A fair effort
I read the author's forward so the first thing I will say is that I have read many books and have sincerely struggled was fair number which just weren't very good. I thought it was very honest that he did ask readers to be gentle because this represents his first effort at a serious project. In all honesty those words are both humbling and a tiny bit of a problem for me. So first I will say I'm pretty sure this author has a good book within himself. This one is probably not going to be the best. On the heels of that comment I'd like to say I might return to finish this story because it did have some interesting moments and some humor, along with a genuine attempt at entertaining readers. But I had to put it aside for now. I got about halfway through, but I knew I wasn't going to be able to finish at this time.
Three reasons why. First I have just finished about 6 books on time travel adventures and I think I need to give the topic some considerable distance for now. Once you get too invested in the genre patterns begin to develop and plot lines merge along with characters, setting, and mechanics. I prefer to give good authors my full attention and I can't do that with so many different figures sort of blended together without enough separation to be able to keep the stories fresh and unique.
Secondly I become more than a little obsessed about minutiae. Things that stand out as being so far out of even vague possibility stick with me and tend to interrupt the timelines which becomes tedious and I begin to stop caring about the characters and their situations. Finally I have to start a story with a baseline of probability. That's what made me put this book back on the Kindle hold list for now. I just couldn't see how three 12 year-old kids could manage everything they were dealing with and maintain such aplomb, display effortless intuition and make dozens of crucial survival decisions based on the assumption they had only a few short weeks of summer interludes with their "hero-figure" named Frank. Even if they were exceptionally gifted and creative, regardless of how each one got along with Frank or each other (2 were siblings?), it just wasn't plausible for them to begin a journey in the jungle of Panama and wind up in the western regions of the United States fully one hundred years in the past, during the times of the great Plains Nations people- without so much as batting an eye or losing something they desperately needed to survive and return to their own time and place. 12 year olds? No, sorry too much of a stretch for me. They seemed to pull any and every thing they needed from their packs, introduce modern technology and gadgetry into their respective roles and never once know hunger, fear, pain, confusion, or critical experience. 12 year-olds. Most 12 year-old kids I know can't make themselves peanut butter and jelly sandwiches if they're hungry. But these kids can catch trout for breakfast, make tin can stew over a campfire, manufacture travois stretchers and set compound fractures without a hitch. All while engaged in a battle for survival and success in a time so foreign to themselves that there was no explanation or reason how they managed to stay alive. It began to fall apart for me after they killed a 19th century gang banger, rescued and nursed an injured and captive warrior chief to return him to his tribe and didn't even develop a blister on a finger the entire time. It wasn't a plausible story for an adult reader.
I want to add that I still may finish this book but for now I have had enough.
I think however this book might be a good read for a teen or young adult reader. There is just enough going on to interest a younger reader and the dialogue that takes place isn't too complicated or overwhelming for a youthful person. I'm just a bit older than original sin, and I do appreciate complex conversations, in-depth discussion and a touch of adult experiences along with a good story. This didn't deliver for me but I may still keep it around for a quick read a rainy afternoon. But not today.