sound advice more than once. Her own story of love and marriage was a sweet treat to read.
Friends you will find that looking in on private scenes of sexual titillation for Darcy and his fiancée, much less for other major and secondary characters to be just a little too much information (as Debbie and/or Claudine state) but I do know you will find fascination is reading of the rekindling of Darcy’s ardor and the building of Elizabeth’s. And then there is Georgiana who learns to manage all those seeking her hand upon her entry into society. Well done, dear girl.
I did so enjoy this story and, if you can either ignore or suffer through scenes of a much too private nature you may find that you do also.
PS: I am an adult. I know these practices are common. BUT even if realistic, I read for romance between two people - not how to relieve sexual tension when alone. Don’t need to know size of his or her *** please.
How many times in life or in novels does one read this phrase used as a starting point or the main premise?
This story was totally engrossing and I found myself with blurry eyes at the very end. As the book description and other reviews tell us, three years after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford, Darcy has reached a point of resolve that in not being able to forget nor locate Elizabeth, in not being able to prove to her he has taken her reproofs to heart, he must move on with his life, even if it means as a shell of a man.
Darcy has learned that Mr. Bennet has died and his heir, Collins, has taken over Longbourn and forced Mrs. Bennet and her daughters to vacate the premises. He has not learned of the debacle of Lydia’s elopement. (That is revealed much later in this story.) Darcy has searched for E. with no satisfaction. Residents of Meryton can give him no information. His cousins, Lord Matlock - Edward, and Richard (now General Fitzwilliam) and Bingley remain close and intimate friends. Georgiana is on the verge of her presentation to the Queen and her first season in London. Edward’s wife is expecting her sixth child and has in attendance not only Georgiana (as Julia is sponsoring G.) but also a friend, a widow, who shows up insisting that she will be there to help her in guiding Georgiana as Julia’s confinement will drain her energies. Darcy sees this woman, Virginia Wagstaff, in a positive light and as he had courted her at the same time she was being wooed by her first husband, just prior to Darcy’s father’s death, remembers how attracted he was to her at that time and sees her as a suitable person to fill the roles his wife would be required to fill. He makes an impulsive decision to propose without discussion of such with any of his family or friends and thus, as we immediately hear that they all ask “Why didn’t you talk this over with me?”, we know that is more to the woman and her character than we have learned about in reading of Darcy’s thoughts.
Meanwhile: Elizabeth, her mother and sisters have been cruelly forced out of Longbourn BUT rescued by a distant cousin of Mr. Bennet’s, one Emily, the Countess of Webberley, who not only provides the family with a place to live, but also intervenes when witnessing the relationship between Mrs. Bennet and Elizabeth. In taking Elizabeth in to live at her home she finds a missing part of her life – a substitute daughter. And what is even more ironic is the fact that Emily is best friends with Susan, the Dowager Lady Matlock. So upon Emily’s death Susan steps in to continue Emily’s role as friend and mentor to Elizabeth. And the icing on the cake is that Emily’s will now forces a decision on Elizabeth which finds ODC once again in each other’s acquaintance and vicinity. Crandall House and Darcy House sit back to back.
So the story goes. A man engaged finds a lost love and can see no way to end his engagement without ruining his family’s reputation much less having to pay out a lot of money for jilting that “lady”. And the other part of this triangle finds the more she is in his company the more her feelings are becoming the opposite of what they were 3 years ago. And don’t even ask what the reaction of the third party is – she is not going to take this situation in a manner anywhere calm or reasonable. What a tangled web! General Fitzwilliam perceives the dilemma early. We, the readers, are told in detail (too many at times) of the passions and desires on the part of our players. And we, along with our dear couple, are not just sure how this is going to be resolved…although you know, you must know, we will get our HEA.
Susan is such a dear and wise mother-figure for her sons, her nephew and her “adopted daughter”, Elizabeth. She is not fooled by Darcy’s plan to aid E. in her preparing for her presentation. And she does give sound advice more than once. Her own story of love and marriage was a sweet treat to read.
Friends you will find that looking in on private scenes of sexual titillation for Darcy and his fiancée, much less for other major and secondary characters to be just a little too much information (as Debbie and/or Claudine state) but I do know you will find fascination is reading of the rekindling of Darcy’s ardor and the building of Elizabeth’s. And then there is Georgiana who learns to manage all those seeking her hand upon her entry into society. Well done, dear girl.
I did so enjoy this story and, if you can either ignore or suffer through scenes of a much too private nature you may find that you do also.
PS: I am an adult. I know these practices are common. BUT even if realistic, I read for romance between two people - not how to relieve sexual tension when alone. Don’t need to know size of his or her *** please.
March 20, 2016
BE ADVISED: This story contains explicit sexual scenes.
... no complaints from me ;)
... no complaints from me ;)
February 3, 2025
After reading some reviews I was a bit apprehensive but the Linda Berdoll resemblance mentioned made me dive in.
Although nothing like Berdoll 's angst filled, teeth rattling novels it was high on tension and suspense. A lot of groping, arousal and mastrubation alluded to but not explicitly described. It seems like everyone is extremely sexually aware. It has a good plot but I felt it needed a bit more in the ending on the widow and miss Bingley and it was a bit predictable.
It was average, lacking in depth and plot development.
Although nothing like Berdoll 's angst filled, teeth rattling novels it was high on tension and suspense. A lot of groping, arousal and mastrubation alluded to but not explicitly described. It seems like everyone is extremely sexually aware. It has a good plot but I felt it needed a bit more in the ending on the widow and miss Bingley and it was a bit predictable.
It was average, lacking in depth and plot development.
May 28, 2020
I really did not enjoy this at all. The general idea is quite good - the Lydia/Wickham situation happens earlier, right after the disastrous proposal so Elizabeth leaves prior to getting Darcys letter. There is no contact for 3 years as Darcy wasn't able to find Elizabeth as the Bennet family left Hertfordshire following the death of Mr Bennet. Having given up hope of finding Elizabeth, Darcy decides he's lonely and asks Mrs Wagstaff, a widow, to marry him. Would you believe it when the next day he walks into Lady Matlocks drawing room to find Elizabeth taking tea. Of course he is now engaged and can't go back on his word but is still in love with Elizabeth.
