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Twin Dragons
These dragon shifters are hotter than their dragon fire. If you attack their mate, you’re liable to be burned.
A BBW. Two dragon shifters. Lots of hot loving.
GAIL
I was minding my own business at Seattle’s Space Needle when suddenly the railing fell apart beneath me. A stunning white man caught me, and he invited me to dine with him and his twin. I practically have to fan myself from how hot the two of them are.
ELI
Who knew that fate could bring our mate to us on a completely ordinary day? But the day is anything but ordinary when a business rival tries to attack our mate. We’ll do anything to keep her safe. She’s ours.
Note: This book contains steamy scenes. If you don't enjoy some scenes where the main character gets sweaty with two dragon mates, please skip this book. However, if you like reading about multiple partners who love curvy women, this book is for you. Enjoy!
A BBW. Two dragon shifters. Lots of hot loving.
GAIL
I was minding my own business at Seattle’s Space Needle when suddenly the railing fell apart beneath me. A stunning white man caught me, and he invited me to dine with him and his twin. I practically have to fan myself from how hot the two of them are.
ELI
Who knew that fate could bring our mate to us on a completely ordinary day? But the day is anything but ordinary when a business rival tries to attack our mate. We’ll do anything to keep her safe. She’s ours.
Note: This book contains steamy scenes. If you don't enjoy some scenes where the main character gets sweaty with two dragon mates, please skip this book. However, if you like reading about multiple partners who love curvy women, this book is for you. Enjoy!
58 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 25, 2015
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July 10, 2015
My Thoughts - 3 out of 5 Unicorns - I liked it!!!
***Received a copy of the ebook for an honest review
The cover is looks fierce with the dragon claw.
The book is about 40ish pages. This is definitely an adults only story with the very steamy multiple partner scenes.
I liked the story, but it felt disjointed and rushed. This story has tons of potential but fell short for me. I think it could be amazing if it was lengthened and connected better. I’m not sure if it is because it is written by two authors or not, but I know I’ve read other stories by multiple authors that weren’t this choppy. I liked the brothers and Gail, but I didn’t really learn anything about them, their world, or the bad guy. It was sort of like watching a movie on fast forward and only picking up snippets here and there, and then wondering how you got there. I will definitely continue looking at work by both authors because I really did like the story idea :)
***Received a copy of the ebook for an honest review
The cover is looks fierce with the dragon claw.
The book is about 40ish pages. This is definitely an adults only story with the very steamy multiple partner scenes.
I liked the story, but it felt disjointed and rushed. This story has tons of potential but fell short for me. I think it could be amazing if it was lengthened and connected better. I’m not sure if it is because it is written by two authors or not, but I know I’ve read other stories by multiple authors that weren’t this choppy. I liked the brothers and Gail, but I didn’t really learn anything about them, their world, or the bad guy. It was sort of like watching a movie on fast forward and only picking up snippets here and there, and then wondering how you got there. I will definitely continue looking at work by both authors because I really did like the story idea :)
October 29, 2015
Terrible
Horrible. Seriously. The writing style is so NOT cool. The authors favorite word. The first few pages were terrible,. I tried to give it a chance, hoping it would get better. I gave up after the 3rd chapter.
Horrible. Seriously. The writing style is so NOT cool. The authors favorite word. The first few pages were terrible,. I tried to give it a chance, hoping it would get better. I gave up after the 3rd chapter.
August 5, 2016
We begin Twin Dragons in Seattle, the introductory character inspired to visit the city because of the Donovan series by Elizabeth Lowell. Our narrator, Gail, is sight seeing at the Space Needle and soon something bad happens. Eli, her saviour, is a good looking guy and they soon agree to spend more time together, along with his twin brother, Tyler.
The characters are all kind of awkward. Both twins, though the writing makes it as if they're trying to hide their importance, brag about their lives more than necessary and don't seem modest in the way that the authors try and make it seem. If anything, they sort of make comments about their wealth and pretend to be nonchalant about it, like passing it off as if it's nothing despite the fact that they were bragging about it. They also flash around their money, leaving a generous tip when paying for food and later try and show off multiple apartments and a jet. The pair of them just ends up being really nasty and very dislikeable. Gail is somewhat of an awkward character as well, right from her meeting the pair, she sort of acts as if she's taking advantage of them. For example, when they've gotten to the elevator to leave the site, she notices two other girls and tries to show off that she's with the twins by putting her arm around one. A lot happens to her, which I'll touch on in a bit, but it just seems like she lacks basic emotions. She doesn't seem afraid when scary stuff happens. She seems to lack happiness, even later on in the book when she's known the pair for a while. She's just completely unrealistic. The sex scenes were awkward and completely strange. As soon as the twins get the girl back to their penthouse, they rip her pants off. There was no real build up to it and it just came out of no-where. This just makes it awkward. Seriously; what kind of whacko person raises their son to rip off a woman's pants as soon as they get her home? It just felt creepy. Not to mention, it seemed that Gail was not willing in some portions. It mentions that one of the men has to "force" her mouth open for oral sex, that he gets "resistance" from her when he tries to penetrate her. In the next scene, she makes a run for the door but is sort of captured by the pair and forced onto the ground, furthering the sexual session with her as a sort of hostage. It is just not sexy. It gets creepier and creepier, in fact. They're raping her.
