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Vision Ramshaw was known to be a mystery in my last series, “Virgin Society.”
He’s back, and his story will impel you, pulling out emotions and maybe even a couple of sensations because he’s just that smooth.
Vision finds himself smitten with Sheraine, but his painful past keeps him locked in a chokehold. His stubbornness has him not wanting to forgive himself for the traumatic loss he lived through. He can’t decipher whether Sheraine is the light to his darkness and if he wants to embrace it. This is a fast-paced, standalone novel with heavy spiciness and BDSM elements.
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166 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 21, 2024

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Profile Image for ReadnliftwithShar.
1,853 reviews
July 22, 2024
I can always count on Masterpiece to craft a story about two complex characters finding love. The crazy thing about this story was Vision and Sheraine didn’t like each other, but I’m 100% certain that was a front. Their chemistry was too intense for that to be true. One of the things that I enjoy is when one of the characters is anti-love or grumpy. That was who Vision was - after suffering traumatic losses, Vision had no desire to find love. Like Omarion said - “he had an icebox where his heart used to be.” He was heavy into his business and his BDSM lifestyle and was very mysterious. However, he met his match in Sheraine. Like LSG said, “What’s behind door number one could probably get the job done.” LISTEN TO ME - Vision turned Sheraine’s life upside down. I was not ready for the festivities that happened in Club Vision. However, the way Sheraine handled Vision was nothing short of amazing. She knew her worth and wasn’t going to let some tall, dark, and handsome man tell her anything different. 😝 I thoroughly enjoyed seeing two opposites come together in the name of love. The plot was strong, the characters grew throughout the story, and the spice was off the pages. They were nasty! 😮‍💨

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Profile Image for Tina Sharane.
150 reviews7 followers
September 9, 2024
4 🌟 This was quite an enjoyable read indeed! Vision Ramshaw... My, my, my! That's all I am going to say. I really enjoyed his character & the masculine energy as well as the nurturing energy he carried once he allowed himself to feel again, despite the trauma he endured & the guilt he felt. The way he treated Sheraine just had me all gitty, kicking my feet up & everything.

I honestly wanted more of their story, & the only other reason I had for not rating this higher is all the typos I had to decipher, which is a HUGE pet peeve for me in regards to writing in general, not just books. All in all, just know Mr. Vision has me wanting to read more erotica in the realms of BDSM because I really, really, REALLY loved the type of Dom that he was with all that big d*ck energy! 😏🫠
Profile Image for Ashanti Burton.
641 reviews13 followers
September 5, 2024
BBW/BDSM trope. Fmc is curvy but imperfect which I love. She doesn’t have a super small waist with thick thighs and a big butt. First time seeing that and I love it. Short read and fast paced. I enjoyed it.
Profile Image for Tracey.
1,075 reviews4 followers
August 29, 2024
Happiness

Where can I find a man like Vision? From his height, to eyes, and.locks but just his overall demeanor. Fighting back what he felt every time he was around Raine was slowly melting the ice built around his heart but because.of past trauma he knew he had to approach her differently or keep away which was becoming harder, until one of his friends birthday that he would be celebrating at his club, knowing the type of club he owned he.couldn't accept other men or women wanting her in that way thus he had to step up his game and he did just that which started their journey.
So happy he didn't try to take her away from her faith, and when she finally checked her mother I was so very proud of her, I would have made her get out of my home.sending her back to the house she was.allowing g her son to destroy but she kept the bills up. Her mother seem to hold her brother on a.pedestal but he kept disappointing her only for her to belittle Raine. Another great read.
Profile Image for Tenika Glover.
789 reviews3 followers
October 31, 2024
Love At First Sight!!

Sheraine and Keoriah did a pop up Diego and got her own feelings hurt. She knew he was cheating with Sasha but to see it with her own eyes made it real. Then disfollowed from the Kingdom Hall it hurt her soul. She made a deal with Keoriah if she calmed down, she would go Tyce birthday party with her. Keoriah and Tyce are a lil nutty. Sheraine stepped into Vision world and got turned out. Zarielle had it bad, she knew speaking on Sheraine would send him over the edge. Vision has that effect on women. Sheraine had a heart to heart talk with Vision of what she would accept and wouldn't accept. He realized that he was infatuated with her. Then loves her, changed his ways for her. Going to see if he can get his sight fixed so he can see her clearly. Sheraine mama thinks he's a pimp. All that matters is Sheraine knows the truth and loves him for him.
Profile Image for Mae Reads.
200 reviews3 followers
January 26, 2025
I loved this book! Short, spicy with points that really had me thinking about what matters in life. This was a gift from my friend Nicole! And I’m glad she got it for me. I’d been really wanting a book about black love with size representation and real female bodies!!!