There are so many things wrong here... Mrs Wagstaff is vile. Darcy would never have proposed to her. He couldn't find Elizabeth?? Really??? For 3 years?? Unlikely. I wasnt convinced by the consequences the Darcy family would have faced if Darcy himself called off the engagement. My understanding is that men were relatively unscathed by such scandal. The first 20% of this book is an explanation of everything that has gone on so far.... lots of telling to explain the changes to the timeline and some original characters. Colonel Fitzwilliam is a general. Not really sure why.... but my biggest complaint about this book is the sexual content. I don't mind sexual content at times... but this is a really sexual book. Lots of sexual discussion which just wouldn't happen. Lady Matlock discussing the size of Darcys penis with Elizabeth was just too much for me. Darcy is just sex obsessed and spends most of the book with an erection. He is also obsessed with breasts and has been very sexually active and seems known as a bit of a cad. He was like a randy teenager.... and this just undermined the idea if a relationship based on love - I got the impression he just wanted to see Elizabeth's breasts.... this book is also far too long. The only Bennet in this book is Elizabeth. The others get a brief mention but we dont meet any of them.
I dont know whether I just wasn't in the mood for this but the more I read, the more annoyed I got. I shouldn't have finished it. It didnt improve and actually I think got worse... not one I can recommend.
There are so many things wrong here... Mrs Wagstaff is vile. Darcy would never have proposed to her. He couldn't find Elizabeth?? Really??? For 3 years?? Unlikely. I wasnt convinced by the consequences the Darcy family would have faced if Darcy himself called off the engagement. My understanding is that men were relatively unscathed by such scandal. The first 20% of this book is an explanation of everything that has gone on so far.... lots of telling to explain the changes to the timeline and some original characters. Colonel Fitzwilliam is a general. Not really sure why.... but my biggest complaint about this book is the sexual content. I don't mind sexual content at times... but this is a really sexual book. Lots of sexual discussion which just wouldn't happen. Lady Matlock discussing the size of Darcys penis with Elizabeth was just too much for me. Darcy is just sex obsessed and spends most of the book with an erection. He is also obsessed with breasts and has been very sexually active and seems known as a bit of a cad. He was like a randy teenager.... and this just undermined the idea if a relationship based on love - I got the impression he just wanted to see Elizabeth's breasts.... this book is also far too long. The only Bennet in this book is Elizabeth. The others get a brief mention but we dont meet any of them.
I dont know whether I just wasn't in the mood for this but the more I read, the more annoyed I got. I shouldn't have finished it. It didnt improve and actually I think got worse... not one I can recommend.
May 30, 2016
Totally off canon, but interesting variation. Lots of sexual contact.
May 24, 2016
I think from the variety of reviews you can draw some pictures of what to expect but if your like me you like to check them all out. I am not discouraged if my D&E are written between the sheets but I want to feel that connection, loyalty, devotion, and depth that follows all that. This one paints some obstacles that last most of the book. It comes in a form of a widow who has, shall we say wild taste in her bed sport, and even when she learns Darcy's heart does not belong to her is determined to have him even if she needs to force what should not be. I have read versions with Caroline behaving like this but it is not her so we are treated to a new character. Also Lizzy is not at Longbourne so the part of the cast is not present. Jane's story felt like the author didn't know what to do with her so she just penned something short for her. Lizzy and her were notthe close sisters as we all remember in this tale. Darcy's aunt Lady Matlock plays a big part in the couples future and I really liked the part she played. Colonel Fitzwilliam is now a General and while I liked him, he had sort of a sad story IMO. The author treats us to an Epilogue so you learn the future for everyone and while he lives the life of popular bachelor, it seems, I thought it sad he was not attached to someone special. Okay, so as I have said our couple is kept with a dark cloud hovering over them and the two know in their hearts they are lost. I loved them together but did not believe Lizzy would go to the extremes she's prepared for. Without giving away too much the time period that D&E live in would not have been kind to the repercussions that would follow their assignation and they are both too responsible to jeopardize the future of any results that would follow their decision. There are other surprises that I enjoyed, like Bingley and Georgianna. I loved them together and when you get the love scenes theirs are not excluded from that. I liked a more confident Bingley except one detail. Picture this Bingley and Georgianna are basking in the after glow when he becomes alarmed at the sight of blood. It is Georgianna who has to explain to him that it is normal and natural and that it is proof of her chastity. He is an educated gentleman from Cambridge but has no knowledge of this? Lastly, Lizzy's reaction to being free to be with William confused me a bit. It just felt like the authors attempt for another brief impediment. I felt they deserved their moment and it stole some of its strength. Bingley and Georgianna's wedding nighty got as much limelight as D&E. I liked their story but felt the story was shared with them not as a secondary at this point and Bingley was more demanding of their privacy then was Darcy and that bothered me. The flaws I have pointed out obviously affected my overall rating the biggest being the separation of ODC. The other was Darcy's crudeness of their passion. I wanted him to be more romantic like Bingley instead he waited for Lizzy to start the show from the leaving of the reception and he had minimal foreplay just cut to the chase IMO. The other big turn off was the multiple mention of Darcy's earlier escapades. YUK! He is considered a legend among the men apparently it is said. I like my Darcy written with more respect for woman no matter their chosen profession. I've read of past mistresses and been okay but several woman and a reputation is gross to me. If you like this story I recommend Linda Berdoll''s Darcy Takes A Wife. Enjoy!
March 24, 2016
Awesome P&P alternative
This author captured the essences of our beloved characters. The story alternative is one I've never even came close to reading. A one of a kind. In this alternative everything happens wrong right after the failed proposal at the Hunsford parsonage. Lydia elopes and Darcy never gets too deliver the letter. So the consequences end up being dire. The story starts out 3yrs later and as the story progresses you get the back filled info.
