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Better Luck Next Time: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
His only job is to protect her. But first, he has to keep track of her.
When Elizabeth Montclair’s privileged world shatters after witnessing a crime that could topple the crown, she vanishes into the quiet countryside, hiding in plain sight with the unsuspecting Bennet family. Her sharp tongue and quick wit make her impossible to ignore—and even harder to protect.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has one job: keep the fiery, reckless heiress alive. The prince regent’s promise to restore Pemberley to him, the rightful owner, hinges on his success, but there’s one problem—Elizabeth "Bennet" refuses to be kept. As danger closes in, Darcy’s careful plans unravel, and his heart becomes a casualty of the mission he swore would be strictly business.
Secrets, lies, and simmering tension collide in this high-stakes Regency romance where trust is the deadliest game of all.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has one job: keep the fiery, reckless heiress alive. The prince regent’s promise to restore Pemberley to him, the rightful owner, hinges on his success, but there’s one problem—Elizabeth "Bennet" refuses to be kept. As danger closes in, Darcy’s careful plans unravel, and his heart becomes a casualty of the mission he swore would be strictly business.
Secrets, lies, and simmering tension collide in this high-stakes Regency romance where trust is the deadliest game of all.
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434 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 30, 2025
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Alix James
46 books121 followersShort and sassy romance for busy readers
Alix James is a best-selling romance author under another pen name. Always on the go as a wife, mom, and small business owner, she rarely has time to finish a whole novel. She loves coffee with the sunrise and being outdoors. When she does get free time, she likes to read, camp, dream up romantic adventures, and tries to avoid housework.
Each Alix James Story is a clean Regency Variation of approximately 20,000 words.
Alix James is a best-selling romance author under another pen name. Always on the go as a wife, mom, and small business owner, she rarely has time to finish a whole novel. She loves coffee with the sunrise and being outdoors. When she does get free time, she likes to read, camp, dream up romantic adventures, and tries to avoid housework.
Each Alix James Story is a clean Regency Variation of approximately 20,000 words.
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April 14, 2025
5+ stars!
I am in awe!
I've always loved this author's books, whether she's writing as Alix James or Nicole Clarkston, but this one absolutely blew me away. It merges two tropes-- the Elizabeth-is-not-a-Bennet trope and the Elizabeth-is-in-a-higher-sphere-than-Darcy trope. Then it takes them to a whole other level, leading up to a doozy of a climax.
It starts with Lady Elizabeth Montclair, daughter of the Marquess of Ashwick, and her best friend, Lady Charlotte Wrexham, daughter of a duke. The two are in the Ladies Gallery observing the proceedings in the House of Lords, which is currently debating some dull topic that hasn't engaged Lady Elizabeth's interest at all. She's more interested in finding Mr. Henry Audley, who is to address the House of Commons that day. So she slips away from her friend and their chaperone. This lands her in a prime position to witness the assassination of the Prime Minister, Spencer Perceval.
Chaos ensues, and a man named Bellingham is swiftly identified and arrested for the murder, but Elizabeth knows it wasn't him-- she saw the second gunman who fired the fatal shot and slid into the crowd. But before he did, his eyes met hers; he clearly realized that she can identify him.
Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives at Netherfield (not for the first time) to visit Bingley and Bingley's relations. The next day, they all dine with the neighboring Bennet family, who Darcy met during a previous visit and finds ridiculous. Their meal is interrupted by an urgent message summoning him back to London immediately to meet with the prince.
Darcy is an agent for the Home Office. But there's lots more to his backstory than this. He's still the nephew of an earl, but the Darcy name is in disgrace. His father was stripped of title and property by the Crown years ago, the details of which don't emerge until late in the book. Darcy's burning desire to reclaim his family's honor is made clear during the book's first conversation between him and the Prince Regent, where he receives the assignment to quietly investigate the "rumor" of a second shooter as well as to hide and protect the lone witness: Lady Elizabeth.
She's spitting mad about the situation and resistant to being spirited off by this awful stranger without even saying goodbye to her father and friends. And Darcy, as a bachelor, is not certain what to do with her without ruining her. She doesn't seem to understand the gravity of the situation and keeps trying to get away from him. How can he keep her safe (especially when she's so recalcitrant) and also track the real assassin?
The answer? Place her with the Bennets! With Mr. Bennet's assistance, she becomes Miss Elizabeth Bennet, daughter of his (actually childless) cousin, Daniel Bennet, who resides far away in Shropshire and hasn't seen the rest of his family in years.
It's a brilliant setup, and it's executed just as brilliantly. Darcy is stoically serious, so Elizabeth (when she's not trying to escape from him) takes it as a personal challenge to make him smile or, even better, to laugh. There are screwball comedy elements in much of the book-- for example, when Darcy discovers that Elizabeth has accidentally gotten herself drunk and is about to meet the Bennets for the first time. Things gradually get more and more serious to the point where you realize it has become a true nail-biter. At times, I couldn't imagine that a happy ending was even possible. Near the end, it will rip your heart in shreds. And then put it back together in a fitting resolution.
It's a perfect blend of well-written comedy, thrills, and romance. Highly recommend!
Content is steamy but clean.
I received a free copy and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I am in awe!
I've always loved this author's books, whether she's writing as Alix James or Nicole Clarkston, but this one absolutely blew me away. It merges two tropes-- the Elizabeth-is-not-a-Bennet trope and the Elizabeth-is-in-a-higher-sphere-than-Darcy trope. Then it takes them to a whole other level, leading up to a doozy of a climax.
