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The Unbreakable Law
When a few teleportation devices called 'Power Urn' fall in wrong hands, the leaders of an extraterrestrial species decide to send a rescue mission which must include a human from earth.
Hersh, the chosen human, leads a death defying journey to rescue those urns but later find out that he has even bigger challenges ahead including a war. Will he be able to know the Unbreakable Law of Destiny and win the war?
Hersh, the chosen human, leads a death defying journey to rescue those urns but later find out that he has even bigger challenges ahead including a war. Will he be able to know the Unbreakable Law of Destiny and win the war?
204 pages, Paperback
Published July 15, 2015
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October 19, 2015
Let's not talk about the author's writing style because it is below average but concentrate on the story. The story is unique in some way but it has too many plot holes & you're left with many unanswered questions like:
1. Why do the Seekers need power urns to teleport when they have the Keppers and why not use them to enter into the Ezalore?
2. How everyone is able to speak English on both planets & why the Zeniths need to speak English?
3. What about the relativity concept?
4. Why Sancord is after the unbreakable law when he doesn't follow the code of destiny?
5. Who makes the rules in the Ezalore?
although there are several other negligible plot holes, there are some awesome concept and scenarios in the book like:
1. the wild boar stampede.
2. the chamber of sorrows.
3. the fight on the Braham Sarovar & many other unique & fresh concepts which show the imagination quality of the author, not to mention the unique & weird names of the characters.
4. and I'm confused whether the concept of the man who died seventeen times was too awesome or too dumb.
I wanted to give it 3 star but one extra star for the brave effort for not writing a traditional market driven book especially in the Indian readers market where romantic and religious novels are dominating.
1. Why do the Seekers need power urns to teleport when they have the Keppers and why not use them to enter into the Ezalore?
2. How everyone is able to speak English on both planets & why the Zeniths need to speak English?
3. What about the relativity concept?
4. Why Sancord is after the unbreakable law when he doesn't follow the code of destiny?
5. Who makes the rules in the Ezalore?
although there are several other negligible plot holes, there are some awesome concept and scenarios in the book like:
1. the wild boar stampede.
2. the chamber of sorrows.
3. the fight on the Braham Sarovar & many other unique & fresh concepts which show the imagination quality of the author, not to mention the unique & weird names of the characters.
4. and I'm confused whether the concept of the man who died seventeen times was too awesome or too dumb.
I wanted to give it 3 star but one extra star for the brave effort for not writing a traditional market driven book especially in the Indian readers market where romantic and religious novels are dominating.
November 28, 2016
written by debut author Pragat Kasana
Published by PepperScript.
The book held me from the very first chapter and let me go on the very last line of the book. Characterization is done well,
The story revolves around the protagonist Hersh.
Other characters in the book are -Wolrez, Sancord, Oscorv , Melcon, Rower ,etc.
What i like about the book is that the author's writing style is unique ,different.
And in India not many authors attempt to write fantasy novels, they most write romance.
Pros:
1) Fresh Intriguing Plot & Story.
2) Great Characterization.
It was a right blend of fantasy and reality .
It was a FANTASTIC read filled with wonder. In fact, it would practically be a dream-come-true for any movie buff or even a fantasy lover.
Published by PepperScript.
The book held me from the very first chapter and let me go on the very last line of the book. Characterization is done well,
The story revolves around the protagonist Hersh.
Other characters in the book are -Wolrez, Sancord, Oscorv , Melcon, Rower ,etc.
What i like about the book is that the author's writing style is unique ,different.
And in India not many authors attempt to write fantasy novels, they most write romance.
Pros:
1) Fresh Intriguing Plot & Story.
2) Great Characterization.
It was a right blend of fantasy and reality .
It was a FANTASTIC read filled with wonder. In fact, it would practically be a dream-come-true for any movie buff or even a fantasy lover.
March 27, 2016
So, I got this book through goodreads giveaway (yay:).
Have gone through about a dozen pages so far and this is my opinion so far. I will update as and when i read more.
May be a bit harsh on the review but i would like to be honest.
So far the story is not fluid. the paragraphs don't complement each other and it feels disconnected to me.
Noticed couple more quirky things but the above one seemed most prominent, so far.