I read this wonderful story in less than 20 hrs, it was so wonderful. It had the right amount of angst and unrequited love with really a wonderful villain in Darcy's betroth. A definite must read!
This author captured the essences of our beloved characters. The story alternative is one I've never even came close to reading. A one of a kind. In this alternative everything happens wrong right after the failed proposal at the Hunsford parsonage. Lydia elopes and Darcy never gets too deliver the letter. So the consequences end up being dire. The story starts out 3yrs later and as the story progresses you get the back filled info.
I read this wonderful story in less than 20 hrs, it was so wonderful. It had the right amount of angst and unrequited love with really a wonderful villain in Darcy's betroth. A definite must read!
May 22, 2016
Sex and Saga in Abundance
This is a pretty good story. Interesting, fun premise for the most part, replete with heroes, heroines and villains. If, for some personal reason you don't approve of the concept that folks back in 1812 were horny, Do Not Read this book. However, if you enjoy the randy aspects of the Regency Ton, have at it. I particularly appreciated the characterization of the Colonel, a secondary entity of the plot, but apparently, first in the boudoirs of high society, and hence, duly earning his JAFF moniker of 'Studmuffin' - LOL.
This is a pretty good story. Interesting, fun premise for the most part, replete with heroes, heroines and villains. If, for some personal reason you don't approve of the concept that folks back in 1812 were horny, Do Not Read this book. However, if you enjoy the randy aspects of the Regency Ton, have at it. I particularly appreciated the characterization of the Colonel, a secondary entity of the plot, but apparently, first in the boudoirs of high society, and hence, duly earning his JAFF moniker of 'Studmuffin' - LOL.
March 29, 2016
How to Mend a Broken Heart
Interesting variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice. The story starts about three years after Darcy's disastrous proposal to Elizabeth. With the death of Mr. Bennet, the remaining Bennets are removed from Longbourn. Her father's cousin, Lady Emily Webberley comes for a visit and when she sees how Elizabeth is treated by her mother, she offers the Dowager's house, Peach Cottage, to Mrs. Bennet and the remaining daughters, but she takes Elizabeth to the manor house, Standfield Hall Bingley never returned to Netherfield, so when she's asked by the rector in Brandford. Although Mr. Nash was almost twice her age, Jane found happiness. When Lady Webberley dies, Jane invited her to live at the parsonage in Branford, but before she returns, her cousin sent her to London to her friend, Lady Suzan Fitzwilliam. For the last year, Suzan has remained a hermit after the death of her husband, James. Jamie was the love of her life and she's finding it difficult to return to society. She's drinking to relieve the pain of losing her husband. Her oldest son and his wife, Edward and Julia Fitzwilliam, the new Lord and Lady Matlock, visit often since Julia is to help Georgiana's coming out. Back to Darcy. He's spent years in misery, first Elizabeth's rejection, then thinking on what she said was true, then finds out that Mr. Bennet has died, returns to Meryton trying to find his Elizabeth. He and the investigators he hired spent time searching for her only to make him lost and loneliest he's ever been. Visiting Dovecote, Darcy meets Virginia Bartleby Wagstaff, a widow that married his friend from Cambridge. Darcy at one point considered marriage to her during her first season, but his father's illness brought him back to Pemberley. Virginia married his friend thinking it was better than waiting for Darcy. Being in his self inflicted mourning for losing Elizabeth, he decides to move on and ask her marry him. He doesn't love her, and he knows that she doesn't love him. Before he can propose, he's called away by Lady Catherine. Upon returning to Dovecote, Darcy proposes to Virginia. Both Edward and Julia are shocked, because they know things about her that would make Darcy sorry he didn't seek information about her after not seeing her for ten years. Being in a fog over not finding Elizabeth, Darcy didn't notice her slutty behaviour and manner of dress. When Darcy, Virginia, and Georgiana come to dinner in honor of Richard returning from training new recruits, Darcy is stunned to see Elizabeth enter the room with his Aunt Suzan. Now he wishes that he had rushed into proposing without much thought. Darcy sees that she is happy to see him to apologize for Hunsford and what she said. She doesn't tell him about Lydia and Wickham. As Darcy begins coming around to help his Aunt get Elizabeth ready for her presentation at St. James, she has fallen in love with Darcy and it is too late. At the ball, Sir William Lucas and Mr. Collins are attending the affair. Collins sees Elizabeth and grabs her by the arm telling her that she doesn't belong amongst these dignified crowd. He tells her to turn around and leave. Darcy rescues her from Collins. Darcy almost kisses her before Lady Suzan stops him. Edward and Julia Fitzwilliam throw a ball in Georgiana's honor of coming out in society. Darcy continues to watch her much to Virginia's dismay. She plans her revenge. She's already raised Darcy's ire. Elizabeth has a scheduled dance with Sir Albert Murphy. Darcy can tell by the look on her face that she's not enjoying this dance with him. She rushes outside for some fresh air not knowing Sir Albert is following her. Darcy thinks Virginia has put Sir Albert to confront her to compromise her. He follows and as he approaches Elizabeth, Sir Albert is bent over howling in misery clutching his crotch. General Fitzwilliam taught her where to kick an gentleman that would make them want to avoid her. Instead of going inside, they begin to kiss. Worried that may get caught, he leads her to a dark alcove and have at. Eventually, they break apart, and she leaves Darcy to control his ardour. Unfortunately, his intended finds him and realizes he doesn't get that way with her. Elizabeth has decided that she will never marry, but she wants something to remind of Darcy and makes him a proposition. He convinces his Aunt Suzan to allow him to talk with her, and his plan is hidden in a pocket at the back inside cover. She agrees to this plan, and makes arrangements to visit Jane in Hertfordshire. Then on her way to spend weeks with the only man she loves hopefully to returned with a remembrance of her love. Darcy is trying to rid himself of his intended as is Edward, Richard, and Bingley. Right before Bingley's wedding to Georgiana, Richard's plan to free Darcy comes to fruition. The four men go to her house and catch her in a compromised situation with Sir Albert. Officially Darcy breaks their engagement. The crazy woman says that she will ruin the Darcy The crazy woman says that she will ruin the Darcy's family name, but little did she realize that she would bound and gagged. Her maid and Sir Albert were also detained in the room until Edward and Richard Fitzwilliam get all their plans in order. The newly wedded couple will be taking a honeymoon trip to Ireland where their will stay and remain under constant watch. Loved the clever Fitzwilliam boys. When Lady Suzan Fitzwilliam realizes that Darcy is free of the widow Virginia Wagstaff, she allows time for Darcy and Elizabeth to meet to flesh out their wedding plans. With a special license, the family travels to Pemberley to prepare for the wedding. They both find that they have insatiable desires. Steamy sexual scenes throughout the book, so if this is not your cup of tea, don't read the book and complain you weren't warned!
