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228 pages, Paperback
First published March 28, 2014
Kell is working with her brother-in-law, Larry, as so-call security consultants. They more or less run sting operations for their clients, during the job Kell goes to bed with the client’s wife to keep her busy while Larry plants a Trojan on the computer. Kell’s live-in girlfriend finds out about this and things get ugly.
Rosa calls just at the right time and makes Kell an offer to come and stay with her and her girlfriend. It seems innocent enough, a friend helping a friend in her time of need, but soon after she arrives in Miami, Kell is pulled into a murderous plot. Rosa’s real estate business is a washed in murderous plots.
I had a hard time rating this book. The plot was good and there were enough twist to make it worth reading. The characters were well developed, and as I stated, their history was told throughout so as not to leave you with gaps. The one draw back is the author did too much telling of the story and not enough showing. A picture is worth a thousand words, and I would have liked to read those words. In some places her telling was really thin, a love scene that is covered in three lines: The three of us were on the sofa. We made love. It was fantastic. (I’m paraphrasing but it was that thin.) And her description of the fallout between Kell, Rosa, and Valerie was equally none climatic for such an important plot point.
It is an interesting story, with an interesting cast of characters. The author warned that the language would be offensive and the lesbian angle off putting. I’m from New York where the F word is by law every third word in a sentence, and a person’s sexuality is what it is. I was waiting for the book to take off and it just fell a little short. I give the book 3.5 stars.