Vision finding his redemption in Raine after all he went through was so endearing for me. I wish it was shorter and longer at the same time hahaha. Makes no sense but there were parts where I’m like okay explain more.. for example her relationship with her mom and other parts when I was like take me to the next scene already.

All in all I really liked this book… although the Kitty🐱examination proposal really sent me 😂😂😂😂

4.3 stars rounded down
Profile Image for D'Evolution.
994 reviews10 followers
August 15, 2024
This needs a trigger warning because this one will have you highly aroused

I love these BDSM books more and more. Vision and Shermaine shocked me definitely because the taste of them that we got from the Virgin Society books had nothing on this! Vision is officially Sir Bae in my eyes!! I like how detailed everything is with explaining as much of the Lifestyle and BDSM to the reader as possible. I was aroused from beginning to end so trust me, be careful where you read this and who you read it around. You might end up doing some things lol
865 reviews5 followers
August 27, 2024
Vision

This is what i expected and more from Vision. I feel like if they would have acted on their feelings at a different time things would have been different. I am glad they wanted when the time was right. It's so crazy to see Keoriah and Tyce family now because they are still funny to me. Both Vision and Sheraine had something for each other. She needed that unconditional love and he needed that nurturing love. I loved that for them. Even though it was short we got a lot out of their love story!!
Profile Image for Olivia.
54 reviews
October 27, 2024
v&s

I procrastinated reading this book. The beginning had me intrigued. I wanted to read about vision and his time after they murder his family.i did appreciate the religious aspect of the book. It's so many people who struggle with what they desire and their beliefs. I love the boundaries raine set with her judgy ass momma. And so she put into perspective how she sins as well too ! To be in a relationship let alone a marriage where your dom is your man your man your man.. ugh I wish !! I love that for raine and kee !!
210 reviews2 followers
November 18, 2024
loved it

I loved Vision and Raine’s love story and I’m happy Vision got his head out of his ass to love on my girl. This book was so spicy I’m happy that if Raine was going to sin and enjoy worldly pleasures like sex that she got to experience it with Vision but I wish she would have waited and lost her virginity to him not Diego ass. Her mama pissed me clean off but I do hope she comes around or she’ll be missing out on her future. I would love to see a holiday story with all the couples after marriage and kids and stuff that would be dope.
3 reviews1 follower
March 5, 2025
This book was excellent! Setoff from the jump. The first few pages get you all invested emotionally and then The spins and surprises at each turn will have you startled with your mouth hanging open from the shock of it all!! You don’t realize certain things are about to be revealed until they hit you smack in the face! I love a book that’s not predictable. In all honesty though 169 pages didn’t do this story Justice in my opinion. I could have read about vision and Raine for at least 300 pages. I hope the next book in the series has vision and Raine in it as well
121 reviews1 follower
June 9, 2025
Amazing Read!!!

Loved the flow of the story. It gives you to peek into the BDSM lifestyle… I loved the buildup of Vision and Raine lives and their love for one another… I like that Raine had someone who was already into it but didn’t force it on her but simply introduced it to her and allowed her to make her own choice. And despite what their past lives entailed they didn’t allow that to determine their future…. This was my first book from this author and I must say I truly look forward to reading more from her. Keep writing and I’ll definitely keep reading!!!!
Profile Image for Sonya Davis.
19 reviews3 followers
July 24, 2024
Vision

The book was satisfactory; however, it does not represent Masterpiece's best work. Typically, her writing leaves me fulfilled, with all narrative strands neatly concluded. Unfortunately, this book did not achieve that effect. It felt underdeveloped and left numerous loose ends. Consequently, it did not inspire me to pursue the spinoff featuring another character. Nevertheless, I remain an admirer of Masterpiece's work and will continue to read her future publications.
Profile Image for Ieshia Shephard.
585 reviews
July 27, 2024
Vision

When I first read Vision’s story in Virgin Society I was wrapped in! Knowing him in this light…i would submit! Knowing that he found light in darkness with Sheraine is enlightening! This is a HOT 🥵 read! I love that it doesn’t have much violence. I love the description of Raine’s body because a lot of people paint the same image of a BBW but Raine is very realistic! I can’t wait to explore Beamer! Keep the masterpieces coming!
1,192 reviews9 followers
July 29, 2024
Loved It