Interesting variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice. The story starts about three years after Darcy's disastrous proposal to Elizabeth. With the death of Mr. Bennet, the remaining Bennets are removed from Longbourn. Her father's cousin, Lady Emily Webberley comes for a visit and when she sees how Elizabeth is treated by her mother, she offers the Dowager's house, Peach Cottage, to Mrs. Bennet and the remaining daughters, but she takes Elizabeth to the manor house, Standfield Hall Bingley never returned to Netherfield, so when she's asked by the rector in Brandford. Although Mr. Nash was almost twice her age, Jane found happiness. When Lady Webberley dies, Jane invited her to live at the parsonage in Branford, but before she returns, her cousin sent her to London to her friend, Lady Suzan Fitzwilliam. For the last year, Suzan has remained a hermit after the death of her husband, James. Jamie was the love of her life and she's finding it difficult to return to society. She's drinking to relieve the pain of losing her husband. Her oldest son and his wife, Edward and Julia Fitzwilliam, the new Lord and Lady Matlock, visit often since Julia is to help Georgiana's coming out. Back to Darcy. He's spent years in misery, first Elizabeth's rejection, then thinking on what she said was true, then finds out that Mr. Bennet has died, returns to Meryton trying to find his Elizabeth. He and the investigators he hired spent time searching for her only to make him lost and loneliest he's ever been. Visiting Dovecote, Darcy meets Virginia Bartleby Wagstaff, a widow that married his friend from Cambridge. Darcy at one point considered marriage to her during her first season, but his father's illness brought him back to Pemberley. Virginia married his friend thinking it was better than waiting for Darcy. Being in his self inflicted mourning for losing Elizabeth, he decides to move on and ask her marry him. He doesn't love her, and he knows that she doesn't love him. Before he can propose, he's called away by Lady Catherine. Upon returning to Dovecote, Darcy proposes to Virginia. Both Edward and Julia are shocked, because they know things about her that would make Darcy sorry he didn't seek information about her after not seeing her for ten years. Being in a fog over not finding Elizabeth, Darcy didn't notice her slutty behaviour and manner of dress. When Darcy, Virginia, and Georgiana come to dinner in honor of Richard returning from training new recruits, Darcy is stunned to see Elizabeth enter the room with his Aunt Suzan. Now he wishes that he had rushed into proposing without much thought. Darcy sees that she is happy to see him to apologize for Hunsford and what she said. She doesn't tell him about Lydia and Wickham. As Darcy begins coming around to help his Aunt get Elizabeth ready for her presentation at St. James, she has fallen in love with Darcy and it is too late. At the ball, Sir William Lucas and Mr. Collins are attending the affair. Collins sees Elizabeth and grabs her by the arm telling her that she doesn't belong amongst these dignified crowd. He tells her to turn around and leave. Darcy rescues her from Collins. Darcy almost kisses her before Lady Suzan stops him. Edward and Julia Fitzwilliam throw a ball in Georgiana's honor of coming out in society. Darcy continues to watch her much to Virginia's dismay. She plans her revenge. She's already raised Darcy's ire. Elizabeth has a scheduled dance with Sir Albert Murphy. Darcy can tell by the look on her face that she's not enjoying this dance with him. She rushes outside for some fresh air not knowing Sir Albert is following her. Darcy thinks Virginia has put Sir Albert to confront her to compromise her. He follows and as he approaches Elizabeth, Sir Albert is bent over howling in misery clutching his crotch. General Fitzwilliam taught her where to kick an gentleman that would make them want to avoid her. Instead of going inside, they begin to kiss. Worried that may get caught, he leads her to a dark alcove and have at. Eventually, they break apart, and she leaves Darcy to control his ardour. Unfortunately, his intended finds him and realizes he doesn't get that way with her. Elizabeth has decided that she will never marry, but she wants something to remind of Darcy and makes him a proposition. He convinces his Aunt Suzan to allow him to talk with her, and his plan is hidden in a pocket at the back inside cover. She agrees to this plan, and makes arrangements to visit Jane in Hertfordshire. Then on her way to spend weeks with the only man she loves hopefully to returned with a remembrance of her love. Darcy is trying to rid himself of his intended as is Edward, Richard, and Bingley. Right before Bingley's wedding to Georgiana, Richard's plan to free Darcy comes to fruition. The four men go to her house and catch her in a compromised situation with Sir Albert. Officially Darcy breaks their engagement. The crazy woman says that she will ruin the Darcy The crazy woman says that she will ruin the Darcy's family name, but little did she realize that she would bound and gagged. Her maid and Sir Albert were also detained in the room until Edward and Richard Fitzwilliam get all their plans in order. The newly wedded couple will be taking a honeymoon trip to Ireland where their will stay and remain under constant watch. Loved the clever Fitzwilliam boys. When Lady Suzan Fitzwilliam realizes that Darcy is free of the widow Virginia Wagstaff, she allows time for Darcy and Elizabeth to meet to flesh out their wedding plans. With a special license, the family travels to Pemberley to prepare for the wedding. They both find that they have insatiable desires. Steamy sexual scenes throughout the book, so if this is not your cup of tea, don't read the book and complain you weren't warned!