It starts with Lady Elizabeth Montclair, daughter of the Marquess of Ashwick, and her best friend, Lady Charlotte Wrexham, daughter of a duke. The two are in the Ladies Gallery observing the proceedings in the House of Lords, which is currently debating some dull topic that hasn't engaged Lady Elizabeth's interest at all. She's more interested in finding Mr. Henry Audley, who is to address the House of Commons that day. So she slips away from her friend and their chaperone. This lands her in a prime position to witness the assassination of the Prime Minister, Spencer Perceval.
Chaos ensues, and a man named Bellingham is swiftly identified and arrested for the murder, but Elizabeth knows it wasn't him-- she saw the second gunman who fired the fatal shot and slid into the crowd. But before he did, his eyes met hers; he clearly realized that she can identify him.
Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives at Netherfield (not for the first time) to visit Bingley and Bingley's relations. The next day, they all dine with the neighboring Bennet family, who Darcy met during a previous visit and finds ridiculous. Their meal is interrupted by an urgent message summoning him back to London immediately to meet with the prince.
Darcy is an agent for the Home Office. But there's lots more to his backstory than this. He's still the nephew of an earl, but the Darcy name is in disgrace. His father was stripped of title and property by the Crown years ago, the details of which don't emerge until late in the book. Darcy's burning desire to reclaim his family's honor is made clear during the book's first conversation between him and the Prince Regent, where he receives the assignment to quietly investigate the "rumor" of a second shooter as well as to hide and protect the lone witness: Lady Elizabeth.
She's spitting mad about the situation and resistant to being spirited off by this awful stranger without even saying goodbye to her father and friends. And Darcy, as a bachelor, is not certain what to do with her without ruining her. She doesn't seem to understand the gravity of the situation and keeps trying to get away from him. How can he keep her safe (especially when she's so recalcitrant) and also track the real assassin?
The answer? Place her with the Bennets! With Mr. Bennet's assistance, she becomes Miss Elizabeth Bennet, daughter of his (actually childless) cousin, Daniel Bennet, who resides far away in Shropshire and hasn't seen the rest of his family in years.
It's a brilliant setup, and it's executed just as brilliantly. Darcy is stoically serious, so Elizabeth (when she's not trying to escape from him) takes it as a personal challenge to make him smile or, even better, to laugh. There are screwball comedy elements in much of the book-- for example, when Darcy discovers that Elizabeth has accidentally gotten herself drunk and is about to meet the Bennets for the first time. Things gradually get more and more serious to the point where you realize it has become a true nail-biter. At times, I couldn't imagine that a happy ending was even possible. Near the end, it will rip your heart in shreds. And then put it back together in a fitting resolution.
It's a perfect blend of well-written comedy, thrills, and romance. Highly recommend!
Content is steamy but clean.
I received a free copy and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 16, 2025
This long story is full of angst. And although I no longer am able to stay up late reading stories, beware that you may find yourself in that position. This author writes under two names and is one whose JAFF variations I will "borrow" on KU just because I know I can trust her to write a good story.
We have two main premises: Elizabeth is of the peerage: rich and connected...Lady Elizabeth Montclair. The Darcys have lost Pemberley and Darcy House (under heinous circumstances) and our man finds himself working for the government and living in a humble small apartment.
Elizabeth witnesses the assassination of the Prime Minister! However, she is the only witness who sees two men shooting at the PM...and the second man melts into the crowd AFTER he sees Elizabeth staring at him. So we soon find her in a flight to hide, with Darcy ordered to protect her.
Here the Bennet family comes into our story. Darcy, of course, is friends with Bingley and has met the Bennets. So...Elizabeth becomes a Bennet.
Elizabeth does not make it easy on Darcy. Seemingly she doesn't realize how vulnerable she is and how clever some seeking her are. At one point she and Darcy even find themselves under fire as the house in which they are is shattered by numerous gunshots!
Yes, Darcy finds himself falling in love, but he has nothing to offer her, not even a place to stay, and as the story winds down we read that he plans to seek a position on the Continent to try to forget her.
I highly recommend this story. There is much I cannot touch on so as not to give any more clues as to how the tale proceeds.
I received an ARC of this story and am voluntarily leaving a review.
We have two main premises: Elizabeth is of the peerage: rich and connected...Lady Elizabeth Montclair. The Darcys have lost Pemberley and Darcy House (under heinous circumstances) and our man finds himself working for the government and living in a humble small apartment.
Elizabeth witnesses the assassination of the Prime Minister! However, she is the only witness who sees two men shooting at the PM...and the second man melts into the crowd AFTER he sees Elizabeth staring at him. So we soon find her in a flight to hide, with Darcy ordered to protect her.
Here the Bennet family comes into our story. Darcy, of course, is friends with Bingley and has met the Bennets. So...Elizabeth becomes a Bennet.
Elizabeth does not make it easy on Darcy. Seemingly she doesn't realize how vulnerable she is and how clever some seeking her are. At one point she and Darcy even find themselves under fire as the house in which they are is shattered by numerous gunshots!
Yes, Darcy finds himself falling in love, but he has nothing to offer her, not even a place to stay, and as the story winds down we read that he plans to seek a position on the Continent to try to forget her.
I highly recommend this story. There is much I cannot touch on so as not to give any more clues as to how the tale proceeds.
I received an ARC of this story and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 24, 2025
Better Luck Next Time by Alix James is a wonderfully unique twist of the Elizabeth is not a Bennet trope. Elizabeth is the daughter of a Marquess that witnessed Prime Minister Percival’s assassination. However, the man who committed the murder in our history books, Bellingham, did not act alone. At least, not in this book. Darcy, whose family was disgraced and now works for a living, is tasked with protecting Elizabeth. He decides to place her at Longbourn.
This book is exciting and interesting. The Bennets are a flawed, loving family. Darcy is dreamy. I would give this 4.5 stars rounded to 5. My only quibble is that I would have liked to know what happened with Collins, Lady Catherine, and most especially, Wickham.
