I'm Sorry

by David S. Reynolds

Locked in an abusive relationship, a woman's spirit finally breaks from reality.A short sample - For some reason all she could hear was ringing in her ears. She could not understand why she smelled fireworks in the living room or why her arms were so heavy. Through a haze she could see him look at her with a look of shock, a growing stain spreading across the faded shirt she had given him for a birthday years ago. His lips formed two words before he fell face first on the floor. “I’m sorry.”As she looked at him on the floor she realized that the growing pool coming from under his body was his blood. She watched as the blood slowly spread across the floor like a lava flow threatening to burn all in its path. Reality seeped in further as she saw that a small pistol was in her hands even as she could not recall how it got there. A small voice in her head told her to leave and run but she could not. The world turned into shades of gray, everything in black and white. Everything but the crimson pool slowly spreading across the floor."A moving story that I enjoyed reading. I found it quite sad, but it mirrors countless real lives, so makes one sit back and think long and hard about the world we live in and our choices.""Was drawn in from beginning to end. I hate reading short stories for this reason, I WANTED MORE, wonderfully told. True gift he has with words.""Wonderful story. It's an age old tale retold in a fascinating and surprising way. The writer has a true gift for storytelling. I was spellbound from the beginning to the end.""I enjoyed reading I'm Sorry. A insightful yet emotional take of a young girl who fell onto an abusive relationship. Reading this short story was like viewing a abusive relationship right from the inside instead of hearing about one."

12 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 16, 2013

About the author

I am somewhat of a rarity - A Tucsonan that was actually born in Tucson, Az. Other than one semester of college at Northern Arizona University where I learned I don't like snow, always lived in the Tucson valley and consider myself a certified desert rat.

I enjoy reading and writing many different styles and genre, from political satire to mindless theater. Sometimes I write with a message in mind, sometimes I don't.

When I'm not writing I enjoy traveling, photography, riding motorcycles, building and flying model aircraft and trying new stuff.

You can find more about me and find out about new releases on Facebook by looking up Renaissance Redneck Media.

I hope you get something from my writings, even if it is just a laugh.

Thanks for reading.

Dave

Reviews

[lisa · Rating 1 out of 5]

Short story

Did not realize when I got this book it was a short story. I personally like something that takes longer than 5 minutes to read.

[Wine About Books · Rating 2 out of 5]

Very short read but keeps you entertains through the entire book. Predictable ending unfortunately.

[Iesha (In east shade house at...) · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed reading I'm SorryA insightful yet emotional take of a young girl who fell onto an abusive relationship. Reading this short story was like viewing a abusive relationship right from the inside instead of hearing about one.

[Michael Gardner · Rating 5 out of 5]

David Reynolds can write. He may not write long stories, but he can write. I don't want to say a thing about this story because it's a moment captured in time, wonderfully told, and anything said about the plot would be a spoiler. One to read again just to pick up the subtleties.

[nichole smith · Rating 5 out of 5]

Gripping!

This short story is so good I am going to copy it and send it to my ex boyfriend who is in prison for the next few years due to the things he has done to me and others. I think he could use some " I'm sorry". Thank you.