July 3, 2016
I am always honest with my reviews and I am not going to change that, so to start with I have to pint out that I have really enjoyed the story of How to mend a broken heart; however there are a couple of scenes that I dislike due to the way they are written. I do not mind passion between Darcy and Elizabeth, but I do not like crude and a bit vulgar descriptions. In this book there are a lot of erotic/sexual innuendoes or descriptions but two or three of them I found them quite lacking.
Said that, I need to repeat that the story, the plot is really good. L. S. Parsons has made really intriguing twists on How to mend a broken heart where, obviously, Darcy and Elizabeth are the protagonist but we also see other Pride and Prejudice characters in a different light and she invents new characters who are key in this story.
What if Mr. Darcy is engaged when Elizabeth comes back to his life after three years of separation? What if Elizabeth has endured a horrible time with so many tragedies that she has decided not to marry at all? What if Elizabeth has he first season and her sponsor is Lady Matlock? What if Georgina becomes a non-shy girl anymore because she is in love and loved in return?
L.S. Parsons shows a desperate Darcy who proposes to an old friend because he has lost all hope to conquer Miss Bennet’s heart because she is nowhere to be found. Without talking to anyone, he proposes to Mrs. Wagstaff because he knows he needs an heir. Just a week after his engagement, he goes to visit his aunt to give her the news, Lady Matlock, to find Elizabeth living with her!
Darcy could do nothing but stare intensely at Elizabeth, though his agitation was noticeable to all by the tremor of his hand and the saucer clinking of his cup upon its saucer. (chapter 6)
When Darcy is able to return to his normal self and after not being able to believe his fate, he decides that he will improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him as he cannot win her heart anymore. Remember: Mr. Darcy is above all an honourable man and he will not disgrace his family breaking his engagement.
There is a tiny problem: his idea is to become friends with Miss Bennet but as the Spanish saying states “when there was a fire, embers remain” and Darcy is as in love with her as he was three years before when he proposed at the Hunsford Parsonage. Nobody apart from them two knows about that time together, so apart from, now General Fitzwilliam, everybody at the beginning think that he is being a gentleman when he offers to help his aunt to teach everything that Elizabeth needs to have her first season in London and to be presented at court.
Darcy’s betrothed is the widow of one of his friends, so you can imagine that after having had two sons, she is not a naive girl anymore, she wants to bed Darcy as soon as possible. Virginia, Mrs Wagstaff, is the opposite to a virtuous woman, she is provocative and she likes to have all men looking at her. Fortunately, Darcy is not complying and he actually has a good “excuse”: focusing on Georgiana who is having finally her first season. As usual, Darcy and Georgiana’s relationship is a nice as always but in this book we can read about a grown up Miss Darcy who becomes a woman.
Lady Matlock is suspicious and she finds Darcy and Lizzy almost kissing in public! Darcy was just comforting her after an encounter with Mr. Collins (I think you will hate him as much I do in this book). Lady Matlock talks to both and tries to put some sense on both heads, mainly in Darcy’s. However, Elizabeth’s feelings “had undergone so material a change” that it is also difficult for her to avoid him.
Mrs. Wagstaff dislikes the attention that his betrothed is paying to a “country chit” and she has her own “abilities” to get rid of the problem, but does she succeed?
You will see how the attraction between Mr. Darcy and Miss Bennet grows and how Miss Bennet intends to go away from him but having him at the same time❤
Will they find their happy ending?
Said that, I need to repeat that the story, the plot is really good. L. S. Parsons has made really intriguing twists on How to mend a broken heart where, obviously, Darcy and Elizabeth are the protagonist but we also see other Pride and Prejudice characters in a different light and she invents new characters who are key in this story.
What if Mr. Darcy is engaged when Elizabeth comes back to his life after three years of separation? What if Elizabeth has endured a horrible time with so many tragedies that she has decided not to marry at all? What if Elizabeth has he first season and her sponsor is Lady Matlock? What if Georgina becomes a non-shy girl anymore because she is in love and loved in return?
L.S. Parsons shows a desperate Darcy who proposes to an old friend because he has lost all hope to conquer Miss Bennet’s heart because she is nowhere to be found. Without talking to anyone, he proposes to Mrs. Wagstaff because he knows he needs an heir. Just a week after his engagement, he goes to visit his aunt to give her the news, Lady Matlock, to find Elizabeth living with her!
Darcy could do nothing but stare intensely at Elizabeth, though his agitation was noticeable to all by the tremor of his hand and the saucer clinking of his cup upon its saucer. (chapter 6)
When Darcy is able to return to his normal self and after not being able to believe his fate, he decides that he will improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him as he cannot win her heart anymore. Remember: Mr. Darcy is above all an honourable man and he will not disgrace his family breaking his engagement.
There is a tiny problem: his idea is to become friends with Miss Bennet but as the Spanish saying states “when there was a fire, embers remain” and Darcy is as in love with her as he was three years before when he proposed at the Hunsford Parsonage. Nobody apart from them two knows about that time together, so apart from, now General Fitzwilliam, everybody at the beginning think that he is being a gentleman when he offers to help his aunt to teach everything that Elizabeth needs to have her first season in London and to be presented at court.
Darcy’s betrothed is the widow of one of his friends, so you can imagine that after having had two sons, she is not a naive girl anymore, she wants to bed Darcy as soon as possible. Virginia, Mrs Wagstaff, is the opposite to a virtuous woman, she is provocative and she likes to have all men looking at her. Fortunately, Darcy is not complying and he actually has a good “excuse”: focusing on Georgiana who is having finally her first season. As usual, Darcy and Georgiana’s relationship is a nice as always but in this book we can read about a grown up Miss Darcy who becomes a woman.
