Lynn A. Coleman is the founder of American Christian Fiction Writers, Inc., and an award-winning, best-selling author. She currently lives in Keystone Heights, Florida.
This story was so sweet to my heart. The love that each of the characters had and shared was so inspiring. I laughed and blushed so many times while reading this, it's a beautiful story I had the chance to read.
While the storyline was cute, there were editing errors that proved pretty distracting. Mainly in the scenes that were one on one with the main characters - twice they called a character by the wrong name (someone not even in the scene), and several times the physical placement cues were wrong. For example, they’d say someone sat down, then the next cue says they took a step back. It felt like they edited the scene without paying attention to what the characters were doing - and jarred you out of the moment by trying to figure out how to re-visualize what was happening.
I really like this story. I like the story of a woman who cares so much for a little boy she goes halfway around the world to make sure he is well cared for. Of course she falls for his new gaurdian, and he falls for her. It isn't very complex as plots go, but it is fun and romantic anyway.