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Zero Sum Conclusion
The Second Civil War of 2033 changed the landscape of American politics forever, forcing citizens to reimagine a society overrun by crime, greed, poverty, and aggression. Turning conventional logic on its head, every eighteen-year-old now receives a million dollars in lieu of traditional healthcare, Social Security, and Medicare. Political divisiveness has been diffused by assigning everybody as a Front-Loader or Back-Ender, depending on how they want to live and when they take their million dollars. Corporations now handle all governmental functions, saving taxpayers money while cleansing the internet of misinformation and immoral values. What could possibly go wrong?
It's eighty-four years after 1984, and the story centers around an FBI agent named Edgar Gorman, who has recently lost his soulmate to illness. His life spirals out of control after a computer glitch rewrites his history. Along the way, he meets a young teenage boy named Ketchum, who also finds himself on the wrong side of the law. After being swindled out of his newfound fortune by a beautiful girl, Ketchum enters into “Zero Sum Conclusion.” Edgar’s and Ketchum’s lives collide and, by joining forces, they eventually save each other.
Zero Sum Conclusion is a futuristic, satirical exploration into the political, religious, and social landscapes of today — and what might become of America if we continue on the path we’re currently hurtling down.
It's eighty-four years after 1984, and the story centers around an FBI agent named Edgar Gorman, who has recently lost his soulmate to illness. His life spirals out of control after a computer glitch rewrites his history. Along the way, he meets a young teenage boy named Ketchum, who also finds himself on the wrong side of the law. After being swindled out of his newfound fortune by a beautiful girl, Ketchum enters into “Zero Sum Conclusion.” Edgar’s and Ketchum’s lives collide and, by joining forces, they eventually save each other.
Zero Sum Conclusion is a futuristic, satirical exploration into the political, religious, and social landscapes of today — and what might become of America if we continue on the path we’re currently hurtling down.
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"The purpose of a writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself.” ―Albert Camus
Thomas’s 2012 debut adventure novel, “Document 512”, won him recognition from Reader Views and the National Indie Excellence Awards.
His 2015 coming-of-age follow-up, “The Art of Raising Hell”, secured his reputation as a versatile author by winning the Best Young Adult Novel award from Best Indie Books and recognition from Kindle Book Awards.
Once again, he has shifted gears by entering the satirical dystopian world with his latest 2024 novel, “Zero Sum Conclusion”.
He is also a member of the Writers and Publishers Network (WPN/ IWOSC), father of triplet daughters and a cancer survivor since 2006.
Visit: http://www.thomaslopinski.com/
WEBSITE: http://www.ThomasLopinski.com
BLOG: https://thomaslopinski.wordpress.com/
FACEBOOK: https://www.facebook.com/Thomas.Lopin...
"The purpose of a writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself.” ―Albert Camus
Thomas’s 2012 debut adventure novel, “Document 512”, won him recognition from Reader Views and the National Indie Excellence Awards.
His 2015 coming-of-age follow-up, “The Art of Raising Hell”, secured his reputation as a versatile author by winning the Best Young Adult Novel award from Best Indie Books and recognition from Kindle Book Awards.
Once again, he has shifted gears by entering the satirical dystopian world with his latest 2024 novel, “Zero Sum Conclusion”.
He is also a member of the Writers and Publishers Network (WPN/ IWOSC), father of triplet daughters and a cancer survivor since 2006.
Visit: http://www.thomaslopinski.com/
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May 13, 2024
The premise of the aptly named “Zero Sum Conclusion” by Thomas Lopinski captured me from the beginning. In 2033 the U.S. erupted into a second civil war. It was short, but the results were life-altering for society and our republic. In an effort to create a new society where everyone truly has the same opportunities, the government makes several bold moves. Every adult now receives 1 million dollars when they turn 18 rather than the standard benefits of the former Social Security, Medicare, and traditional health benefits. That may not seem like much money now, but the government also rolled back the value of the dollar to 1950s prices. Everyone is now free to determine their future paths without being destitute while pursuing their dreams.
This and many other changes following the Second Civil War sure do seem like great ideas. In fact, so many of the social changes many people are pushing in our present day are reflected in this thought-provoking novel. Before you decide that you’re not interested because it’s either going to a pro-conservative or pro-progressive story, let me assure you that this is not the case. There were times when a character seemed progressive while others seemed conservative, or somewhere on the spectrum. But I did not feel that the story offered a slant toward one or the other. Much like a stand-up comedian before the country went PC, everyone gets their moment in the spotlight here; every group, idea, or creed faces criticism at some point.