This book is exciting and interesting. The Bennets are a flawed, loving family. Darcy is dreamy. I would give this 4.5 stars rounded to 5. My only quibble is that I would have liked to know what happened with Collins, Lady Catherine, and most especially, Wickham.
May 1, 2025
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
“Lady Elizabeth Montclair did not set out to witness a murder.” (quote from the book)
With that opening line, you know you are in for an adventure full of intrigue and secrets. Ms. James does not do anything by halves. It is exciting, emotional and witty banter from start to finish.
“He had been raised to understand the nuances of power – who wielded it, who sought it, and who would destroy themselves in its pursuit. He had been taught the art of caution, the value of discretion, and the wisdom of never reaching too high.” (quote from the book)
What’s not to love, when Mr. Darcy is an agent for the Crown? How did this come about and why is Pemberley lost to him? When sparks and words fly between Lady Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy, you know you are in for a wild ride and simmering chemistry.
“The home was not hers. The name was not hers. Nothing about this life was meant to last. And yet – when the door closed behind him – she felt, for the first time in her life, as though she belonged.” (quote from the book)
But where does the Bennet family fit into this? How does the daughter of a Marquess ‘fit in’ with a family where propriety and rigid decorum are thrown to the wind? This definitely showed a different perspective of the Bennet family, but one that was entirely believable and just a tad tamer. Elizabeth sees a real family with all the messy bits. I loved it!
“Darcy inhaled deeply, forcing himself to return his focus to the path ahead. This woman would drive him to madness.” (quote from the book)
As Darcy tirelessly works to secure the safety of the now ‘Elizabeth Bennet’, the danger to her life starts ramping up. What’s a fellow to do when he has to be in two places at once? How does he curb the recklessness of a woman who has gotten under his skin? Who can they trust in this dangerous game? I will leave that for you to find out. My only word of caution is to hold on to your bonnet or your top hat! Once the pursuit is on, you will barely have time to breathe!
My only quibbles had to do with some of our usual suspects. I do wish there were some ‘end results’ about them. However, I loved Mr. Bingley and the quiet strength of Jane Bennet.
I highly recommend this newest adventure from the talented pen of Ms. James!
I was fortunate to receive a free book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
April 30, 2025
Protection is the first necessity of opulence and luxury. — Joseph Conrad
Recommendation: Begin this book when you will have ample reading time. It is not a story you will be able to leave easily.
The backstory first – Fitzwilliam Darcy is in straitened circumstances. Through no fault of his own, Pemberley has been lost. Darcy works for the Crown in any way the Prince Regent requires.
Elizabeth is not a Bennet but a Montclair – Lady Elizabeth Montclair, daughter of a Marquess.
The best protection any woman can have … is courage. — Elizabeth Cady Stanton
Lady Elizabeth does not lack courage. She dares to enter an arena that is strictly male and witnesses a horrific crime. Unfortunately, she is seen.
The Prince Regent assigns Darcy to ensure Lady Elizabeth’s protection: to remove her from London without causing family or friends apprehension, cover her tracks, and hide her in plain sight.
Darcy’s plan places her in a small village in Hertfordshire, in the home of the Bennet family.
Protection and security are only valuable if they do not cramp life excessively. — Carl Jung
Lady Elizabeth doesn’t always obey the rules her protector has set for her. When she believes her life is excessively cramped, she takes matters into her own hands. She has some characteristics we don’t usually see in Elizabeth Bennet. On occasion, she reminded me of Caroline Bingley – Horrors!
I would have enjoyed seeing Wickham’s reaction to the HEA, but that absence is not enough to lower my rating.
Loved it! 5++ Stars!
When you protect yourself from pain, do not protect yourself from love. — Alan Cohen
Recommendation: Begin this book when you will have ample reading time. It is not a story you will be able to leave easily.
The backstory first – Fitzwilliam Darcy is in straitened circumstances. Through no fault of his own, Pemberley has been lost. Darcy works for the Crown in any way the Prince Regent requires.
Elizabeth is not a Bennet but a Montclair – Lady Elizabeth Montclair, daughter of a Marquess.
The best protection any woman can have … is courage. — Elizabeth Cady Stanton
Lady Elizabeth does not lack courage. She dares to enter an arena that is strictly male and witnesses a horrific crime. Unfortunately, she is seen.
The Prince Regent assigns Darcy to ensure Lady Elizabeth’s protection: to remove her from London without causing family or friends apprehension, cover her tracks, and hide her in plain sight.
Darcy’s plan places her in a small village in Hertfordshire, in the home of the Bennet family.
Protection and security are only valuable if they do not cramp life excessively. — Carl Jung
Lady Elizabeth doesn’t always obey the rules her protector has set for her. When she believes her life is excessively cramped, she takes matters into her own hands. She has some characteristics we don’t usually see in Elizabeth Bennet. On occasion, she reminded me of Caroline Bingley – Horrors!
I would have enjoyed seeing Wickham’s reaction to the HEA, but that absence is not enough to lower my rating.
Loved it! 5++ Stars!
When you protect yourself from pain, do not protect yourself from love. — Alan Cohen
April 30, 2025
The wealthy Lady Elizabeth Montclair is witness to a scrupulous crime. To keep her safe the Prince Regent decides to put her under Darcy's care.
Fitzwilliam Darcy works for the home office and tries to do everything to restore Pemberley to his family. His latest mission for the Prince Regent is therefore to keep Lady Elizabeth alive and find the culprit of the crime. He hides her in the middle of the Bennet household in Hertfordshire as their estranged cousin Elizabeth Bennet. But the young lady does not want to be told what to do and she definitely does not want to be kept. When the enemies come closer and closer Darcy frantically needs to develop a new plan. And the more time he spends with Elizabeth the more he is drawn to her. Will Darcy be able to protect his heart and accomplish his mission? Will Elizabeth finally understand the gravity of her situation? And who tries to silence her forever?
