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At a glance:
Surviving With Noah is an easy read that follows two main characters on a reality TV show competition. The story is told through their perspectives and narrated by the TV show host here and there. There are points where there are “episodes” that go over the details and other contestants, and at times provides as a bit of exposition about the other characters. These are short, but are a fun break between the main storylines, although I wish they were further expanded as it is a strength of the novel.
As a disclaimer, I don't read romance, so take this review as someone who doesn't read a lot of romance.
What I liked:
The plot was good and the challenges the characters faced were sensible. The issue with some roadblocks was the timing of events as they are shown to us in the story. For example, we are given tidbits in the beginning about the progress the contestants make on the show. However, when there are certain twists that occur in a flashback, we know they have little to no impact because of where we see the characters in previously mentioned scenarios. This takes the tension out of most of the challenges. But, I like the episode format as it was reminiscent of Big Brother in a lot of ways with the main host, Nicky, really striking a lot of parallels with Julie Chen Moonves. It also did touch on the real reality of reality television in some aspects.
There is also a lot of good imagery, and the diction used was thoughtful. I rarely found myself questioning word choice outside dialogue. There are a few (three if I recall correctly) “spicy” scenes that were well done as isolated moments. Each character also has their own quirks, and the main character's knack proves useful in the challenge scenario. Her intelligence is something I enjoy, especially with her skill set. I also detected no errors as I was reading which is always a huge plus.
What I didn't like:
My biggest criticism of the novel was the dialogue. Often times, it felt like characters weren't speaking like real people, and were often too verbose and focused on explaining things that they already said. There were several places where characters would move from angry to forgiving in a matter of one sentence of dialogue. Also, few people use colorful language as they speak. This is the same case with the first person point of view, where the two main characters use the construction “As I __,” and lots of filter words. Several times, we are told that Noah feels “frustrated” or “angry.” But we are rarely shown that his face turns bolt red, and he balls up his fists.
Second, the timeline of events was jarring. I would have much preferred if the book stuck to the format of episodes leading up to the events and telling them as the competition went on. Often times, I was confused about both the history of the challenge “Survive Duos” and their actual goal. It wasn't clearly explained, and while the location is described as the “Arctic,” no information is really given about what the Arctic is. I believe it is fictionalized, but it wasn't clear to me that was what was happening.
Concluding Thoughts:
I enjoyed this novel as my first romance novel. It was a good introduction and easy to read. I wish it was more linear and the dialogue was tightened up. Despite that, the concept was exciting, and I really hope the format continues with more episodes getting utilized. Having the episodes is what separates this from other novels, and is a stronger point and if made even stronger will have a lasting impact.
Recommended to:
If you are looking for something with a different structure than the usual cookie cutter book, I would recommend this novel. The author clearly did research into survival aspects, and I was surprised with the ingenuity of the characters. While there were certainly some issues I had, I couldn't put the book down, reading it under the course of a week!