Lady Matlock is suspicious and she finds Darcy and Lizzy almost kissing in public! Darcy was just comforting her after an encounter with Mr. Collins (I think you will hate him as much I do in this book). Lady Matlock talks to both and tries to put some sense on both heads, mainly in Darcy’s. However, Elizabeth’s feelings “had undergone so material a change” that it is also difficult for her to avoid him.
Mrs. Wagstaff dislikes the attention that his betrothed is paying to a “country chit” and she has her own “abilities” to get rid of the problem, but does she succeed?
You will see how the attraction between Mr. Darcy and Miss Bennet grows and how Miss Bennet intends to go away from him but having him at the same time❤
Will they find their happy ending?
January 9, 2021
A really good book!
After years of reading various P&P stories about Darcy and Lizzy I found myself not wanting to put it down. A well written story,
Edited and worth the read.
The Bennet's fall on hard times due to Lydia and Mr. Bennet's passing. Lizzy has spent three years growing as a person and learning more about life than a young woman should. Mrs. Bennet is still the same to Lizzy. Miss bingley is still her wacky self, so there is no let down with those two characters. Mr Collins gets his but in a nicer way. Darcy spends three years trying to forget his love for Lizzy and in a moment of weakness offers marriage to a woman he thinks will be a good partner. Then he finds Lizzy and Darcy loses it.
The plot was great and well thought out. I recommend this book to anyone who loves reading about Lizzy and Darcy.
After years of reading various P&P stories about Darcy and Lizzy I found myself not wanting to put it down. A well written story,
Edited and worth the read.
The Bennet's fall on hard times due to Lydia and Mr. Bennet's passing. Lizzy has spent three years growing as a person and learning more about life than a young woman should. Mrs. Bennet is still the same to Lizzy. Miss bingley is still her wacky self, so there is no let down with those two characters. Mr Collins gets his but in a nicer way. Darcy spends three years trying to forget his love for Lizzy and in a moment of weakness offers marriage to a woman he thinks will be a good partner. Then he finds Lizzy and Darcy loses it.
The plot was great and well thought out. I recommend this book to anyone who loves reading about Lizzy and Darcy.
June 9, 2016
While in theory I have no problem with some more adult content in my Pride and Prejudice retellings, there were entirely too many scenes where Darcy borderline hallucinates a naked Elizabeth in his bed. I'm more concerned about his mental state than I am how he's going to escape of his out-of-character engagement to finally get his hands on Elizabeth's apparently enormous rack.
Nothing engaging here, just more words devoted to how Charles Bingley thinks his junk looks than anyone really needs to read.
Nothing engaging here, just more words devoted to how Charles Bingley thinks his junk looks than anyone really needs to read.
April 1, 2016
Good story - bad sex
This was a unique story line and could have been a great variation as the author can write but there was wayyyyyy too much sexual content. I am quite happy to read mature content once it is well done and adds to the story but this was awful, very vulgar, mechanical and nothing sensual at all, it completely destroyed what could have been a great read. If these scenes can't be written well they should be left out!
This was a unique story line and could have been a great variation as the author can write but there was wayyyyyy too much sexual content. I am quite happy to read mature content once it is well done and adds to the story but this was awful, very vulgar, mechanical and nothing sensual at all, it completely destroyed what could have been a great read. If these scenes can't be written well they should be left out!
May 17, 2016
Steamy and explicit at times (maybe the current style, so not terribly objectionable). Nice setup leading to a different sort of tension between Darcy and Elizabeth. Wished that the breadcrumb that General Fitzwilliam dropped had resulted in a different way Darcy's problem is resolved. Clear, clean expository writing moved the plot along.
January 16, 2021
The other reviews are spot on for this one. I really enjoyed the premise of it, I thought the storyline was great and it kept me interested but you almost kind of pictured all the men walking around with erections all the time comparing them. I lost count of how many times Darcy had an erection. All the men were these sexy dogs in heat and the women were big breasted and ready to be taken. I don’t mind sex in a book at all but this kind of unfortunately over took the plot line. 3 stars for the premise.
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November 3, 2017Quick summary: How to Mend a Broken Heart is a retelling of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice set three years after Mr. Darcy’s failed proposed to Elizabeth Bennet at Hunsford. A lot has happened in those three years: Mr. Wickham eloped with Lydia Bennet and then immigrated to America, Mr. Bennet died, and Mrs. Bennet and her daughters moved to Standfield Hall to live on their cousin Lady Webberley’s estate. The countess, Emily, took Elizabeth under her wing, and the book opens shortly after her death as Elizabeth arrives in London to stay with Emily’s cousin, the dowager Lady Matlock. Meanwhile, Mr. Darcy has never forgotten Elizabeth but realizes he needs to move on, to provide Pemberley with an heir and Georgiana with a sister who can guide her through the upcoming Season. But right after Darcy proposes to the widow Mrs. Wagstaff, he encounters Elizabeth in his aunt’s drawing room and vows to make her change her opinion of him. Elizabeth’s presentation at court with the dowager as her sponsor means she and Darcy are often in each other’s company — which is dangerous when he is promised to another, a woman who is determined to become Mrs. Darcy.
Why I wanted to read it: I was intrigued by the prospect of Darcy being engaged, and knowing that his honor would force him to make good on his promises made me curious about how he and Elizabeth would achieve a happily ever after.
What I liked: I’ve never read a Pride and Prejudice variation in which Lady Matlock was a main character, and I really enjoyed getting to know her and watching her relationship with Elizabeth strengthen as they both worked through the problems that had been keeping them from embracing life. I liked how Parsons changed up some of the romantic pairings of the characters and introduced some interesting original characters, like Mrs. Wagstaff. The fate of the Bennet family and the decisions Elizabeth was forced to make in the wake of Lady Webberley’s death were unique touches.