The book was very well written by the author Alix James. I know I already said in my review for her last release (Raising the stakes) that that book was probably her best, and I can say this about this book, too. It was really exceptional and intense. It was angsty due to Darcy and Elizabeth being constantly in alarm or on the run because they fear actions from the criminals. They face most of the difficulties together (they are not yet a couple) therefore for me the angst was not unbearable. But the book was nevertheless very thrilling and exciting and one expected something to happen at any time until the very end. Fortunately everything resolved itself in the end. But to reach this point ODC needs to endure a lot.
The financial situation of Darcy and Elizabeth is reversed in this version. Elizabeth Montclair is a rich heiress and Fitzwilliam Darcy is a poor worker for the home office. He was to inherit Pemberley but due to occurrence in the past he lost all his rights and was not able to restore them back. Working for the Prince Regent is therefore the only opportunity to plead his case. Darcy is a real hero in this story because he runs with Elizabeth for life and needs to keep her safe. But he is a vulnerable hero. Not born or educated for that, with principles, many secrets no one knows about and a scandal surrounding his family. He is at the point of losing his heart completely to Elizabeth. And he is stubborn, he is not willing to allow this to happen. Finally he surrenders a bit but he sees no chance for himself and Elizabeth because he is not willing to burden Elizabeth with his existence, even not if it is she who seeks him out. Fortunately Elizabeth is even more determined then he is and she gets what she wants - and that is Darcy.
Due to her changed upbringing Elizabeth is rich, well educated, sure of herself and has nearly everything money can buy. But she soon discovers as Elizabeth “Bennet” that there is more to life than money. She discovers the worth of family, of sisterhood, of caring for others, of trust and of love. And she is determined to do everything for her happiness even if it means to lose a great deal. I like her determination. Like always she is very impertinent. But as an heiress it is fitting, she has the means to be so without causing offense. At the beginning Elizabeth acts a bit silly and girlish and tries to fight Darcy's protection but fortunately she soon realizes that she needs him desperately to stay alive and hide from the criminals. I like the bravery she shows throughout the book and her determination to fight for the things most important to her. And her idea to finally convince Darcy of their union was an excellent one 😉.
I really loved the development of the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. They secretly love each other for a while but it takes them a long time to declare themselves. They see each other at their worst but they are also forced to spend time together in society and in hiding. They get a thorough picture of the other and can therefore make a competent decision. I found the rising tension between the two very well written.
I really love Bingley in this version. He is a steadfast friend to Darcy and tries to help as best as he can. He does not know everything about Darcy's life and his occupation but when Darcy needs his help he is there without hesitation and without questioning Darcy's motifs. And his friendship is the more true because Darcy is not his superior due to his changed circumstances.
There are some new villains in this story whom’s crime Elizabeth is witness to. They are unscrupulous and they hunt and hurt Darcy and Elizabeth. I am so grateful that, in the end, the villains are not successful and get what they deserve. Old, well-known villains are also part of the story, but sometimes in another way then we are used to reading about them. You need to see for yourself.
And I must confess I definitely didn't like the Prince Regent. He was such a selfish, unscrupulous man. In the end you will surely understand what I mean.
If you like to know how Darcy keeps Elizabeth, the witness of a crime, safe and thereby loses his heart you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Fitzwilliam Darcy works for the home office and tries to do everything to restore Pemberley to his family. His latest mission for the Prince Regent is therefore to keep Lady Elizabeth alive and find the culprit of the crime. He hides her in the middle of the Bennet household in Hertfordshire as their estranged cousin Elizabeth Bennet. But the young lady does not want to be told what to do and she definitely does not want to be kept. When the enemies come closer and closer Darcy frantically needs to develop a new plan. And the more time he spends with Elizabeth the more he is drawn to her. Will Darcy be able to protect his heart and accomplish his mission? Will Elizabeth finally understand the gravity of her situation? And who tries to silence her forever?
The book was very well written by the author Alix James. I know I already said in my review for her last release (Raising the stakes) that that book was probably her best, and I can say this about this book, too. It was really exceptional and intense. It was angsty due to Darcy and Elizabeth being constantly in alarm or on the run because they fear actions from the criminals. They face most of the difficulties together (they are not yet a couple) therefore for me the angst was not unbearable. But the book was nevertheless very thrilling and exciting and one expected something to happen at any time until the very end. Fortunately everything resolved itself in the end. But to reach this point ODC needs to endure a lot.
The financial situation of Darcy and Elizabeth is reversed in this version. Elizabeth Montclair is a rich heiress and Fitzwilliam Darcy is a poor worker for the home office. He was to inherit Pemberley but due to occurrence in the past he lost all his rights and was not able to restore them back. Working for the Prince Regent is therefore the only opportunity to plead his case. Darcy is a real hero in this story because he runs with Elizabeth for life and needs to keep her safe. But he is a vulnerable hero. Not born or educated for that, with principles, many secrets no one knows about and a scandal surrounding his family. He is at the point of losing his heart completely to Elizabeth. And he is stubborn, he is not willing to allow this to happen. Finally he surrenders a bit but he sees no chance for himself and Elizabeth because he is not willing to burden Elizabeth with his existence, even not if it is she who seeks him out. Fortunately Elizabeth is even more determined then he is and she gets what she wants - and that is Darcy.
