"The breakdown: 35. Canuckian. ESL professor. Choir conductor. Former/now part-time classical singer. Writer. Extreme Geek. Diehard Johnlock shipper. Not a fan of Mary, at all. Firm believer that Mary needs to face justice for her many crimes and to do it elsewhere, and the sooner her departure comes, the better."
I get how the stream of consciousness from Sherlock’s perspective may seem over done but I absolutely adore it despite the ramble and thousands of parentheses. I think the author really captured the analytical and over productive workings of Sherlock’s mind which is quite rare - I just think the narrative method may need more work, but seeing how old this story is, I don’t have many complaints about it!