The story begins by presenting a nice scene and giving us the impression of some sort of tourist view, one which many of us have or will experience. I actually thought that the beginning of the book was quite promising. However, my mind was soon changed by later events. I find it kind of annoying that after the incident where Gail is put in danger by the failing railing, nobody bothers reporting it. None of the characters bother complaining about or reporting it to someone who can do something to fix it. It seems like it's a very serious incident, yet no-one seems bothered by it. The same with many other dangers within the plot. No-one seems to be taking many of these dangerous events seriously. I can sort of understand the twins not being very afraid because they might be used to those situations, but our narrator Gail doesn't seemed freaked out at all. Even during the portions where the twins were forcing themselves on her, she didn't have any emotions whatsoever. She wasn't freaked out or even enjoying it. This is completely ridiculous because she mentions them forcing her to do things and even her trying to struggle against them while they’re doing it, but she doesn’t seem scared at all. Even afterward, the strangest thing is that she doesn't try to escape their capture of her. Her behaviour just baffles me. She has no common sense and just seems completely unrealistic. Then there's the fact that, after the first apartment was destroyed, she wasn't allowed out of the second apartment (by Eli) for nine months. So, she's essentially been kidnapped. The supernatural and fantasy aspects aren't very well presented. They happen suddenly seem to be the cause of convenience (to the plot) rather than presenting them out of reasonable thought. It just seems like the authors add things which they think are cool, for example, saving Gail by having her teleported away from danger. It just seems silly because the events aren't explained properly. Also, the dangerous aspects that happen within the plot (such as the burning of the apartment) are poorly explained. They have little set up, most of the time the excuse being that Gail was asleep so there's no narration to give us a proper explanation. Later on, it seems as if she's kidnapped and it just seems completely out of the blue because we didn't experience the kidnapping with her.
The plot was poorly developed and, despite having some sort of bad guy trying to attack the twins & co, it just seems like the twins are far more evil to Gail than anything the enemy did; they raped and kept her hostage. I know it's written as if it's meant to seem like they're doing her some sort of favour and that she doesn't mind, but that's just completely not what it seems like. She mentions (during the sexual encounter) about being forced and even trying to escape. Then later, when they took her to a secondary apartment (for safety, because the first got destroyed), she mentions wanting to leave but Eli hadn't let her leave. In addition to the poor plot elements, the characters were poorly written as well; none of them seem genuine and they all lack emotion. At many points, they flash around cash and none of them seem to have much common sense. I just don't really know how to summarise this book. It just wasn't good and I'm really disappointed by it.
I received a free copy of this story in exchange for an honest review.
The characters are all kind of awkward. Both twins, though the writing makes it as if they're trying to hide their importance, brag about their lives more than necessary and don't seem modest in the way that the authors try and make it seem. If anything, they sort of make comments about their wealth and pretend to be nonchalant about it, like passing it off as if it's nothing despite the fact that they were bragging about it. They also flash around their money, leaving a generous tip when paying for food and later try and show off multiple apartments and a jet. The pair of them just ends up being really nasty and very dislikeable. Gail is somewhat of an awkward character as well, right from her meeting the pair, she sort of acts as if she's taking advantage of them. For example, when they've gotten to the elevator to leave the site, she notices two other girls and tries to show off that she's with the twins by putting her arm around one. A lot happens to her, which I'll touch on in a bit, but it just seems like she lacks basic emotions. She doesn't seem afraid when scary stuff happens. She seems to lack happiness, even later on in the book when she's known the pair for a while. She's just completely unrealistic. The sex scenes were awkward and completely strange. As soon as the twins get the girl back to their penthouse, they rip her pants off. There was no real build up to it and it just came out of no-where. This just makes it awkward. Seriously; what kind of whacko person raises their son to rip off a woman's pants as soon as they get her home? It just felt creepy. Not to mention, it seemed that Gail was not willing in some portions. It mentions that one of the men has to "force" her mouth open for oral sex, that he gets "resistance" from her when he tries to penetrate her. In the next scene, she makes a run for the door but is sort of captured by the pair and forced onto the ground, furthering the sexual session with her as a sort of hostage. It is just not sexy. It gets creepier and creepier, in fact. They're raping her.
