The story is presented as a journal kept by Cooper during the competitive season, and in a series of often short entries, he gives a quick recap of that day’s events in the game, including assignments he gives to his staff, events in training, signings, movements of players and managers in the football world, and so on.
Given its style as a day-to-day journal, the entries are written in a very informal style and not filled with the usual literary fluff such as scene descriptions, descriptions of personalities of the players etc. As a book, I want to cut it some slack because that’s how it’s deliberately set up stylistically, but it does make reading it harder to follow. As someone who isn’t familiar with Mansfield Town, I have no reference for comparison, and all I am reading are names in a journal.
The characters are shallow. They have no real depth to them, aside from little nicknames that he’d alternate in and out of using with given names. That’s to be expected, as they aren’t people he’s created himself, but it does affect the read for me, having such detached people clustered together. Perhaps this is just my own particular preference for style coming in with these types of entries, but aside from the cup of tea with “Leathers” and the discussions about humorous events in footballing, there’s no real interaction and connection between this cast of characters.
The book, however, lacks any real investment on my part in what happens with Mansfield during the season. I’m reading the words, but I’m not attached to the world. As in nearly every case of retellings of CM/FM, the attachment comes from the intimacy of doing the save yourself and investing the time yourself in watching the matches and setting up the team, rather than just retelling it in a quick, glossed over paragraph.
CM/FM is very much a “You have to have been there to get it” thing, and with only quick one-liners to recap the facts of the save and no creative story-telling and writing to stitch it together and give it an emotional connection, I find it hard to be truly engaged with the story, despite my enjoyment in reading it.
Still, it’s a decent enough book, and one that could be read in a single day, if you wanted to give it a read. 3/5 stars for me.