Stepbrother's Rules - Part 1

Forbidden Firsts #1

by Mila Loveline

When your drunk stepbrother and his friend ask you to play a game in the middle of the night, what do you say? I said no.But since tall, blond, surfer Adrian had moved in two years ago, he'd always had a way of getting me to do what he wanted. This time, though--what he wanted was more than I was ready to give.I thought it would be a harmless night of cards and drinking. It turned out I was very wrong. While our parents slept down the hall, Adrian and Jack showed me that sometimes nothing feels more right than doing something so wrong.Stepbrother's Rules is a forbidden erotic short story that can be read as a standalone. Intended for readers 18 & over. 7,500 words.

Genres: Romance, Novella

31 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 26, 2015

Reviews

[Penny Well Reads · Rating 3 out of 5]

Actual rating: 2.5 stars

The sex happens extremely fast. The sexual encounter is supposed to las for 3 hours, and yet the feeling that you end up with is that the guys were super quick and the whole thing didn’t last more than half an hour. More than fucking her brains out like they say seems more a two quickies.
The situation is exacting but Not satisfactory enough.

I think the price of this series is too expensive for what you get in return.

Stepbrother's Rules Part 4

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

Short, dirty, taboo. Good evening read ;)

[Tacia Neumann · Rating 3 out of 5]

I hated how it started what kicked off the story but the rest of series and how it fit together was good

[Sarah · Rating 1 out of 5]

It is not the relationship between the step-siblings that makes this story so awful; it's the step-brother declaring in one breath how much he cares for his sheltered step-sister while at the same time using her infatuation with him to coerce her into jugging alcohol (first time) to the point that her inhibitions are lowered. At this point, he, with a friend (a stranger to her) again, using her attraction to him makes up a "take your clothes off if you lose" card game that has her losing each hand, "helping" to take off her articles of clothing; when she begins to hesitate, he "helps" her jug more beer. I am not going to go into the rest as I am sure you know where this is going, and I really don't want to give any more brain cells to this crap. To say I'm disappointed is an understatement because I have read other step-brother books and found them to be well written and was hoping I had found a new author to follow. I am not interested in anything else Ms. Loveline has written, and I strongly advise you NOT to read this book, especially if you suffer from any triggers.

[Booklover · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5 stars


This short story started off well. The writing and dialogue was good at the beginning, then it went down hill once the game started. The sex scenes were a little dull and rushed.

I would have prefered it if she had just had sex with her stepbrother. There was no need to bring the friend into it. The name calling at the end was unnecessary, even if it was in a humourous way. They encouraged her to have sex with them both but obviously she could have said no.
Them having sex in the family room with their parents next door was a little risky.

It was an average book with some spelling and grammatical mistakes, especially from the middle to the end of the story.

[Danni]

The description that I read on amazon was very different to what this actually was. This was standard mediocre erotica, not the 200 page novella romance I was expecting. False advertising to say the least.

[Mia Catherine · Rating 1 out of 5]

This made me very uncomfortable. The two men got her drunk and had her doing things that made her uncomfortable. She even told them to stop many times. Though she said she'd enjoyed it at the end, it didn't feel consensual at the time.

[Dani Nowers · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was good for a short book on taboo relationships. I wouldn't get them if I had to pay for them though.

[Kaitlin · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow

Just wow. Good book. Wish it was a little longer but at least there are more books than just this one.

[Lea Dimovski · Rating 2 out of 5]

Wrong on so many levels

Yes there was a warning upfront but damn I found myself cringing while reading this title. Each to their own just not my thing.

[Prin · Rating 2 out of 5]

It was alright, I can see myself coming back for the next book. However, the character development was a little off and the sex was oddly occurring.

[Makhda · Rating 2 out of 5]

I would've been fine if she had sex only with his stepbrother.