What I disliked: I must admit I had a hard time with this book, especially the first half, but I was curious to learn how things would play out, and overall I am glad I kept reading. I had a hard time believing that Darcy would choose someone like Mrs. Wagstaff as a wife, even if he was lonely and determined to move on with his life. I also had a difficult time with the sexual aspects of the story; I don’t mind reading sex scenes, but I’m not fond of reading about characters pleasuring themselves, and while it was common for the upper class men to visit brothels, I don’t want to read detailed scenes involving the romantic heroes.
Final thoughts: I appreciated the unique aspects of How to Mend a Broken Heart, from Elizabeth’s new circumstances in life to the consequences of Darcy’s impulsive actions in the midst of loneliness. Without the sex scenes that I found to be a bit much for such a tale, I would have loved it.
Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
I received a free copy of this book for review.
Why I wanted to read it: I was intrigued by the prospect of Darcy being engaged, and knowing that his honor would force him to make good on his promises made me curious about how he and Elizabeth would achieve a happily ever after.
What I liked: I’ve never read a Pride and Prejudice variation in which Lady Matlock was a main character, and I really enjoyed getting to know her and watching her relationship with Elizabeth strengthen as they both worked through the problems that had been keeping them from embracing life. I liked how Parsons changed up some of the romantic pairings of the characters and introduced some interesting original characters, like Mrs. Wagstaff. The fate of the Bennet family and the decisions Elizabeth was forced to make in the wake of Lady Webberley’s death were unique touches.
What I disliked: I must admit I had a hard time with this book, especially the first half, but I was curious to learn how things would play out, and overall I am glad I kept reading. I had a hard time believing that Darcy would choose someone like Mrs. Wagstaff as a wife, even if he was lonely and determined to move on with his life. I also had a difficult time with the sexual aspects of the story; I don’t mind reading sex scenes, but I’m not fond of reading about characters pleasuring themselves, and while it was common for the upper class men to visit brothels, I don’t want to read detailed scenes involving the romantic heroes.
Final thoughts: I appreciated the unique aspects of How to Mend a Broken Heart, from Elizabeth’s new circumstances in life to the consequences of Darcy’s impulsive actions in the midst of loneliness. Without the sex scenes that I found to be a bit much for such a tale, I would have loved it.
Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
I received a free copy of this book for review.
April 5, 2016
While the story is interesting, I just can't seem to bring myself to like this book. First of all, i am all for a little smut in P&P variations as long as it is done tastefully, this book however, did not. The sexual behavior of the ton seemed to be in total contradiction to the one depicted in Austen's novel, and it is too strange to read about how they are so open to promiscuity during those times. I don't doubt that some of the things happened but my problem is with how it is all out in the open, which I doubt was acceptable back then: The men flaunting their sexual escapades, the ladies openly acknowledging and gossiping about the sordid details, how it is normal for engaged couples to anticipate their vows, Gen. Fitzwilliam basically telling his mother that he doesn't want to get married because he enjoys sleeping around, and the list goes on and on. The entire thing was just bizarre.
And the weirdest thing is, after all those pent up frustration Darcy and Elizabeth faced, when they finally consummated their relationship, it was so anticlimactic and such a letdown. It was brief, there was no passion, no emotions, no love there, and no intimate moments afterward? Was that what the entire book was building up to? I am so disappointed. If it is to be an erotic version of P&P, you really should go all out. At this point i'm confused as to what the book's genre is. It's neither here or there.
The second thing i have a problem with is what a pushover Darcy was and how little self control he had, how he was "ruled by his cock", how he had picked an infamously promiscuous and shameless widow to be the mistress of Pemberley. Come on! *rolls eyes*. Who the heck was this guy, he sure as hell doesn't sound like the Master of Pemberley. Where was his overbearing relatives here? I actually wished for Lady Catherine to appear in this book and knock some sense into everybody.
In the end, i give it 2 stars because i like some of the ideas, i love Elizabeth, and i like Lady Suzan's character. I think the story has a lot of potential, but perhaps the author needs to consider changing the character of Mrs. Wagstaff into someone who is not so comically villainous. Her character was completely, openly, unrealistically bad, it seems very disney-ish to me.
And the weirdest thing is, after all those pent up frustration Darcy and Elizabeth faced, when they finally consummated their relationship, it was so anticlimactic and such a letdown. It was brief, there was no passion, no emotions, no love there, and no intimate moments afterward? Was that what the entire book was building up to? I am so disappointed. If it is to be an erotic version of P&P, you really should go all out. At this point i'm confused as to what the book's genre is. It's neither here or there.
The second thing i have a problem with is what a pushover Darcy was and how little self control he had, how he was "ruled by his cock", how he had picked an infamously promiscuous and shameless widow to be the mistress of Pemberley. Come on! *rolls eyes*. Who the heck was this guy, he sure as hell doesn't sound like the Master of Pemberley. Where was his overbearing relatives here? I actually wished for Lady Catherine to appear in this book and knock some sense into everybody.
In the end, i give it 2 stars because i like some of the ideas, i love Elizabeth, and i like Lady Suzan's character. I think the story has a lot of potential, but perhaps the author needs to consider changing the character of Mrs. Wagstaff into someone who is not so comically villainous. Her character was completely, openly, unrealistically bad, it seems very disney-ish to me.
March 29, 2016
I have to admit I first saw this story on A Happy Assembly awhile ago. Then it got a redux version on the same site within the last few months. But I was extremely happy when I got an email stating that it was going to be published and would I mind reading and reviewing it. How could I say no? I really do hate that Darcy decided to become engaged to another woman instead of searching for Elizabeth some more. And then to have her walk back into his life right after he announces his engagement? Imagine his agony and relish in it as I enjoyed his misery for his gall to get engaged to a woman that is not Lizzy. He also picked a bad seed to get engaged to from the start.
I will say that I missed some of my favorite scenes in this heavily revised edition. Where's the smut that made me enjoy the original so much? Yes, we get some love scenes but the original was dripping with lust and well we get a much watered down version of that. In all though this is a well written book and worth adding to your JAFF library.