Due to her changed upbringing Elizabeth is rich, well educated, sure of herself and has nearly everything money can buy. But she soon discovers as Elizabeth “Bennet” that there is more to life than money. She discovers the worth of family, of sisterhood, of caring for others, of trust and of love. And she is determined to do everything for her happiness even if it means to lose a great deal. I like her determination. Like always she is very impertinent. But as an heiress it is fitting, she has the means to be so without causing offense. At the beginning Elizabeth acts a bit silly and girlish and tries to fight Darcy's protection but fortunately she soon realizes that she needs him desperately to stay alive and hide from the criminals. I like the bravery she shows throughout the book and her determination to fight for the things most important to her. And her idea to finally convince Darcy of their union was an excellent one 😉.
I really loved the development of the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. They secretly love each other for a while but it takes them a long time to declare themselves. They see each other at their worst but they are also forced to spend time together in society and in hiding. They get a thorough picture of the other and can therefore make a competent decision. I found the rising tension between the two very well written.
I really love Bingley in this version. He is a steadfast friend to Darcy and tries to help as best as he can. He does not know everything about Darcy's life and his occupation but when Darcy needs his help he is there without hesitation and without questioning Darcy's motifs. And his friendship is the more true because Darcy is not his superior due to his changed circumstances.
There are some new villains in this story whom’s crime Elizabeth is witness to. They are unscrupulous and they hunt and hurt Darcy and Elizabeth. I am so grateful that, in the end, the villains are not successful and get what they deserve. Old, well-known villains are also part of the story, but sometimes in another way then we are used to reading about them. You need to see for yourself.
And I must confess I definitely didn't like the Prince Regent. He was such a selfish, unscrupulous man. In the end you will surely understand what I mean.
If you like to know how Darcy keeps Elizabeth, the witness of a crime, safe and thereby loses his heart you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 21, 2025
Couldn't finish
I have to give credit for good writing. I made it about one-third of the way in before I quit. I object to books that ride on the coattails of Pride and Prejudice, when Elizabeth and Darcy bear no resemblance to Jane Austen's characters. In this tale, Lady Elizabeth Montclair is the daughter of a duke, and she inadvertently witnesses an assassination of the Prime Minister. In a very Lydia Bennett-like maneuver, she's chasing after a handsome member of the House of Commons, being where she's not supposed to be, and escaping from her companions to do it. She finds herself in a predicament, and shows her true colors by being arrogant, rude, and shrewish. Darcy is the unfortunate employee of the Crown who must conceal her until the assassin is arrested. Instead of our beloved Darcy who is cool, confident, and proper, this Darcy is awful and clueless. The plot calls for Elizabeth Montclair to assume the surname of Bennett, and hide out among the chaotic Bennett family in Hertfordshire as a visiting cousin, while Darcy resides at Netherfield with Bingley so that he can keep watch on her.
I so much didn't like either Darcy or Elizabeth that I didn't want to follow this to its assumed resolution, which would be that they eventually fall in love. This Elizabeth was so completely repellant, she could give Lady Catherine competition for most snooty and privileged, while also acting wild and rebellious. If you're going to call a book a variation of Pride and Prejudice, IMHO, the main characters should at least retain the essence of the originals. Names and locations are borrowed, but that's it.
Although the book is well written, I can't recommend it.
I have to give credit for good writing. I made it about one-third of the way in before I quit. I object to books that ride on the coattails of Pride and Prejudice, when Elizabeth and Darcy bear no resemblance to Jane Austen's characters. In this tale, Lady Elizabeth Montclair is the daughter of a duke, and she inadvertently witnesses an assassination of the Prime Minister. In a very Lydia Bennett-like maneuver, she's chasing after a handsome member of the House of Commons, being where she's not supposed to be, and escaping from her companions to do it. She finds herself in a predicament, and shows her true colors by being arrogant, rude, and shrewish. Darcy is the unfortunate employee of the Crown who must conceal her until the assassin is arrested. Instead of our beloved Darcy who is cool, confident, and proper, this Darcy is awful and clueless. The plot calls for Elizabeth Montclair to assume the surname of Bennett, and hide out among the chaotic Bennett family in Hertfordshire as a visiting cousin, while Darcy resides at Netherfield with Bingley so that he can keep watch on her.
I so much didn't like either Darcy or Elizabeth that I didn't want to follow this to its assumed resolution, which would be that they eventually fall in love. This Elizabeth was so completely repellant, she could give Lady Catherine competition for most snooty and privileged, while also acting wild and rebellious. If you're going to call a book a variation of Pride and Prejudice, IMHO, the main characters should at least retain the essence of the originals. Names and locations are borrowed, but that's it.
Although the book is well written, I can't recommend it.
April 25, 2025
Adorable
Ugh I can’t stop smiling after this one. I have to admit that I was very frustrated by Lizzy in the first few chapters but I do think that she was completely in character and acting exactly how Lizzy would act had she been raised in wealth & high society her entire life.
I absolutely loved this Darcy.
I was a bit worried about the length of this book but the pacing was fabulous & plot was engaging. I adored the Bennet family & Lizzy’s opinions of them. The denouement was so well done. It wasn’t overwrought (which I hate) & made sense. I am not a fan of angst that feels pointless or needlessly extended (especially the sort that could be completely resolved with a simple conversation) and this never felt that sort of angsty to me.
I absolutely loved this one and will definitely read it again. I have read other Alix James books I have loved and ones I thought were fine and one I didn’t finish. This one is one of my absolute favorites.
I received an ARC & honestly can’t recall if I agreed to leave a review or not. Either way I am voluntarily leaving this glowing review because this book was fabulous.
Ugh I can’t stop smiling after this one. I have to admit that I was very frustrated by Lizzy in the first few chapters but I do think that she was completely in character and acting exactly how Lizzy would act had she been raised in wealth & high society her entire life.
I absolutely loved this Darcy.
