A dark college sports romance featuring a secret society and it’s RH? COUNT ME IN! In other words – there was no way Break Your Pucking Heart by Rachel Leigh wouldn’t grab my attention.
Based on the blurb and the tropes, the book sounded incredibly promising, and I thought it would be my next obsession. But… nope!
Let me start with the positives – the plot and somewhat the writing style. I found the storyline interesting, the idea genuinely good, and the pacing kept the plot moving and engaging. I say the writing style is only somewhat good because while it develops the story and provides decent descriptions to help visualize the setting, when it comes to the characters and tropes, it felt very shallow. And that’s about all the good I can say.
There are elements introduced at the start that the author seems to forget later on, like Avery’s supposed desire to avoid a relationship and the reason she broke Callan’s heart. Halfway through, the story changes its tune completely, which makes no sense. The same goes for their relationship – one minute they’re at each other’s throats, and the next they’re together like nothing happened.
The secret society trope is notoriously difficult to incorporate well, and Break Your Pucking Heart proves that again. It’s unclear why certain things happen within the Lords’ society, what exactly it is, or what its rules are – it’s just there. The boys play hockey and sometimes kill a person or two, apparently.
Which brings me to my next complaint. This is marketed as a dark romance, yet I saw nothing dark about it. I wouldn’t mind that, if the three male leads – who are supposedly tormenting Avery to make it “dark” – weren’t just getting her to attend their games or parties (where she herself causes problems) or making her carry some random rock. It was absurd. Instead of intimidating villains, they felt like bored teenage boys giving her silly errands to keep the plot moving. That doesn’t work.
I don’t have much to say about the characters. I couldn’t fully get to know even Avery or Callan, despite having chapters from both their POVs. Some bits of their past are revealed, but too vaguely to build a real picture of who they are or justify their actions. Still, I have to mention Avery – what an annoying main character. The author tried to make her strong, sassy, and bold, but she came off as whiny, nosey, and ridiculous. She was part of the reason I lowered my rating.
As for Sebastian and Aidric – I couldn't tell much about them, except that one is supposedly scarier than the other. I do hope the next book delves deeper into their personalities, because Aidric definitely caught my interest.
The book ends with a cliffhanger that did pique my curiosity just enough for me to continue with the series.
As I said – the story is interesting, it just didn’t hook me the way I’d hoped. I chalk it up to the combination of all the issues I mentioned. Despite that, I’m willing to keep reading to see if things improve and whether the author deepens the characters moving forward.
Rating: 3/5 ⭐
~~~✨This book was provided to me by Valentine PR for my honest opinion.✨~~~