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First published January 1, 2010
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December 3, 2024
Melodramatic. Everyone (but especially the women) is extremely emotional and makes bad decisions. It has what I would describe as a poor grasp of mental health: a woman who, it is emphasized by her doctor, is not insane, is nevertheless so mentally delicate that he declares that upsetting her emotionally could kill her. Someone has a stroke (as a result of emotional strain; I believe this does happen sometimes), and instead of making it difficult for her to walk or talk, it makes her childlike. The alcoholic, however, is believable: according to her, nothing is her fault, and every bad decision she ever made was fully justified and caused by someone else's actions.
Parts of it are predictable (I spotted who the young Frenchman was instantly), and it would be more so except that the characters behave erratically; there's a last-minute complete 180 that doesn't at all ring true to anything the character said and did in the immediately preceding chapters, for example, which shows unmistakable signs of only happening because the author needed it to work that way for the plot to come out right.
It also shows a poor grasp of writing mechanics for the time. These days, I often see people putting extra commas in lists of adjectives that don't belong there - particularly before a colour, which is this author's abiding fault - and before the main verb of a sentence, and leaving question marks out of sentences phrased as questions, but it was less common in books published a century ago, when editors mostly weeded out these issues even if the authors didn't (and the authors usually did).
I've given it my "thin-romance" tag as well, which I give to any story where a supposed great and abiding love arises instantly because someone is physically attractive, and, without the characters subsequently spending much time together or having any real chance to get to know each other, becomes the basis for a lifelong commitment. It's borderline, in this case; her love for him, based on his actions in rescuing her, is more believable, though still a bit thin, but his love for her didn't seem to me to be well-founded at all, particularly since he spends much of the book not sure who the object of his affections actually is - hence the title.
At least the title does include the question mark.
Parts of it are predictable (I spotted who the young Frenchman was instantly), and it would be more so except that the characters behave erratically; there's a last-minute complete 180 that doesn't at all ring true to anything the character said and did in the immediately preceding chapters, for example, which shows unmistakable signs of only happening because the author needed it to work that way for the plot to come out right.
It also shows a poor grasp of writing mechanics for the time. These days, I often see people putting extra commas in lists of adjectives that don't belong there - particularly before a colour, which is this author's abiding fault - and before the main verb of a sentence, and leaving question marks out of sentences phrased as questions, but it was less common in books published a century ago, when editors mostly weeded out these issues even if the authors didn't (and the authors usually did).
I've given it my "thin-romance" tag as well, which I give to any story where a supposed great and abiding love arises instantly because someone is physically attractive, and, without the characters subsequently spending much time together or having any real chance to get to know each other, becomes the basis for a lifelong commitment. It's borderline, in this case; her love for him, based on his actions in rescuing her, is more believable, though still a bit thin, but his love for her didn't seem to me to be well-founded at all, particularly since he spends much of the book not sure who the object of his affections actually is - hence the title.
At least the title does include the question mark.
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June 26, 2025Maybe i little pyrmid
thee think that thee can sue me
and make joke at alzahimer mind
thee think that thee can dystroy me
and make me busy with paper of days
many cries haired by air
but my voice still far
paint with flower fragmint
but the world was in me
thee make me little by little
can i belive thee
every day sun bumbed at our life
make laugh at us and our dream
moone dream
thee think and think
but one love tuch the soul
and make us free
to fly
from head to toe gothering
to make my dragon that live insid me cry
what thee befor the world
notheng
the world insid me
thee think that thee can sue me
and make joke at alzahimer mind
thee think that thee can dystroy me
and make me busy with paper of days
many cries haired by air
but my voice still far
paint with flower fragmint
but the world was in me
thee make me little by little
can i belive thee
every day sun bumbed at our life
make laugh at us and our dream
moone dream
thee think and think
but one love tuch the soul
and make us free
to fly
from head to toe gothering
to make my dragon that live insid me cry
what thee befor the world
notheng
the world insid me
August 26, 2015
Surprise ending but a lack of character development makes it seem disjointed and convoluted.
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