I was a bit worried about the length of this book but the pacing was fabulous & plot was engaging. I adored the Bennet family & Lizzy’s opinions of them. The denouement was so well done. It wasn’t overwrought (which I hate) & made sense. I am not a fan of angst that feels pointless or needlessly extended (especially the sort that could be completely resolved with a simple conversation) and this never felt that sort of angsty to me.
I absolutely loved this one and will definitely read it again. I have read other Alix James books I have loved and ones I thought were fine and one I didn’t finish. This one is one of my absolute favorites.
I received an ARC & honestly can’t recall if I agreed to leave a review or not. Either way I am voluntarily leaving this glowing review because this book was fabulous.
May 21, 2025
I loved the pacing of this book. My only question is what about Mr A?
May 7, 2025
excellent read if you’re prepared
I usually love Alix James novels. This one is an excellent read, but Lizzy is so far off cannon in her actions for the first half of the book that simply tweaking a few other characters and giving everyone new names would have made this a very satisfying Regency non-P&P adventure. At first I was waving my fist at the book, but after I just decided to be ok with a childish, rather petty Lizzy and promised myself a grand maturation in her story arc (which I eventually received) I liked the book much better. I definitely recommend going in expecting Lizzy to be a spoiled brat at first.
My favorite parts of the book were Lizzy recognizing her own entitlement and realizing what family should be, and the fast pace of the story. It is just right; it doesn’t fly by in a blur, but never drags, either. The Prince Regent is a deliciously decadent character we learn to revile. Mr Collins and Lady C, while pivotal, have minor page presence. Caroline Bingley is reduced to a minor annoyance, and isn’t missed. Bingley and Jane both have spines when needed, and Mr Bennett is a much nicer version of himself.
If adventure variations are your jam, I do recommend this one. Just go on expecting a very immature Lizzy at first
I usually love Alix James novels. This one is an excellent read, but Lizzy is so far off cannon in her actions for the first half of the book that simply tweaking a few other characters and giving everyone new names would have made this a very satisfying Regency non-P&P adventure. At first I was waving my fist at the book, but after I just decided to be ok with a childish, rather petty Lizzy and promised myself a grand maturation in her story arc (which I eventually received) I liked the book much better. I definitely recommend going in expecting Lizzy to be a spoiled brat at first.
My favorite parts of the book were Lizzy recognizing her own entitlement and realizing what family should be, and the fast pace of the story. It is just right; it doesn’t fly by in a blur, but never drags, either. The Prince Regent is a deliciously decadent character we learn to revile. Mr Collins and Lady C, while pivotal, have minor page presence. Caroline Bingley is reduced to a minor annoyance, and isn’t missed. Bingley and Jane both have spines when needed, and Mr Bennett is a much nicer version of himself.
If adventure variations are your jam, I do recommend this one. Just go on expecting a very immature Lizzy at first
July 8, 2025
An excellent, well-crafted suspense filled tale. Darcy has lost everything and has only a few he can depend on. Elizbeth is a witness Darcy is assigned to protect. She makes it difficult. He whisks her from London and hides her with the Bennets while he stays with Bingley. Unfortunately, danger lurks and things continue to unravel.
This is a very enjoyable, compelling and satisfying read. Elizabeth is independent, witty and smart. She tries Darcy’s patience almost to the breaking point. He is rock solid and doing everything he can to protect her despite her interference. The Bennets are boisterous and loving. There is a good mix of angst, humor, and romance. I found this hard to put down once I started. Heartily recommended!
This is a very enjoyable, compelling and satisfying read. Elizabeth is independent, witty and smart. She tries Darcy’s patience almost to the breaking point. He is rock solid and doing everything he can to protect her despite her interference. The Bennets are boisterous and loving. There is a good mix of angst, humor, and romance. I found this hard to put down once I started. Heartily recommended!
May 7, 2025
5+++!
April 16, 2025
I’m not normally a fan of books where Lizzy is the proud one and Darcy is the prejudiced one (which is probably something I need to unpack at some point) and at the beginning I wasn’t sure if I was going to like it - Lady Elizabeth is spoiled and doesn’t seem to understand the very real danger she is in (and is putting other people in).
However getting to know her over the course of the book made me realise just how much of that was a young woman trying to cope with frightening circumstances and by the end I was cheering her on!
Darcy’s arc is also very compelling, and I loved the looks into his thought processes and the delicate balance he was constantly trying to strike between all the different factors in his life. Overall I really enjoyed this book.
Spoilers:
I didn’t expect the reasoning behind the removal of Pemberley - I was expecting Darcy’s father to be accused of something more directly related to the crown, although then I suppose they wouldn’t necessarily have let Darcy work for them.
I’m not sure if Alix has used trigger warnings in her work but this might be a good one to mention because while it’s obviously a period-typical viewpoint, it’s a particularly contentious one in today’s climate.
In any case: trigger warning for period-typical homophobia, although neither main character gives their opinion on gay people, a scandal resulting in punishment does occur as a result of the erroneous opinions, assumptions and laws of the time.
However getting to know her over the course of the book made me realise just how much of that was a young woman trying to cope with frightening circumstances and by the end I was cheering her on!
Darcy’s arc is also very compelling, and I loved the looks into his thought processes and the delicate balance he was constantly trying to strike between all the different factors in his life. Overall I really enjoyed this book.
Spoilers:
I didn’t expect the reasoning behind the removal of Pemberley - I was expecting Darcy’s father to be accused of something more directly related to the crown, although then I suppose they wouldn’t necessarily have let Darcy work for them.
I’m not sure if Alix has used trigger warnings in her work but this might be a good one to mention because while it’s obviously a period-typical viewpoint, it’s a particularly contentious one in today’s climate.