Have gone through about a dozen pages so far and this is my opinion so far. I will update as and when i read more.
May be a bit harsh on the review but i would like to be honest.
So far the story is not fluid. the paragraphs don't complement each other and it feels disconnected to me.
Noticed couple more quirky things but the above one seemed most prominent, so far.
February 12, 2016
I won this book in a goodreads giveaway.
The beginning is great but the story could have been exceptional if it had been executed better.
There were plot holes. The part where it says "they loved him as they would have love their own son " is weird because we still don't know whose son the main character is. There were WAY too many names (and unusual ones at that).
The scenes were rushed and I couldn't even connect with the characters or settings.
There wasn't much of a back story so I couldn't really understand the plot.
The word 'dear' was used before EVERY SINGLE name ( or is that a Creator thing?)
The beginning is great but the story could have been exceptional if it had been executed better.
There were plot holes. The part where it says "they loved him as they would have love their own son " is weird because we still don't know whose son the main character is. There were WAY too many names (and unusual ones at that).
The scenes were rushed and I couldn't even connect with the characters or settings.
There wasn't much of a back story so I couldn't really understand the plot.
The word 'dear' was used before EVERY SINGLE name ( or is that a Creator thing?)
March 31, 2016
I got this book via Giveaway.
It seems to be a good debut. As the author has chosen the characters from one different world superior to humans' Earth, it makes it more interesting. There is bit of language issue but it will improve well with time. its just the starting. Science-fiction category, Author made a good entry into it.
Ezalore, first it seems to me as the script of Dota. Then, with more pages I read I found it more interesting. It has fantasy, thrill and lot more to read. The book can also be taken as a script for some movie if any director wants to.
To be precise, It deserves 3.0/5.0 as a debut.
It seems to be a good debut. As the author has chosen the characters from one different world superior to humans' Earth, it makes it more interesting. There is bit of language issue but it will improve well with time. its just the starting. Science-fiction category, Author made a good entry into it.
Ezalore, first it seems to me as the script of Dota. Then, with more pages I read I found it more interesting. It has fantasy, thrill and lot more to read. The book can also be taken as a script for some movie if any director wants to.
To be precise, It deserves 3.0/5.0 as a debut.
November 30, 2015
The book at first glance strikes many questions in the reader's mind , and at the same time holds a positive vibe about the content it is having from the very beginning.The story starts on a very interesting note, maintaining the quality of alluring readers to step into their coat steadily.The way author welcomes reader with a tint of excitement,energy and humour makes reader go hooked to it.
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January 2, 2016
to start with the review first of all i would like to say that from the beginning one question was running in mind "what next"??,but seriously the end disappointed me. i was actually confused between seekers and the zeniths ,the curiosity created in the beginning somewhat vanished by the end.still confused who was right ? seekers or zeniths?????.
July 21, 2015
I have read my first book published by PepperScript which is the debut work of Pragat Kasana. Unlike other authors, this author has little social media following already because of his interesting tweets and this ensures me that his book shall do well in coming future. The cover page of the book is beautiful and it will surely grasp eyes of few readers. Fortunately, the book is a perfect page-turner and a book that can be read in one go. I picked it up last evening and kept reading it till 4.30 AM in morning. It's just 200 pages thick but takes a lot of time for you to grasp as most of the names and places are named by the author himself; because the book belongs to the fantasy fiction genre.
Pragat Kasana's writing style is very fluid and he has good command over the language. He divides the chapters perfectly so that you do not get cluttered in the long fantasy story that it is. I liked the author's idea of mentioning main characters initially itself which many authors fail to do so. I made a hierarchy tree according to the description of the characters which helped me understand the story better. The characterizations are wonderfully created by the author and even after you complete the book, you will think about couple of them. Even the unusual animals and creatures that the author have described are powerfully portrayed and you can imagine them easily. As a debutante, I feel Pragat have hit at the right place.
