⭐️⭐️⭐️ 3 Stars
Marked has an interesting premise, especially around the concept of the Shadowborn and their varied abilities, but I struggled with the execution, particularly the characters and pacing.
I had a hard time getting into the story mainly because I didn’t connect with the FMC, Blair. She lacked depth for me, and her relationship with the school children felt oddly emphasized to the point of being uncomfortable at times...they have parents, and it felt unnecessary to frame those connections the way they were. That made it difficult to settle into her character from the start and she was truly annoying.
The pacing was another major issue. The story moves extremely fast without enough context or grounding. One moment Blair is an annoying schoolteacher, and the next she’s suddenly skilled, fighting, and on the run like a ninja-in-training with a man she barely knows, who she also seems to fall in love with almost immediately. The relationship felt rushed, unrelatable, and honestly unbelievable, which made it hard not to skim at times.
While the idea of the shadows and Shadowborn was cool, the purpose and overall plot felt unclear. Hunters are after Blair because of a dagger Damien gives her, despite knowing it can be sensed and is full of shadow energy, which didn’t make much sense to me. He insists she must follow him, but there’s very little explanation as to why, and that lack of clarity continues throughout the book.
There are also several plot holes that never seem to be addressed. For example, Blair seeing shadows outside her window early on is never really revisited or explained. The entire story revolves around running somewhere to defeat Hunters and phantoms, but since they start the book already running, I was often unsure how the stakes or direction were actually changing.
That said, the story did become more interesting as it went on, and I do plan to read the second book to see how the world and plot develop. Even so, by the end, I still didn’t feel particularly invested in the characters, their personalities, banter, and dynamics often felt annoying or disconnected from the established plot.
Overall, Marked had a promising concept but struggled with character development, pacing, and coherence. A decent read with potential, but one that didn’t fully land for me.
Sonya
BookBound and Blushed