Thanks to Book Sirens for an ARC of this book. I’ll admit, when I first started reading, I was not impressed. I found some of it so confusing, I almost gave up. In fact, the second sentence was this: “He was standing in water up to his ankles trying to stand the fence that had been washed out last week by flooding back up.” I had to read that sentence multiple times before figuring out, there was a fence washed out by flooding that he was trying to stand back up! As far as hooks go, this was not great. Further into chapter one, there was a dialogue exchange that had a comma in place of a period, so it seemed like one character was talking, but it became apparent it was the other. A simple typo like that can make a huge difference. That I could attribute to an editing mistake, which I will point out to the author, so it’s not figuring into my review. That said, it lowered my expectations for the rest of the book, which is unfortunate. Still, I had agreed to read and review, so I kept reading. And I’m glad I did.
Although there were times that I found some of the technical descriptions were over my head, I think they demonstrated a familiarity with the subject that was impressive. I’ve never lived or worked on a farm, so I’ve never been exposed to the equipment used there, and I probably never will be. The author explains things in a way that’s accessible, even to people like me.
The plot was great. It was compelling and tense, keeping me on the edge of my seat once Jakub appeared. Dane is a white wolf shifter, which is explained through family lore (more on that later). Since middle school, he’s had a crush on Tani, a girl several years older than him. When she returns to town unexpectedly, he still feels the same way, and seeing him all grown up, Tani is impressed. However, due to secretive circumstances, she tells Dane she cannot date him. He decides he will spend time with her “as a friend” until he can get to the bottom of her secret.
The truth is, Tani is very attracted to Dane and wishes she could date him, so when he asks her to join him for a slushie, she views it as a date. As she decides how to dress, she thinks: “What does one wear to a slushie invite with a friend? A ball gown seemed too formal, but her fuzzy pajamas seemed a little too casual.” This made me laugh.
When Tani lets Dane in on her little secret, she expects him to run, but of course, he doesn’t. In fact, he shows up at the diner where she works, grabs her and passionately kisses her in front of everyone, telling her they’re not done and he will convince her to choose him. It’s a small town, so everyone will know by dinnertime. He turns and storms out of the diner, passing his younger brother, Arne, on his way in. Arne looks at Tani and says, “I swear, I thought we were just getting some lunch.” Again, I laughed.
I loved the banter between the siblings. It was realistic and amusing—throwing insults around but loving one another deeply. When a drifter, Jakub, turns his focus on Tani, things become tense. As it turns out, Jakub is also a shifter, an enormous bear—too much for Dane to take on on his own. Luckily, all of the males in the family are shifters so he has a pack to help him. But he also has to share his secret with Tani, who pretty much takes it in stride.
Shortly after Tani finds out, Freya (Dane’s mother) shares the family lore about the first wolf shifter and how it happened. Here’s where I got pulled out of the story. The story takes up more than an entire chapter and is presented as narrative rather than dialogue. Words and phrases used don’t seem to fit Freya’s personality as she has been presented thus far. Telling the story about the warriors who won a battle, she says: “The large party included plenty of food, drink, and conquered women to be passed around.” Seriously?!?! Mom just states this like it’s no big deal, not even bothering to offer an opinion? She could have just left out that part. She also describes sex scenes between their ancestor and a beautiful woman. There were no interjections or questions. There were no quotation marks to show she was talking. But we were explicitly told Freya was telling them the story. At one point, it says: “Freya paused her story…”
Here’s my take. If the author wanted to write a short story about the lore, that would fine. It could be a supplemental reading for those interested. It could even be included at the end of the book. Instead, a short story was shoe-horned into the middle of this story, completely removing the reader from the current circumstances and the current plot. It would have made much more sense for Freya to share the most important parts of the family lore, enough for Tani (and the reader) to understand the reason for the shifting abilities of the men and the role of the women. Were I editing this book, I would strongly recommend removing this short story, adding it as an addendum to the book, and having Freya share an abbreviated version of events. That would significantly improve the flow of the main story.
Getting back to the real story, Jakub makes an excellent villain. He’s a behemoth of a man and even larger when in his bear form, making him a formidable foe physically. The other thing he has going for him is the element of surprise. Nobody knows when he’ll attack next, and it’s difficult to figure out his motivations. When the family briefly meets with some distant relatives of Jakub, they find out he has some mental issues, and this serves as his motivation. Unfortunately, that doesn’t help in predicting his next move. Additionally, at some point, they realize that Jakub’s attention has been redirected toward Dane, probably because he sees Dane as the main impediment to having Tani.
The specifics of the fight aren’t important to this review. I think the story is well-told and, aside from the short story mentioned above, I believe the pacing is perfect. My only other issue is that Dane goes from being a virgin to being an alpha who knows his way around Tani’s body with what seems like experience. It’s possible he read a lot or watched movies, but his transformation was sudden, and he also suddenly developed a penchant for dirty talk. It just stretched the credibility of his character a bit for me. Regardless, I enjoyed the book and I recommend it. I’m even planning to read more in this series.