Martin Mitchell, reviewer, in Home Planet News, Issue 61 (Vol.16, No.2) THE GRAVES GROW BIGGER BETWEEN GENERATIONS By Jared Smith Higganum Hill Books, P.O. Box 666, Higganum, CT 06441, 2008, 68 pp., $12.95. Before I heard him read a couple of months ago at the Cornelia Street Café in New York City, I was somehow unfamiliar with the work of Jared Smith, although his poems have appeared in these pages. Anyhow, I was, as they say, bowled over, and I could hardly wait to buy a copy of his new book − this one − after the reading and to dig into it and spend time with it. What a pleasure it was to do so. I was not disappointed, although it has helped me in reading this remarkable collection to imagine Smith’s strong, insistent, ironic voice. That’s “strong” in the sense of ambitious and bold. At the reading I was reminded of Whitman − Smith’s poems have a kind of all-embracing expansiveness that is (albeit lost sight of in recent decades) essentially American − though someone (specifically Diana Hume George, quoted on the back of the book) has already noted that; instead I’d cite, for comparison, Philip Levine were I not occasionally mistrustful of that poet’s believability as a mouthpiece for the masses. Smith sympathizes with workingmen’s plight without pandering; that’s the only reason why he (otherwise inexcusably) looks back to the world of an exclusively male workforce. The title poem well illustrates this extraordinary quality (as does that amazing title!), but its thoughts are complex and its considerable length sustains its accumulating power, making it resistant to quotation. Much the same goes for the poem that directly precedes it, “Evening, Yes, but a Man Is Still a Man” (the initial caps on all title words throughout the volume are needlessly distracting), possibly, concise as well as powerful, the best poem in the book. Four lines at the end of its second stanza (of three) have more content and suggestion than a whole slew of almost anyone else’s Call him a tradesman, and he will trade every iron worker for one closed out steel mill and a teenage soldier. Tell him he is a product of the Rust Belt and the infrastructure of every city will come uncoupled. How mightily true that is (even if I can’t fully identify “him”) in the equal universe the author constructs to shed light on our own! Smith never takes on more than he can his huge appetite is matched by his articulate mastication. This is so even when he “narrows” his sights − as in “Life at the Margins,” wherein “the flaming sumac / lifts its light torch, turning scar red // wounds that will not heal, this sifter of // pollutants that know the why of human waste … . I have come to love this mark of our imprudence // as I love the cat tails that also mark our transgressions.” Critical comment wow!!! How deeply the author plumbs into nature and humanity to show us much about both. Likewise in the next poem, with its modest title, “Of Little Things That Carry Weight”: It takes an ant to care for the community[.] … It behooves one to fear [the ant] because the weight of the very small when combined is greater than all the men who ever lived in all the lands numbered in our books. The farts termites give off in shuffling about their tasks each day give off more methane than mankind’s industry. I’m glad myself to think of little things that carry weight. Not because they justify our own irresponsible treatment of the planet but because we can find in them a necessary perspective. Several small poems, too, pack quite a punch. I will leave the six-line “What I Take to My Grave” for you to discover and will quote instead the whole of “Coping with Technology”: I alternate wallpapers on my computer screen, letting my eyes follow the thought, going from the constellation Andromeda in a sea of black to the wattled orange face of a newly discovered bird in Indonesia, a
Digging The Graves Grow Bigger... A Review by M. D. Friedman
Jared Smith portrays the gritty reality of the modern American Dream in his latest book, The Graves Grow Bigger Between Generations (Higganum Hill Books 2008). His heartfelt, bare-knuckled imagery sticks with you like a warm bowl of stew. His command of language consistently startles you like a wet sheet popping in a summer wind. Sometimes stark, sometimes gentle, Jared makes what is real more real, makes vivid what is hidden, and finally sets us back on our own feet to find our own way. The opening poem of the volume, "A Silver Zipper," invites us each to look inside: Whatever is hidden burns brightest when the time of counting shadows end.
This poem introduces one of the major themes of the volume: how we all strive to beat our own mortality and how all humans intuitively sense there is something more than the years we have here. It suggests there is an innate greatness to living that endures beyond the things we make and build in our own time: Most of life is waiting for what comes in. Most of what comes in was here before.
Beyond the buildings are estuarine islands where a tall bird waits expectantly.
In the haunting, vernacular, title poem, "The Graves Grow Bigger Between Generations," Jared weaves history and legend to further develop this theme. I swear I'm going to remember this, and forget the graves, and forget the markers and forget the names, but I'm going to remember the smell of furniture polish on old oak banisters, and the dust of books, and the coolness of old stone buildings in sleepy towns on summer days. I'm going to remember the too bright eyes of small blonde girls with their forced bright smiles in silent public rooms and archives and I'm going to keep on rolling along across America unmarked, taking the hand of each one and sweeping her off her feet, making love with each one at the least expected time and filling my heart with her smile and with her memory because there is nothing larger than this that I can imagine: the depth of shadowed rooms, a silent ray of light, purple flowers and a woman's touch. The graves get ever bigger from one generation unto the next.
Through this blue collar, grayscale narrative, Jared reveals a profoundly black and white truth. It is how we live that is important, not how we die. Having so epically explored our fascination with immortality, Jared turns his pen to our difficult relationship with nature. In "Life at the Margins," he notes the irony that no matter how much damage humans do to nature, we will always be integrally linked. We are a part of so much that is born of sun, even as we roll away into the watch of space devoid of hope. The shadows too are lighted.
Jared quickly expands this irony to include how human society invariably damages our own nature. In "Having Never Wanted To Own The Business," he brilliantly describes our human compulsion to own what we do with the metaphor of working away our lives trying to run a business. A man is 26 miles of intestine stretched above a desk, running multiple times to the snack machine and urinals, a sensory input in an electronic web of phone calls to the infinite. My years are gone.
Once again Jared looks to the strange miracle of our existence for an answer. In "To Be Alive," Jared articulates our situation with the words: because what else are you going to do with a universe when all its guts are emptied out.
He then humbly placates our plight with: I too wish I knew what to do and how to cope, and sometimes I think that in itself is enough to be alive. Throughout this manuscript, Jared challenges the poet to deal with modern societies' major issues. As we travel his landscape of sinew and gears, of transparent shadow and unifying light, we soon realize that, for Jared, it is imperative that culture lives up to its responsibility, that poets have a sacred duty to lead us out of the all consuming cycles of self-poisoning and emptiness. Jared's throws down his gauntlet to contemporary poets in his poem, "Why Put Up With This Anymore?" there are ultimately no others who can come before you whether it is by spoken words or written ones, Poet, I cannot understand why you hang your head down and skulk in alleys eating poverty with your words.
In this collection Jared swims through the complex floods of modern life, bobs with the joys and heartbreaks of love, and reaches for the glittering surface above greed and regret. He treads in a world of concrete and flowers, of wires and sunsets, of metal and bees, with the grace and vision of a poet seeking only the truth simply put. It's not like street yard baseball, this poetry thing anymore, where you used to lean back with whatever piece of wood you found lying around and hit each clunker of coal as far as it would go.
With The Graves Grow Bigger Between Generations, Jared Smith has hit one out of the park!