In any case: trigger warning for period-typical homophobia, although neither main character gives their opinion on gay people, a scandal resulting in punishment does occur as a result of the erroneous opinions, assumptions and laws of the time.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 21, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a part of the First Impressions series. Secrets, lies, and simmering tension collide in this high-stakes Regency romance where trust is the deadliest game of all. His only job is to protect her, but first, he has to keep track of her.
When Elizabeth Montclair’s privileged world shatters after witnessing a crime that could topple the crown, she vanishes into the quiet countryside, hiding in plain sight with the unsuspecting Bennet family. Her sharp tongue and quick wit make her impossible to ignore, and even harder to protect. Fitzwilliam Darcy has one job, keep the fiery, reckless heiress alive. The prince regent’s promise to restore Pemberley to him, the rightful owner, hinges on his success, but there’s one problem, Elizabeth "Bennet" refuses to be kept. As danger closes in, Darcy’s careful plans unravel, and his heart becomes a casualty of the mission he swore would be strictly business. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a part of the First Impressions series. Secrets, lies, and simmering tension collide in this high-stakes Regency romance where trust is the deadliest game of all. His only job is to protect her, but first, he has to keep track of her.
When Elizabeth Montclair’s privileged world shatters after witnessing a crime that could topple the crown, she vanishes into the quiet countryside, hiding in plain sight with the unsuspecting Bennet family. Her sharp tongue and quick wit make her impossible to ignore, and even harder to protect. Fitzwilliam Darcy has one job, keep the fiery, reckless heiress alive. The prince regent’s promise to restore Pemberley to him, the rightful owner, hinges on his success, but there’s one problem, Elizabeth "Bennet" refuses to be kept. As danger closes in, Darcy’s careful plans unravel, and his heart becomes a casualty of the mission he swore would be strictly business. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
May 2, 2025
Satisfying, and ultimately sweet
Ms. James has turned the ODC trope on its end. Elizabeth is the only daughter of a marquess, Darcy the disenfranchised son of a disgraced father. Through a series of harrowing and life-threatening events involving Lizzy's witnessing a second gunman in the prime minister's assassination, Lizzy ends up in hiding as Elizabeth Bennet, a distant cousin come to visit the Bennets of Longbourn. The story is meticulously told, the slow-burn romance almost excruciating as Darcy is determined to maintain honor at all costs while Lizzy is willing to sacrifice everything for love. A must-read tour-de-force!
Ms. James has turned the ODC trope on its end. Elizabeth is the only daughter of a marquess, Darcy the disenfranchised son of a disgraced father. Through a series of harrowing and life-threatening events involving Lizzy's witnessing a second gunman in the prime minister's assassination, Lizzy ends up in hiding as Elizabeth Bennet, a distant cousin come to visit the Bennets of Longbourn. The story is meticulously told, the slow-burn romance almost excruciating as Darcy is determined to maintain honor at all costs while Lizzy is willing to sacrifice everything for love. A must-read tour-de-force!
May 3, 2025
Wow! This book was nonstop tension. And it broke my heart big time before finally mending it in the end. This variation was interesting with Elizabeth being not a Bennet, but pretending to be one as she runs for her life. Gotta say the Bennets were their usual selves but delivered what was needed for a young woman in peril. Alix has made them so good-hearted in this story.
This is a very strong Elizabeth (after all she is the daughter of a Marquess and raised more like a son). The Darcy in this variation is heroic beyond measure. Some of that heroism has him acting in a harsh manner but his true colors keep shining through the hard facade he builds around himself. Get ready to swoon!
This is a very strong Elizabeth (after all she is the daughter of a Marquess and raised more like a son). The Darcy in this variation is heroic beyond measure. Some of that heroism has him acting in a harsh manner but his true colors keep shining through the hard facade he builds around himself. Get ready to swoon!
June 3, 2025
well worked plot
An unusual twist whereby E is not a Bennet and is from a cold but wealthy noble line and Darcy’s father was falsely accused of sodomy and lost his title and Pemberley to the Wickhams. Darcy has been tasked to protect Lady Elizabeth when she is the witness to the murder of the Prime Minister. Both of our couples have internal demons they solve to find happiness. Lady E is witty, a bit too sure of herself, and spoiled. She learns what is important in life by hiding from those seeking to kill her with the chaotic but loving Bennet family at Longbourn. Darcy has his own demons to conquer and nearly dies doing it. A long but great read.
An unusual twist whereby E is not a Bennet and is from a cold but wealthy noble line and Darcy’s father was falsely accused of sodomy and lost his title and Pemberley to the Wickhams. Darcy has been tasked to protect Lady Elizabeth when she is the witness to the murder of the Prime Minister. Both of our couples have internal demons they solve to find happiness. Lady E is witty, a bit too sure of herself, and spoiled. She learns what is important in life by hiding from those seeking to kill her with the chaotic but loving Bennet family at Longbourn. Darcy has his own demons to conquer and nearly dies doing it. A long but great read.
July 18, 2025
Delightful
Fantastic story. The best variation I’ve read in a long time.
Elizabeth is a rich heiress and Darcy is a poor government worker serving mainly at the whims of the spoiled and rather cruel Prince Regent.
When hell breaks loose in the highest levels of the English parliament, Elizabeth is found to be the only reliable witness of the nefarious conspiracy involving the aristocracy and is then thrusted upon Darcy to protect. And protect her he does, even against himself.
A sweet and lovely story with a happy ending for ODC.
If there is one criticism is the fact that the there is no satisfactory bad ending for Wickham when he so deserved one.
Fantastic story. The best variation I’ve read in a long time.
Elizabeth is a rich heiress and Darcy is a poor government worker serving mainly at the whims of the spoiled and rather cruel Prince Regent.