So happy for Vision, that man is alpha male for sure! Raine is just who he needed, she was then only one to get him to open up! I truly loved how he was able to reconnect with his cousin, Vision was so vulnerable! I love how Raine had to distance herself from her mother, she provides boundaries necessary to be the woman she wants to be! I'm looking forward to Beamer story with hopes of seeing Vision and Raine wedding!
Profile Image for Lexi.
380 reviews9 followers
August 17, 2024
I absolutely loved Vision & I’m so glad he was able to accept the love he deserved. Vision intrigued me when he was introduced in Virgin Society and his story was truly heartbreaking. I understood why he didn’t want to love anymore and why he tried to stay away from Sheraine. But clearly that didn’t work for either of them 😅 They had so much chemistry & tension and I loved every part of it. I loved how they put their trust in one another to make it work ❤️
Profile Image for Honor L Hurst .
535 reviews
August 31, 2024
Always a good time.

Love reading about Vision and Rain. Vision finally making peace with his past. Letting love into his life. Rain she is definitely doing better about setting boundaries with her closed minded, judgemental and I may say shameless mother. Rain deserves peace and happiness outside of the construct of male centered religious beliefs. Good Book and a good ending to a interesting series.
Profile Image for Jacquita.
119 reviews1 follower
July 25, 2024
loved it

Man vision is book bae t for real I knew his story was deep man I like how give up everything for her with even thinking about it. Her mother got on my nerves. Man when lil nutty was in the studio i almost fell out did she call the man d a punnai I was done she crazy. I need the wedding great read like always you out done your self.
Profile Image for Imajin Consulting.
193 reviews6 followers
August 19, 2024
Gotta love erotica laced with a creative storyline!

There’s always something deeper driving characters in a Masterpiece read! Their reality is revealed in unique twists as layers are peeled back either by scenarios they find themselves in or someone who touches the in a way no one else can…if you enjoy or wish to try an erotic read - this will do it!
147 reviews
August 31, 2024
Vision

The story line was good. I didn’t get the whole Exile from the JW Kingdom Hall. Seems that took away from the story for me. The mother is so judgmental, I still never understood the issue with her and Raine or even her son. I did like Vision, felt there was some layers we missed with him.
Profile Image for Mz_MELLO YELLO from the BAY.
418 reviews5 followers
September 10, 2024
VISION

Love this story!

I was worried he would give in to love but so glad he did! Glad he was able to release all his build up emotions and it took the beautiful Sheraine to do it!

They both deserved all that they have and more!!

Look forward to what the author has to share next!!
71 reviews1 follower
October 25, 2024
Hmmmmmm

This book here had me taking many showers. I've always been curious about BDMS but was scared to explore it deeper.
This book affected my breathing and body parts all in a great way.
I was wondering if there are really places like the The Annex out here.
I truly enjoyed reading this book

Profile Image for TellsOfABibliophile.
529 reviews15 followers
November 5, 2024
👀🌶️💦🍆

I was so anticipated to read about Vision. But I have say I felt like this was rushed a bit. Everything happened so quick between Vision and Sheraine. Yes the sexual chemistry was there but I feel like that was all that was there. It wasn’t a bad read just needed more. I still recommend because I do love Vision.
34 reviews
July 24, 2024
Vision💥💥💥

I just knew this book would live up to the hype! Him and Raine made some steamy magic honeyyyyyyyy. The storyline was delivered just like the author...a masterpiece 👌🏾 This man is something special.
17 reviews
July 25, 2024
loved it

I loved it of course I’m glad it didn’t drag out but I’m sad it wasn’t longer I know it could’ve been more in debt especially with them getting married and things like that
265 reviews
July 26, 2024
🔥🔥

Vision is that man! Even through his past he still wanted to be loved. It took him some time to realize it but when he did, he did it wholeheartedly. He was just practicing for his future wife. To cater to her every need.
114 reviews
July 28, 2024
Not ready for it to end

Very vivid descriptions. Vision was all that. I had to read slow because I knew it was over and I was not ready lol. Great job love. Fyi we want more of vision lol.
Profile Image for Briana J.
48 reviews
August 5, 2024
it was good

I enjoy all your books. I didn’t too much like the plot of her being a disfellowship witness. I think the book still would’ve been good with her just being a church girl and not a disfellowship witness. Or even mentioning Jehovah Witnesses!
Profile Image for Bug.
307 reviews25 followers
September 4, 2024
d/s love

This story is a quick read but it’s full of lots of entertainment. Vision was a very interesting characters and it was nice to see how Sheraine broke his shell.
I would recommend this book to people look for d/s dynamics with a controlling MMC.
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