TWO STEPBROTHERS. LIMITLESS MONEY. ONE RULE: NEVER SAY NO.
I’m Galen Blood. My stepbrother and I are richer than God and sicker than the Devil. We like to play games. The kinds of games only billionaires as fucked in the head as we are can play, with global stakes. Corporations and countries fall just because we think it’s funny.
Today, our game is about HER. Eliza. The piece of trash in a leopard print skirt we dredged out of the Las Vegas gutter.
Braden thinks I can’t make her a perfect sub. That I can’t dress her up beautifully, convince everyone she’s a lady, and make her my whore in the back room.
I disagree.
And I’m going to prove it by tearing her down one piece at a time and shoving my dick inside every crevice. She’s gonna beg for my cock. She’ll begged to be fucked, and I’m going to use her, destroy her, make her mine.
By the time we’re done with her, she might even love me.
When she does, I’ll finally win. I’ll finally have beaten Braden. And nothing will ever be the same.
***
I’m Eliza—no last name, please. I’ve had a bad night. Actually, I’ve had a lot of bad nights. A lifetime of bad nights, one might say.
Then one bad night turned into a really strange night, where some big shot billionaire shoved me into his limousine. He says he wants to offer me a deal. He says he’ll give me everything as long as I never say no to him.
If he knew the truth about me, he wouldn’t make that offer.
So sure, I’ll take it. I’ll get what I need from him. If he gets what he wants from me in the meantime, that’s fine too.
As long as he doesn’t find out my secret.
And as long as I don’t fall in love.
Shouldn’t be too hard. This isn’t the first time I’ve been fucked.
These Blood brothers won’t know what’s hit them.
***
The name is Braden Blood. I like to play games.
More importantly, I like to get revenge.
I’ve picked a girl for my brother to use. He thinks the choice is random. He thinks that she’s just some random, faceless skank outside a club, interchangeable with any other woman we might have dug out of Las Vegas.
He doesn’t know what I know.
Nothing is random, little brother. Nothing. Not the way you want her, not the way she looks at you, and not the circumstances that led to us finding her in that gutter one night.
You think you’re going to fuck me by fucking her? You think that her love won’t destroy you?
"...there is a steamy, sexy, simmering sexuality that could melt any Kindle" I am so glad I didn’t pay close attention to the complete title of this read when I downloaded it. If I had, I probably wouldn’t have gotten it. I’m not really into serials (I’m into instant gratification – I want it all at once). I really dislike investing my psyche in a storyline only to be left hanging, and possibly never getting around to finishing the serial. That said, I did start reading this, and now I am HOOKED. This is dark, it’s dirty, its undertones have undertones and I felt there is a major, mysterious back story here just waiting to come out. And on top of all this, there is a steamy, sexy, simmering sexuality that could melt any Kindle. Not just ordinary in-your-face sex … but the kind you can feel in the pit of your stomach; the kind you wish you could partake in. I’m not familiar with this author and it appears this may have been her first published work, at least under this name. Given that fact and that this was a freebie I was very pleasantly surprised at the quality of writing & editing I found. If I could give this a star rating of 4 ¾ I would (simply because it’s a serial, although an excellent one) – but since I can’t I’ll have to round it up to a 5 because it’s so d**n good!
If the rest of this series continues like this, it's gonna be one hot read. I'm already salivating for the next part. There's so much mystery to start it's unbelievable Two billionaire stepbrothers, Galen & Braden, who love to play games but not simple, harmless ones, but ones that change people's lives and not usually for the better. Then there's Eliza. They find her in gutter, literally. She's their next target. This is where it gets hard to summarize. Eliza has some deep, deep, dark secrets. No hint as to what is going on with her. Well, maybe there's a little bit. This game is set up Braden for Galen. Braden obviously knows alot of things that Galen doesn't and feels he knows he's gonna win. But it also sounds like he may want to take Galen down too. See there are too many questions by the end of this. It's great because this author knows how to captivate a reader to want more and more. This is definitely a great read. Highly recommend. If you don't like to read about heavy sex, BDSM, and possible violence, then please don't read this and then give a bad review. It's not fair to the author or other readers who could be interested.
What a way to draw a reader into the series. Even though this is a short story,, it packs so much into it. Suspense, mystery and dark, dark romance. These two brothers will stop at nothing to play their games. They do not care who or what they destroy in the process. In this book, they are after Eliza. Eliza is hiding a secret that as long as she does not have to expose it, she will play their game. This book left me needed the next one right away.
Charlie Boxwood and Samantha Cook are a fabulous narating team for this story. Samantha brings out all of ELiza's emotions and fears through her narration. It felt as if I were a part of the story, listening to Eliza as she played with the brothers. Charlie gave the brothers the evil edge they both have. Charlie was able to narrate the competitiveness between these two and make the game come alive. I enjoyed this narration.
A good start to a series. It draws you in and it gets good then it ends. The brothers are out to see who is the best and who can screw each other over to win a bet.
The blurb looked interesting but by 54% I gave up reading. The way the story is told I just couldn't get into. It's multiple POV's, I love a bad boy and a strong female but just couldn't connect.
At the half point (even in a short novella, as this is all this is) the characters should be connecting with me but zilch.
The authors note at the beginning is a bit weird, she basically tells us about her fantasies and this book is basically about them. Okay then moving on!