Burning Passion: The Alpha Mated Romance

by Emily Clifford

In the heart of a world where werewolves reign supreme, Zoe finds herself thrust into a world not her own. A rogue by nature, her independent spirit clashes with the rigid structures of society, forcing her into a fate she never a yearlong stint at a prestigious school for werewolves, mandated by a draconian new law.As Zoe navigates the treacherous halls of the school, she discovers a world teeming with secrets and simmering tensions. Among the students, she encounters her destined mate, an Alpha whose disdain for rogues runs deep. Despite the undeniable pull between them, their connection is fraught with peril, as the Alpha's pride threatens to eclipse any chance at happiness they might have.Caught in a web of duty and desire, Zoe must tread carefully, for the stakes are high and the consequences dire. Will she be able to break through the Alpha's hardened exterior and claim the life she's always longed for? Or will his pride prove insurmountable, condemning them both to a fate dictated by the laws of their world?As their destinies intertwine, only time will tell if love can conquer all or if pride will ultimately tear them apart.

277 pages, Paperback

Published February 17, 2024

Reviews

[Heidi Chiles · Rating 1 out of 5]

Good gods get an editor 🙏

So the story premise us good. The writing was a huge distraction away from the story. Pronouns were so inconsistent that it was difficult to tell who was talking. The syntax errors were also very bad. The word - mate- was inconsistently enterchanged with the words friend and companion causing confusion. It felt like there were chapters missing as the story jumped time in what seemed like the middle of a scene. I have read almost this exact story on a pay by chapter app... the app had fewer mistakes, that is saying a lot when you consider half the app books are written by AI or are poorly translated into English.

[MD · Rating 1 out of 5]

Started great..

Wish I could say it was worth the money but it really wasn't. The fight scene with her sister wasn't in the book and it jumped from a meeting with her parents to two weeks later and hints of what happened to her parents... Very disappointed, wish I'd read the reviews first but like I said the first part of the book was so good...

[Jeannine Smillie · Rating 1 out of 5]

Great story, but....

The story was good, but the editing is terrible. I've read this book on paid platforms and I know there are parts missing, there is a lot of bad grammar, and it's written in a way that it's painfully obvious the writer is not an English speaker. It really wasn't worth buying.

[Liz · Rating 1 out of 5]

Good base plot horrendous editing

Terrible editing. Good basic story that could have been a 4 star if some story elements fleshed out a bit and if the story was edited. A shame, really

[Andrea · Rating 1 out of 5]

Not well thought out

It starts off nice and then loses steam and skips important parts of the plot, leaving lots of questions. Plus the translation is horrible, switching words like "mate" to friend or buddy, instead of the bonded soul mate.

[jodi · Rating 1 out of 5]

it has potential

It has a lot grammatical errors and more than a few spelling errors. The story seems to skip over and miss parts of the story line. I have read books on free sites that had been edited better. Sadly, I paid for this one 😐

[Bailey Smith · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF stopped at around 35%
I usually finish what I start reading even if it isn't the best. I liked the concept of the book, however the lack of editing and plot holes just made it one I was unable to force myself to finish.

[Catlady · Rating 5 out of 5]

fantastic story

Loved the story, although the last few chapters seemed a little rushed. Would have loved to read more about her growth as a pack member.

[June Burman · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story is good, but the writer would definitely benefit from knowing both a proof reader and an editor. It just lacks polish.