Review: Under the Saltwater Moon by Christa Hickcox
Under the Saltwater Moon has an intriguing premise: a moody coastal setting, a sapphic love story, and a murder mystery that should tie it all together. Unfortunately, the execution doesn’t quite live up to the concept.
Millie Myles, our protagonist, is newly hired in a police evidence unit and decides she’s going to solve a serial murder case. Ambition? Off the charts. Competence? Somewhere in a shallow grave. She’s not unreliable in an intriguing way, she’s unreliable in a “please stop contaminating the crime scene” way. The story jumps between tangents, and by the time the cult subplot appears, the murder mystery seems to have packed up and left.
The saving grace is the side cast. There’s a nonbinary wheelchair user, a Black gay roommate, and Mozzarella the cat; who, honestly, has more emotional stability than anyone else in the book. The diversity feels natural and genuinely refreshing, which makes it even more frustrating that the plot doesn’t match the same level of care.
Then there are the editing issues: inconsistent names (Nobel/Noble on the same page), and a love interest’s voice described as “enduring” instead of “endearing.” It’s hard not to suspect this book was at least partially written, or edited, by AI.
The atmosphere is nice, the premise promising, and the sapphic thread could have been lovely, but the story keeps tripping over its own chaos. By the end, it’s less “whodunit” and more “what even happened.”
I gave two stars for the inclusive cast and Mozzarella, zero for logic. Mozzarella deserves a spin off.
Thank you to the publisher and BookSirens for the ARC. I’m leaving this review voluntarily.