Author have tried to put in some philosophy intelligently without being preachy. He wittily tells how sadness, anger and stress of a person can benefit the people who are looking for their failures. He amazingly builds a great scenario and shows how a father cares for his son even when they do not meet each other since the child's birth. Author also manages to say how even good people go a wrong way to attain some power which can make them look stronger and right in society. Also he speaks about how historical facts are distorted according to who wins the war and future generations get to know only about how their forefathers were right and everyone were wrong. I liked how the book is ended with a cool climax. But I want author to write something else next time rather than writing sequel to this book. :-) I give 4 stars out of 5 to this book for its originality and creativity.
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September 21, 2015
The first and foremost thought that strikes and compels one to bow before, is the author's imagination. Consistency is another feature of the book I would like to mention. The tempo of the story is a result of high concentration, calmness and composition. Not many of us possess this.
What I liked the most about this book is the author's ability to pen down a situation, scene or a surrounding. Most of the writers try to define the details with so much precision that it leaves almost no freedom for the readers to picture the act as per their wish. It’s not only boring but annoying too. While I was reading this book and directing a parallel movie mentally, I was free enough to pick characters and architect my backgrounds and sound score.
I especially liked the descriptions of war scenes. It’s truly difficult to describe a fight interestingly without the help of pictures or videos. The Author's writing style is straight and simple. There wasn’t much use of heavy and uncommon vocabulary which is a good aspect of a book but an uncommon style, I think, always helps a book in fetching readers.
Story plays a good role in a fictional novel and that has been excellent in ‘The Unbreakable law’ but other intrinsic qualities of a writer always have a room for improvement.I wish I could give four and a half star. The author definitely has the ability of storytelling in him!
What I liked the most about this book is the author's ability to pen down a situation, scene or a surrounding. Most of the writers try to define the details with so much precision that it leaves almost no freedom for the readers to picture the act as per their wish. It’s not only boring but annoying too. While I was reading this book and directing a parallel movie mentally, I was free enough to pick characters and architect my backgrounds and sound score.
I especially liked the descriptions of war scenes. It’s truly difficult to describe a fight interestingly without the help of pictures or videos. The Author's writing style is straight and simple. There wasn’t much use of heavy and uncommon vocabulary which is a good aspect of a book but an uncommon style, I think, always helps a book in fetching readers.
Story plays a good role in a fictional novel and that has been excellent in ‘The Unbreakable law’ but other intrinsic qualities of a writer always have a room for improvement.I wish I could give four and a half star. The author definitely has the ability of storytelling in him!
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December 4, 2016Review-
I really liked the title and the cover and that is the reason of picking up the book. The texture and background of the cover were sync to make a nice appearence.
The book starts at a very fast pace and all the cards are opened in front one by one. With an amazing beginning and nice middle but ending was not very impressive.
The best thing about the book is-
1. The book runs at a perfect pace.
2. The book have amazing beginning.
3. Characters were very cleverly chosen.
4. Author’s writing style is very simple and easy to understand.
Second part of the book was less interesting than first part which may force you to skip some pages. I think maybe the Author penned everything with such high precision that an easy and was just not easy to swallow.
I think this book is great attempt by Pragat Kasana. The Unbreakable Law is one of a kind book with perfect pace. Overall it is a nice and different read and highly recommended.
I really liked the title and the cover and that is the reason of picking up the book. The texture and background of the cover were sync to make a nice appearence.
The book starts at a very fast pace and all the cards are opened in front one by one. With an amazing beginning and nice middle but ending was not very impressive.
The best thing about the book is-
1. The book runs at a perfect pace.
2. The book have amazing beginning.
3. Characters were very cleverly chosen.
4. Author’s writing style is very simple and easy to understand.
Second part of the book was less interesting than first part which may force you to skip some pages. I think maybe the Author penned everything with such high precision that an easy and was just not easy to swallow.
I think this book is great attempt by Pragat Kasana. The Unbreakable Law is one of a kind book with perfect pace. Overall it is a nice and different read and highly recommended.
September 6, 2015
This book is a mix of fiction and reality like many others. But what really impressed me was the author's perspective about Power no matter its in the right or wrong hand. Literally it is the harsh reality of our present world. Overall the story has a very well flow and that too in one direction. Story quality not much awesome but starts as well as ends on a good note. Good for fiction lovers. Three stars for the story and one for the reality part.
October 26, 2016
Felt like i was reading a poor version of warcraft. The author has badly copied ideas from similar books.
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