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56 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 5, 2025
She paints with apricots and air,NONE OF THIS MEANS ANYTHING AT ALL, and it has no connection to the stanzas before or after. It is literally nothing more than a random selection of words. What, of all the potential purposes of reading or poetry, is this supposed to fulfill? Poetry is an art form, and poetry for children requires the greatest level of care. It can convey wonder, whimsy, silliness (which is entirely different from random nonsense), teach, spark joy, and inspire. Take, for example, a REAL poem, the first in Poetry Speaks to Children by Sourcebooks MediaFusion,2005 : The First Book by Rita Dove:
And hangs her art with greatest care.
An apron tied around her waist,
She adds an acorn just for taste.
Open it.Isn't that glorious? Believe me, reading this to your child is a moving experience. This book was gifted to my child by a great-aunt who is herself a published poet. Poetry is full of emotion and can accomplish much. Whatever AI-generated garbage Denhartog insists on continuing to churn out accomplishes nothing except causing bile to backwash up my throat.
Go ahead, it won't bite.
Well... maybe a little.
More a nip, like. A tingle.
It's pleasurable, really.
You see, it keeps on opening.
You may fall in.
Sure, it's hard to get started;
remember learning to use
knife and fork? Dig in:
You'll never reach the bottom.
It's not like it's the end of the world—
just the world as you think
you know it.