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My Vampire System #70

My Vampire System: Book 70

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The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.

Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.

Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.

Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.

But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.

He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.

"It is time to feed!"

"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"

"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."

218 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 16, 2024

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Jack K. Sherwin

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August 17, 2025
it took me 2 weeks to read the full series couldn't put it down fucking amazing

I think Galen needs to get his own book
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June 22, 2025
Don't start it

It never ends with restarts and broken storyline holes. You'll spend 280 bucks for this entertainment filled with typos and wrong words with popular sayings butchered.

The gambit to keep you paying for short chapters unfulfilled and wanting more without relief at the disappointing end. Then you learn that after paying all this money and time there are other parts only available on different platforms. Thus the wheel keeps turning.
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3 reviews
December 11, 2024
Not great writing. The idea is fun. The overall story is good up till the first pinnacle of the story then becomes about power levels. Something akin to dragon ball. Even the MC get tied up or delayed before saving the day.
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December 25, 2024
Just completed book 70. It looks like the series ends here, but it ends like it is at the start of a new story. Many questions go unanswered. This is a very disappointing ending if this is it.
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