Have read Scene One, am reading to look for monologues. Can already see maybe a possibility in Benny or possibly Cam. It’s a depressing, post-party morning for uni students almost ready to leave and go out into the world. I like the way she writes, feels like natural dialogue for the age that people are.
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Read Scene 2. Some real emotional moments - may be able to get some speech or idea from when Benny is convincing Cam to go to his concert. They’re all a bit lost, Uni has ended so now they don’t know what to do with themselves. Hits close to home and makes me feel something. Mack and Sophie are secretly getting it on behind Benny’s back, who’s dating Sophie. I feel bad for Benny, he seems to be the through-line to this play in a way.
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Read Scene 3. Timp reveals Laura covered in sushi, the party starts and lingers, tension building with Benny never quite joining in. Cam comes back and joins in, happy after a successful concert, and the tension builds more until it reaches its peak right at the end of the scene when Benny reveals that the lone 5th chair belongs to his brother who killed himself. Cam’s speech about the concert may be a good one to use, but I’m not sure as I can’t connect to the concert-specific moments enough.
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Read Scene 4, and reached end of Act 1. Explosive (literally) ending. Scene 4 was short but had felt the most personal so far. My favourite two characters, Benny and Cam, alone in the apartment. Cam tells Benny in a long monologue (maybe useful, worth checking out!) about when he was sitting at the table with the famous Russian guy, and how this old man came up to them, a man who’s taken pictures of Picasso, and the Russian guy just didn’t care. Impactful speech on the importance of youth and how when you’re older people just don’t really care anymore, there’s nothing ‘fresh’, nothing to make of you.
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Act 2 Sc 1. A quiet moment after the car explosion outside. Benny sits on the top of the fridge again while Timp and Laura talk about their love and their future. I really like Laura, her and Benny together is the overthinking duo and I love it.
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Act 2 Sc 2. Wow. An impactful scene, again maybe not as helpful for monologues, though Sophie has two big ones here. Just seeing her justifying with herself about the grief of Benny’s dead brother with the love of Mack. My god. These people are so flawed but so personal and relatable. Christ.
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Act 2 Sc 3. Very chaotic, impactful, vital scene. The chaos of the riots is going on outside, while the (arguably more chaotic) human clamour is going on, with Benny refusing to accept defeat, Mack being a dick, the history of Benny’s dead brother haunting the whole scene, especially near the end, and the pain of prolonged tension and emotion when it’s so obvious so thin the ice is. Brilliant drama. Not really any good places to get monologues from this scene but is a vital climax in the play.
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Act 2 Sc 4. Personal, post-party moments between the characters. Benny, Timp and Laura - Benny and Laura leave and Timp plans the next freshers he will plan to stay with. Sophie leaves Mack to go to Italy, alone, leaving Mack on his own at the end of the scene. No monologues but personal character moments.
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This is a really emotional play. I’ve been updating as I’ve been reading scene by scene but the last two scenes making up Act 3 I just ended up reading through because they were short and had a lot of emotion within them as all the characters took their last moments in the flat before they assumedly left for the bigger world. And this is what the play really represents - when to accept the party is over and go out and face the big world. It’s hard, it’s emotional, but it’s full of things that are worth trying for. This play is depressing but there’s no reason to give up when there’s always a chance to see what else there is in life. Who knows where it will go? Life is not just uni and living for the party. Definitely read back upon the notes I made as I was reading. There is a good Benny speech near the end of the play in Act 3 Scene 2 that I could pay attention to. But other than that, definitely glad I read this play. Related to the age of emotion deeply.