Ashley Hunter loves writing paranormal romance. She particularly enjoys crafting scintillating and steamy stories featuring hunky heroes and strong women to let her readers explore the world of sizzling paranormal romance. She believes in happy endings, delighting her readers with no cliffhangers.
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Well this was better than some of her other work. Still the story should have been better plotted. I know we're talking paranormal here but it still needs to be realistic enough to believe it. There's too much story thats not explained well. He stalked her for years and warning off any man/boy who was interested in her. I would not have been so quick to forgive that. That seriously took a drastic hit to her self esteem thinking nobody ever wanted her. That was just wrong and hurtful. Also, he was embarrassed to be with her in school because he was a Senior and she a Freshman? How much of an ass can you be? I just dont buy he cared that much for her. Then to never approach or talk to her? It just didnt jive with me. Sex scenes have no improved in this authors work. It was disappointing and the ending was flat. I'm not saying the sex has to be porn quality lol. If your gonna have a sex scene have one. There has to be really good descriptions and we need to feel their chemistry and intimacy. She was a virgin...so that had to hurt right? The author wrote nothing about that. Describe their bodies and the smoothness of her skin. Talk about her wetness or hell their sweating! His sexy body and her curves I mean come on. Not trying to be foul but read some other books and read the love scenes from those and go from there. We're not expecting perfect but more than what is being written. I'd rather have no sex scene at all than this....its boring. Sorry Ashley but its getting better but I hope you take this as positive even if it comes across as negative?
Fun, lighthearted (very) quick read. ( I read it in an hour- and that is with constant interruptions!) A little silly, but fun. Not a book I would recommend if you're looking for a story to sink your teeth into, but for a quick pick me up with some humor, this is it. Definitely recommend for that!
I am not a fan of short stories. They don't have much detail or have a skeletal storyline. This wasn't as bad as some but switched from hurried to slow a lot. Happy reading everyone.
She couldn't figure out why guys never made a big move on her. Until her friend told her. Then she was angry and wanted some answers. Oh boy did she get them. And found what she had been dreaming about all these years.