The story begins by presenting a nice scene and giving us the impression of some sort of tourist view, one which many of us have or will experience. I actually thought that the beginning of the book was quite promising. However, my mind was soon changed by later events. I find it kind of annoying that after the incident where Gail is put in danger by the failing railing, nobody bothers reporting it. None of the characters bother complaining about or reporting it to someone who can do something to fix it. It seems like it's a very serious incident, yet no-one seems bothered by it. The same with many other dangers within the plot. No-one seems to be taking many of these dangerous events seriously. I can sort of understand the twins not being very afraid because they might be used to those situations, but our narrator Gail doesn't seemed freaked out at all. Even during the portions where the twins were forcing themselves on her, she didn't have any emotions whatsoever. She wasn't freaked out or even enjoying it. This is completely ridiculous because she mentions them forcing her to do things and even her trying to struggle against them while they’re doing it, but she doesn’t seem scared at all. Even afterward, the strangest thing is that she doesn't try to escape their capture of her. Her behaviour just baffles me. She has no common sense and just seems completely unrealistic. Then there's the fact that, after the first apartment was destroyed, she wasn't allowed out of the second apartment (by Eli) for nine months. So, she's essentially been kidnapped. The supernatural and fantasy aspects aren't very well presented. They happen suddenly seem to be the cause of convenience (to the plot) rather than presenting them out of reasonable thought. It just seems like the authors add things which they think are cool, for example, saving Gail by having her teleported away from danger. It just seems silly because the events aren't explained properly. Also, the dangerous aspects that happen within the plot (such as the burning of the apartment) are poorly explained. They have little set up, most of the time the excuse being that Gail was asleep so there's no narration to give us a proper explanation. Later on, it seems as if she's kidnapped and it just seems completely out of the blue because we didn't experience the kidnapping with her.
The plot was poorly developed and, despite having some sort of bad guy trying to attack the twins & co, it just seems like the twins are far more evil to Gail than anything the enemy did; they raped and kept her hostage. I know it's written as if it's meant to seem like they're doing her some sort of favour and that she doesn't mind, but that's just completely not what it seems like. She mentions (during the sexual encounter) about being forced and even trying to escape. Then later, when they took her to a secondary apartment (for safety, because the first got destroyed), she mentions wanting to leave but Eli hadn't let her leave. In addition to the poor plot elements, the characters were poorly written as well; none of them seem genuine and they all lack emotion. At many points, they flash around cash and none of them seem to have much common sense. I just don't really know how to summarise this book. It just wasn't good and I'm really disappointed by it.
I received a free copy of this story in exchange for an honest review.
May 14, 2016
1 What-the-Fuck Stars
I can't even believe I read this entire thing, even with how short it is. I couldn't stop laughing to save my life.
Examples:
1. The tense changed a couple times .
2. They meet and have lunch, just chatting, and without a conversation they're driving her back to their apartment and ripping her clothes off. There was no flow to it. Just out of nowhere clothes are torn from her body.
3. "I feel myself being lifted with Tyler's hands on my ass. 'Have you ever had anal?' Without waiting for my answer, he pushes his dick into my ass. It burns so much that I try to get away. But Tyler will not be denied. 'I'll be careful and slow. I promise. Just give it a chance. You need to relax. The water is a good lubricant.'"
Lol. No, water is NOT a good lubricant and anyone that's had even the slightest bit of shower sex would know that it does the opposite. Also, he just rammed his dick into her ass? Really? I can't even imagine how badly that would hurt.
"He groans as my ass tightens around his still-hard cock. I can feel water going inside my pussy as I pulse."
"I scream, too, as I come with the feeling of his fire shooting inside of me and scorching my face. I blow fire back at him. His fire is gold. Mine is scarlet. I blink. 'I couldn't ever do that before.'" No shit?
I can't even believe I read this entire thing, even with how short it is. I couldn't stop laughing to save my life.
Examples:
1. The tense changed a couple times .
2. They meet and have lunch, just chatting, and without a conversation they're driving her back to their apartment and ripping her clothes off. There was no flow to it. Just out of nowhere clothes are torn from her body.
