It all starts when small town vet Gigi McCowan’s car is run off the road late one night. World weary DEA Shane Hightower is first on the scene. No matter how he tries to help her, Gigi is acting nervous and when she tries to flee town, Shane knows there is more to Gigi McCowan than meets the eye. She is running from something, and he wants to find out what.
Alrighty then. This book is so far removed from my usual wheelhouse that I have no real basis for comparison. I know I’m not the target audience and a lot of the things that grated me about this book probably don’t matter to the people who are, but it’s still something I have trouble wrapping my head around. Reading this was certainly an experience.
The writing in this book is strange. There is a certain dream-like quality to it, like nothing exists outside of the main duo, and any and everything else only comes into existence when a source of drama is needed. The rest of the world seems to politely wait until the couple have completed their set piece before anything else happens. Not once are they interrupted in the middle of something. At one point they have time to play a round of Marco Polo without so much as another person stopping to look at them. On top of this, the pacing of their relationship was highly bizarre. Shane and Gigi were always running hot and cold. When things started heating up, they’d always find some excuse to start fighting, even when that excuse doesn’t make a lick of sense.
The story started off interesting, but as things progressed it became painfully obvious that the author wanted a cop and a bad girl pairing without actually sullying the heroine. She went from capable fugitive in the opening chapters to whiny marshmallow who has no idea what she’s doing. The reasons the bad guy are after her keep getting pared down until it is simply because of something that she’d probably never have noticed and had actually forgotten about until right after the bad guys brought it up. Certainly not worth the hassle and high profile (attempted) murders they seem willing to go through to silence her.
It was very hard to get a bead on what the bad guys were actually trying to do. They seemed to be highly organised, capable of tracking the couple to Phoenix, down to the man, when neither of them had prior plans to go there and none of them did a thing that would attract attention in that short time, and yet, at the same time, they were utterly incompetent about it. They can infiltrate a highly secure facility, take out every single other person on site without killing them (or so Shane says), deliver a bomb, and still fail to notice when the people they are trying to kill aren’t even in the building. That takes a special level of incompetence. The sudden reveal at the end simply left me with two questions: “Who’s this guy?” and “Why is he telling them this?!”.
I guess at the end of the day, neither the plot nor characters are what matters here. It is about the daring romance and fiery sex. I guess it’s there, but to be honest, the first actual sex scene in this book has got to be one of the most awkward love scenes I have ever read. Things start getting steamy, with some questionable word choices and cringe-worthy descriptions, only to break away to exposition about something or another that doesn’t fit the mood at all. Not to mention that it seemed to be over within a few seconds, followed by a fade to black emphasising how much hot passionate sex they’ll be having off-screen. The one after that wasn’t much better. In and out and thinking about babies. Maybe I just don’t get this.
I don’t know what makes a good romance novel, maybe they’re all like this, maybe not. Maybe this hits all the marks for the pairing and I just don’t see it. This book was readable, even if it had me wanting to scream at the characters several times. I could even buy Shane and Gigi as a couple, so it can’t be too bad.
Storywise, it’s passable. It has a beginning, a middle and an end, and at least tries to tie up the plot along the way. Could have been better, could have been worse.
An alright story of a DEA agent and a girl on the run.
I read this as part of my 2015 book challenge. Thanks to this challenge, I’ve wound up reading several books I might not have otherwise come close to. This is one of them. When I asked my largely non-reading mother what kind of books she has read, it was either a romance novel or a medical textbook. I elected to dive into the exciting world of pulp fiction, and in that spirit, I went with the lusty lawman. Because reasons.
***Reading Challenge 2015: A book your mother loves***