Rating: 4½ stars out of 5
I will say that I missed some of my favorite scenes in this heavily revised edition. Where's the smut that made me enjoy the original so much? Yes, we get some love scenes but the original was dripping with lust and well we get a much watered down version of that. In all though this is a well written book and worth adding to your JAFF library.
Rating: 4½ stars out of 5
March 21, 2016
Delightful
Another great Pride and Prejudice variation... At times painful with what had happened with some of the characters but a great ending for most
Another great Pride and Prejudice variation... At times painful with what had happened with some of the characters but a great ending for most
February 12, 2019
An interesting plot idea, with potential. Unfortunately there are a lot of repetitive scenes and drawn out inner monologues, particularly early on. Each character’s “private time” is almost identical & the constant sexual references are actually quite boring - the opposite to what is intended I’m sure! In the first half, the attraction between Darcy & Elizabeth doesn’t feel linear in its build up. At times it is realistic and well written, but at other times it ramps up only for them to then go back to behaving like nothing had happened. Though explanations are given, I felt both acted too uncharacteristically. I think a similar plot could have been followed but showing more reluctance or angst in their emotions to make it feel more in character. Some jarring Americanisms. I did skim parts and consider quitting story, but then an interesting bit would appear and I’d read on. Pace improves towards end. I think it could be much better if length cut in half & the order of scenes changed to help build story between D&E more naturally.
September 12, 2020
Good, but....
I enjoyed the premise of this story, having Elizabeth unexpectedly reunited with Darcy three years after Hunsford. Elizabeth is bequeathed a legacy by a titled cousin, with the stipulation she has to have a season in town in order to collect it. Darcy has never been able to get over Elizabeth, and as luck—or lack of it—would have it, he has just become engaged to another woman when he sees her again.
I don’t mind mature content in my P&P when it is well written, but in this instance I found some verbiage a bit crass and unnecessary really. It’s unfortunate because otherwise I thought it was very good.
I enjoyed the premise of this story, having Elizabeth unexpectedly reunited with Darcy three years after Hunsford. Elizabeth is bequeathed a legacy by a titled cousin, with the stipulation she has to have a season in town in order to collect it. Darcy has never been able to get over Elizabeth, and as luck—or lack of it—would have it, he has just become engaged to another woman when he sees her again.
I don’t mind mature content in my P&P when it is well written, but in this instance I found some verbiage a bit crass and unnecessary really. It’s unfortunate because otherwise I thought it was very good.
June 26, 2023
Satisfying
What a sad beginning. Poor Lizzy never got Darcy's letter because of disaster.
Author rambles on, and a little too mush need to fast forward through too much bed scene details. That is a personal opinion. Satisfying ending.
What a sad beginning. Poor Lizzy never got Darcy's letter because of disaster.
Author rambles on, and a little too mush need to fast forward through too much bed scene details. That is a personal opinion. Satisfying ending.
June 26, 2017
Can't stop reading
I couldn't put this down, just had to continue reading. Only time I stopped was to eat. Greatly entocing story to read
I couldn't put this down, just had to continue reading. Only time I stopped was to eat. Greatly entocing story to read
September 30, 2022
Gratuitous lewdness. The "Darcy" on the cover looks 14-years-old, which is pretty much how his mind worked in the book.
May 12, 2023
2.5/5
April 27, 2025
L.S. Parsons‘ debut novel, How to Mend a Broken Heart, takes a fresh look at the classic love story between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
This Pride and Prejudice variation throws a wrench into their happily ever after by separating them after the disastrous Hunsford proposal.
Three years later, fate reunites them in the heart of the London Season, with a twist: Darcy is already engaged to another woman.
The story features not only the familiar faces of Darcy and Elizabeth but also intriguing new characters:
- Susan Matlock, a strong and respected figure, fills the void left by the absence of maternal figures for Elizabeth and the Bennets.
- General Richard Fitzwilliam remains largely true to his original character, with a hint of a playful vice.
- Miss Virginia Wagstaff, while intriguing, feels underdeveloped. Her presence could have been more impactful, perhaps generating dislike rather than just awkwardness.
- The return of Mr. Collins, however, provides some lighthearted amusement.
While the novel delves into mature themes, some might argue that they become excessive, overshadowing the central plot’s development.
The pacing starts slow but picks up significantly in the second half, leaving the reader invested in overcoming the seemingly insurmountable obstacles Darcy and Elizabeth face. Despite the anguish, the story ultimately delivers a heartwarming message: don’t rush into hasty decisions and embrace the power of second chances.
This Pride and Prejudice variation throws a wrench into their happily ever after by separating them after the disastrous Hunsford proposal.
Three years later, fate reunites them in the heart of the London Season, with a twist: Darcy is already engaged to another woman.
The story features not only the familiar faces of Darcy and Elizabeth but also intriguing new characters:
- Susan Matlock, a strong and respected figure, fills the void left by the absence of maternal figures for Elizabeth and the Bennets.
- General Richard Fitzwilliam remains largely true to his original character, with a hint of a playful vice.
- Miss Virginia Wagstaff, while intriguing, feels underdeveloped. Her presence could have been more impactful, perhaps generating dislike rather than just awkwardness.
- The return of Mr. Collins, however, provides some lighthearted amusement.
While the novel delves into mature themes, some might argue that they become excessive, overshadowing the central plot’s development.
The pacing starts slow but picks up significantly in the second half, leaving the reader invested in overcoming the seemingly insurmountable obstacles Darcy and Elizabeth face. Despite the anguish, the story ultimately delivers a heartwarming message: don’t rush into hasty decisions and embrace the power of second chances.
February 23, 2019
Better than I thought
I like non canon variations. Other than back stories and references, Elizabeth's family isn't part of the story.
Yes, it's mature but the sex scenes are written matter of factly, they are neither gratuitous nor enticing.
I like non canon variations. Other than back stories and references, Elizabeth's family isn't part of the story.
Yes, it's mature but the sex scenes are written matter of factly, they are neither gratuitous nor enticing.
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