3. "I feel myself being lifted with Tyler's hands on my ass. 'Have you ever had anal?' Without waiting for my answer, he pushes his dick into my ass. It burns so much that I try to get away. But Tyler will not be denied. 'I'll be careful and slow. I promise. Just give it a chance. You need to relax. The water is a good lubricant.'"
Lol. No, water is NOT a good lubricant and anyone that's had even the slightest bit of shower sex would know that it does the opposite. Also, he just rammed his dick into her ass? Really? I can't even imagine how badly that would hurt.
"He groans as my ass tightens around his still-hard cock. I can feel water going inside my pussy as I pulse."
"I scream, too, as I come with the feeling of his fire shooting inside of me and scorching my face. I blow fire back at him. His fire is gold. Mine is scarlet. I blink. 'I couldn't ever do that before.'" No shit?
July 1, 2015
FAN-DRAGON-TASTIC !!!
Twin Dragons
Author: Alyse Zaftig and Eva Wilder
Genre: Paranormal Romance: Stand Alone Short (No Cliffhanger)
My Rating: Four Stars ****
I love dragon shifters so it's already a given there would be something I liked about the story but I was pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed everything about this story. It had thrills, chills, action, suspense and some wicked hot romance. The only thing I found lacking at all was the character development. Don't get me wrong, I loved the characters but I found myself with too many questions by the end of the book. I found myself wanting to know so much more about our heroine and our two heroes. I love a good quick read as much as I love a full length novel but having said that, a great short story shouldn't leave me with so many unanswered questions. A good beginning is great; a great ending is fantastic, but too many questions in between, leaves me a little unsatisfied. All in all, the story was interesting and exciting. It was fast paced, enticing, well written, seductive and is absolutely perfect for what I call a palette cleanser, something quick, easy and entertaining in between dark, heavy reads. Beautiful adventurous young heroine-check! Two handsome twin dragons-check! Danger, drama, action, adventure, suspense and an evil enemy-check! Heated attracted, fiery passion, soulmates, sweet romance, and some steamy sex-you bet! And did I mention a steamy menage a trois? Oh yeah! That and a whole lot more! This is not a serial but a stand alone story with NO cliffhanger. Fabulous entertainment and a great read !!!
Complimentary copy received in exchange for an honest review. Would I buy this book? Heck yeah!!!
Twin Dragons
Author: Alyse Zaftig and Eva Wilder
Genre: Paranormal Romance: Stand Alone Short (No Cliffhanger)
My Rating: Four Stars ****
I love dragon shifters so it's already a given there would be something I liked about the story but I was pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed everything about this story. It had thrills, chills, action, suspense and some wicked hot romance. The only thing I found lacking at all was the character development. Don't get me wrong, I loved the characters but I found myself with too many questions by the end of the book. I found myself wanting to know so much more about our heroine and our two heroes. I love a good quick read as much as I love a full length novel but having said that, a great short story shouldn't leave me with so many unanswered questions. A good beginning is great; a great ending is fantastic, but too many questions in between, leaves me a little unsatisfied. All in all, the story was interesting and exciting. It was fast paced, enticing, well written, seductive and is absolutely perfect for what I call a palette cleanser, something quick, easy and entertaining in between dark, heavy reads. Beautiful adventurous young heroine-check! Two handsome twin dragons-check! Danger, drama, action, adventure, suspense and an evil enemy-check! Heated attracted, fiery passion, soulmates, sweet romance, and some steamy sex-you bet! And did I mention a steamy menage a trois? Oh yeah! That and a whole lot more! This is not a serial but a stand alone story with NO cliffhanger. Fabulous entertainment and a great read !!!
Complimentary copy received in exchange for an honest review. Would I buy this book? Heck yeah!!!
July 10, 2015
I sure as heck am enjoying the view.
Their sexiness sends a shiver down my spine. Whew! What a fast, wild adventure this book is! It certainly does not lack for hotness though! Dragon fire or the naughty kind! It did feel a little rushed with how it went from eating at a restaurant to....well the rest of the story. It does jump from one part to the next, in an almost too-hurried of a movement, but if you are looking for a short hot read, then this is THE story for you! Personally I would have loved to have seen this be a novella or even a full novel. There is enough story to this to have easily created a great longer one, but that is just me! My preference is always for more story! However that does NOT mean that this is a bad story, or one to pass on! In fact, its just the opposite! It is a great short story that held my attention from start to finish, but I was just a little surprised at the pace of it. This is my first story from these two authors and I am curious to read more!
