First POV fic, again, I normally don't read first POV fics but I'm more tolerant if it's from the top's POV (I am uninterested in any first POV fic from the bottom's POV)
Anyhow...well, the entire fic was rather a interesting Chinese Triad fic, where the MO changes from violence to manipulation. Main character is this hotheaded older brother who wasn't made the leader of his father's triad; his intelligent younger brother was made the leader. The point of the fic wasn't the slash, but the issue, and the author really did a good job on portraying the MC's life. I didn't really care for the MC (thought he was a bastard, but couldn't hate him. Just wasn't very interested in him). I loved the MC's younger brother, though XD The ending was totally unnecessary, however. I didn't like the idea of the MC getting away with cheating on his half-brother with that annoying brat and still being able to stay with his brother. Urgh. (Hence 2 stars)
Other than that, this was a fic that pushed my buttons.