Disappointing Short By The Queen of Erotica
*SPOILER AHEAD*
Never in a million years did I think I would write a one or two star review for any of Zane's works. She's one of my fave authors and have great material under her belt, but this SHORT STORY was hella disappointing and way too short. Had I not needed something to add to my book count, I probably wouldn't have finished. This was unneeded. In my opinion, I feel like she wrote this short story to capitalize off the "Addicted" movie-adaptation (which disappointed me as well).
But anyways, I felt like the first chapter was unnecessary. Instead of filling the chapter of with a sexual fantasy with "Orpheus" while she masturbated in her office, Zane could have at least given the actually sex two or three rounds.
Chapter 2 started off nice but the sex scene fell flat. It didn't give me what I wanted but it did drop a hint.
The third chapter was boring but I see a lot of the readers didn't pick up where Zane basically said, without saying, that "Orpheus" is none other than Jason. Their small conversation at the end kinda gave that away, which leads me to believe that to spice their relationship up, they role play or created these alter egos.
In conclusion, I wouldn't recommend this short story to anyone.