I was gifted a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Their sexiness sends a shiver down my spine. Whew! What a fast, wild adventure this book is! It certainly does not lack for hotness though! Dragon fire or the naughty kind! It did feel a little rushed with how it went from eating at a restaurant to....well the rest of the story. It does jump from one part to the next, in an almost too-hurried of a movement, but if you are looking for a short hot read, then this is THE story for you! Personally I would have loved to have seen this be a novella or even a full novel. There is enough story to this to have easily created a great longer one, but that is just me! My preference is always for more story! However that does NOT mean that this is a bad story, or one to pass on! In fact, its just the opposite! It is a great short story that held my attention from start to finish, but I was just a little surprised at the pace of it. This is my first story from these two authors and I am curious to read more!
I was gifted a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
May 7, 2016
Ugh. I found this to be really poorly written. Sorry, but it just seemed like this was a vehicle for erotic paranormal sex scenes.
There's indication in the book summary that Gail is a BBW, but this is hardly brought up. We know she's on vacation, but there's no backstory why she's in Seattle or where she's from. She meets Eli, who saves her from falling off the Space Needle (this could never ever happen) and then there's Tyler who is his twin who joins them for lunch. She then agrees to GET IN A CAR WITH THEM... has anyone ever heard of stranger danger? Anyway, she goes back to their penthouse where, with no preamble or dialogue, she is sexually ravaged. It's after this, she finds out they're dragons, and she tries to run away. NOW YOU'RE CONCERNED?
Then this gets weird, with corporate espionage, mating, fires, pregnancy, kidnapping... and it's all choppy with no romance at all. Just "protection of our mate" kind of stuff. Not very good at all.
There's indication in the book summary that Gail is a BBW, but this is hardly brought up. We know she's on vacation, but there's no backstory why she's in Seattle or where she's from. She meets Eli, who saves her from falling off the Space Needle (this could never ever happen) and then there's Tyler who is his twin who joins them for lunch. She then agrees to GET IN A CAR WITH THEM... has anyone ever heard of stranger danger? Anyway, she goes back to their penthouse where, with no preamble or dialogue, she is sexually ravaged. It's after this, she finds out they're dragons, and she tries to run away. NOW YOU'RE CONCERNED?
Then this gets weird, with corporate espionage, mating, fires, pregnancy, kidnapping... and it's all choppy with no romance at all. Just "protection of our mate" kind of stuff. Not very good at all.
July 6, 2015
Twin Dragons features Gail, a sassy, curvy, beauty whose life is forever changed while touring Seattle's Space Needle. Eli and Tyler; sexy, strapping, wealthy, irresistible, powerful twin dragon shifters.
The characters are impressive and engaging, fabulous scene descriptions, humor, life threatening incidents, thrilling action, a gratifying surprise, and explosive heart-throbbing pulsating romance.
An exciting well written story which I thoroughly enjoyed. In shifter stories the possibilities are endless and fascinating. {I received a romance arc for an honest review}. Without reservations I highly recommend this book....
The characters are impressive and engaging, fabulous scene descriptions, humor, life threatening incidents, thrilling action, a gratifying surprise, and explosive heart-throbbing pulsating romance.
An exciting well written story which I thoroughly enjoyed. In shifter stories the possibilities are endless and fascinating. {I received a romance arc for an honest review}. Without reservations I highly recommend this book....
June 30, 2015
Eli and Tyler meet Gail at a place where she has a near death experience . but what she finds is so much more , kidnapping , fires , dragons pregnancy and fated mates . this and so much more when you buy and read this book and much more .
this was given by the author for an exchange of an honest opinion .
this was given by the author for an exchange of an honest opinion .
July 4, 2015
I received this book free in exchange for an honest review. Imagine just minding your own business then being rescued by a handsome stranger. Imagine then being asked to dinner along with his twin, if that's not enough imagine all this in one book that delivers so much more. Great writing and wonderful use of creativity in creating well written characters and plot-lines.
June 29, 2015
wow. this is a really well written story. it starts off slow and moves fast quickly. this is different from your regular find a mate story.
July 20, 2015
Shot and sweet story.
You've got dragons and kidnapping going on in this book. Finding ones mates by fate and a business competitor who is out to harm them. Shot and sweet story.
You've got dragons and kidnapping going on in this book. Finding ones mates by fate and a business competitor who is out to harm them. Shot and sweet story.
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June 22, 2016This book was terrible! It needs to be reworked and more content for the story. It has potential, but lacked a lot.
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