When hell breaks loose in the highest levels of the English parliament, Elizabeth is found to be the only reliable witness of the nefarious conspiracy involving the aristocracy and is then thrusted upon Darcy to protect. And protect her he does, even against himself.
A sweet and lovely story with a happy ending for ODC.
If there is one criticism is the fact that the there is no satisfactory bad ending for Wickham when he so deserved one.
June 10, 2025
I could not put this story down! I apparently don’t really need sleep.
Elizabeth Montclair witnesses a crime and Fitzwilliam Darcy, who works at the Home Office, is charged by the Regent to solve the crime and protect the girl. He hides her with the Bennet family at Longbourn. Together they learn about different kinds of love and work together to find their happiness.
The story moved quickly and the characters were amazing. The Regent, Jane Bennet, Mr Bennet, Charles Bingley, and Richard Fitzwilliam made an amazing supporting cast. I would highly recommend it.
Elizabeth Montclair witnesses a crime and Fitzwilliam Darcy, who works at the Home Office, is charged by the Regent to solve the crime and protect the girl. He hides her with the Bennet family at Longbourn. Together they learn about different kinds of love and work together to find their happiness.
The story moved quickly and the characters were amazing. The Regent, Jane Bennet, Mr Bennet, Charles Bingley, and Richard Fitzwilliam made an amazing supporting cast. I would highly recommend it.
April 29, 2025
Is Mrs. James challenging herself?
This is another excellent book of Mrs. James – what else do we expect by the way? – and I guess she is already challenging herself with her next surprise…
I will not say more except that I was lucky to get a copy of this book in advance so my pleasant anticipation may last longer - though I hope I will have not to wait too long to be - as expected – perfectly surprised by a mastered challenge!
This is another excellent book of Mrs. James – what else do we expect by the way? – and I guess she is already challenging herself with her next surprise…
I will not say more except that I was lucky to get a copy of this book in advance so my pleasant anticipation may last longer - though I hope I will have not to wait too long to be - as expected – perfectly surprised by a mastered challenge!
May 4, 2025
This one of my favourite "Elizabeth is not a Bennet" variation. I like forced proximity romance stories, and also body guard romances. I also loved the found family element to this story and how Lizzy didn't only fall in love with Darcy, but she also showed her falling in love with the Bennets.
I also really enjoyed Darcy's relationship with both Bingley and Fitzwilliam in this version. It was interesting to see how Jane's character was different without a Lizzy to be her confidant.
I also really enjoyed Darcy's relationship with both Bingley and Fitzwilliam in this version. It was interesting to see how Jane's character was different without a Lizzy to be her confidant.
June 2, 2025
Masterpiece!
This variation was a masterpiece. I LOVE this author but believe this is her BEST work to date. I couldn’t put it down. Loved initially how the script was flipped between ODC, with Elizabeth being Lady Montclair and Darcy without Pemberley. Different but the same struggles. The mystery and intrigue with ODC adventures was a page turner. Well done and can’t wait for the next adventure.
This variation was a masterpiece. I LOVE this author but believe this is her BEST work to date. I couldn’t put it down. Loved initially how the script was flipped between ODC, with Elizabeth being Lady Montclair and Darcy without Pemberley. Different but the same struggles. The mystery and intrigue with ODC adventures was a page turner. Well done and can’t wait for the next adventure.
April 15, 2025
This was quite an original Pride and Prejudice variation, with several of our main characters being quite different from the original. I really like this stronger Bingley, Elizabeth being in “Witness Protection “, and Darcy being the British equivalent of a U. S. Marshall. Even Mr. and Mrs. Bennet shine!
May 1, 2025
A magnificent, gripping story!
Alix James never disappoints. She is a masterful storyteller with a gift for plots and characters that are enthralling and satisfying. This tale contains murder, spies, danger, true love and the joys of family. A far cry from Jane Austen, but a delightful twist on her characters.
Alix James never disappoints. She is a masterful storyteller with a gift for plots and characters that are enthralling and satisfying. This tale contains murder, spies, danger, true love and the joys of family. A far cry from Jane Austen, but a delightful twist on her characters.
May 10, 2025
Better Luck Next Time
All of Alix's stories are a hut. Lots adventure, angst, excitement and love. This also has a murder mystery, and having to hide to escape death and more.
Can't miss with these variations.
All of Alix's stories are a hut. Lots adventure, angst, excitement and love. This also has a murder mystery, and having to hide to escape death and more.
Can't miss with these variations.
May 25, 2025
Wow! A truly engrossing read with adventure, suspense and romance! A unique character twist with the relative stations of Darcy and Elizabeth, and a great plot to put them together. A definite must read!
June 9, 2025
Whew!
This one really keeps you on your toes! At first, it was hard to reconcile a very non-canon Darcy and Elizabeth with every other character and locale, but as you dive in to their wild journey, it all becomes clear.
This one really keeps you on your toes! At first, it was hard to reconcile a very non-canon Darcy and Elizabeth with every other character and locale, but as you dive in to their wild journey, it all becomes clear.
May 2, 2025
I love this book
A well-written book with plenty of action and sweetness and pining and ridiculousness. Overall, just totally worth it to read. 🥰
A well-written book with plenty of action and sweetness and pining and ridiculousness. Overall, just totally worth it to read. 🥰
May 4, 2025
Great weekend read,
As always, Alix provided an excellent entertaining story. It had all the feels too; laughter, angst, sad tears and happy tears. This is book shelf worthy.
As always, Alix provided an excellent entertaining story. It had all the feels too; laughter, angst, sad tears and happy tears. This is book shelf worthy.
May 18, 2025
a great read, adventure, excitement, aggection, humour, it was all wonderfully put together.
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