As much as the government has tried to do away with any type of class system, it sadly rears its reconstructed head. Society has a new form of classification based upon when a person receives their windfall. Most choose the “Front-Loader” option mentioned above where 18-year-olds receive a million dollars. But there is another option. One can choose to be a “Back-Ender” and wait until retirement at age 50 to claim their money. If they do that, the government rewards them with two million instead of one. All government employees fall into the Back-Ender category. This is where Edgar, as an FBI agent, falls. He lives a simple, fairly standard life without a lot of frills, looking forward to his large retirement payoff. Until a computer glitch upends his world.
Then there’s Ketchum. He’s just turning 18 and receiving his cool million. He’s got *ahem* about a million ideas for spending his money. Then he meets a beautiful girl who rocks his world and has a different plan for that million.
This is a very poignant, thought-provoking, conversation-starting novel infused with a touch of satire. All of this is wrapped up in a fast-paced mind-blowing story that could very well have you reading late into the night as Edgar and Ketchum meet while trying to outrun their nightmares. Now we see a different side to the new society and the choices the government has made to even the playing field for all. It’s devious, treacherous, and possibly even more corrupt than the historical government it replaced. The shadow of George Orwell’s “Big Brother” is cast throughout this novel as people are fed pablum by the news outlets and kept in the dark about real-world events. It’s going to take a brilliant light to overcome this shadow.
Themes of family, resilience, sacrifice, and corruption are woven throughout this intricate tale. There are interesting characters throughout for readers to like or loathe, although some will alter your perception. This is a great book to read with a book club or friends, as there will be thoughts and concepts you’ll want to discuss with others. Thomas Lopinski’s “Zero Sum Conclusion” reads more like literary fiction with a very subdued form of satire, making it a perfect fit for those who enjoy more cerebral reads. But make no mistake, there is intrigue, suspense, mystery, and adventure within these pages.
This and many other changes following the Second Civil War sure do seem like great ideas. In fact, so many of the social changes many people are pushing in our present day are reflected in this thought-provoking novel. Before you decide that you’re not interested because it’s either going to a pro-conservative or pro-progressive story, let me assure you that this is not the case. There were times when a character seemed progressive while others seemed conservative, or somewhere on the spectrum. But I did not feel that the story offered a slant toward one or the other. Much like a stand-up comedian before the country went PC, everyone gets their moment in the spotlight here; every group, idea, or creed faces criticism at some point.
As much as the government has tried to do away with any type of class system, it sadly rears its reconstructed head. Society has a new form of classification based upon when a person receives their windfall. Most choose the “Front-Loader” option mentioned above where 18-year-olds receive a million dollars. But there is another option. One can choose to be a “Back-Ender” and wait until retirement at age 50 to claim their money. If they do that, the government rewards them with two million instead of one. All government employees fall into the Back-Ender category. This is where Edgar, as an FBI agent, falls. He lives a simple, fairly standard life without a lot of frills, looking forward to his large retirement payoff. Until a computer glitch upends his world.
Then there’s Ketchum. He’s just turning 18 and receiving his cool million. He’s got *ahem* about a million ideas for spending his money. Then he meets a beautiful girl who rocks his world and has a different plan for that million.
This is a very poignant, thought-provoking, conversation-starting novel infused with a touch of satire. All of this is wrapped up in a fast-paced mind-blowing story that could very well have you reading late into the night as Edgar and Ketchum meet while trying to outrun their nightmares. Now we see a different side to the new society and the choices the government has made to even the playing field for all. It’s devious, treacherous, and possibly even more corrupt than the historical government it replaced. The shadow of George Orwell’s “Big Brother” is cast throughout this novel as people are fed pablum by the news outlets and kept in the dark about real-world events. It’s going to take a brilliant light to overcome this shadow.
Themes of family, resilience, sacrifice, and corruption are woven throughout this intricate tale. There are interesting characters throughout for readers to like or loathe, although some will alter your perception. This is a great book to read with a book club or friends, as there will be thoughts and concepts you’ll want to discuss with others. Thomas Lopinski’s “Zero Sum Conclusion” reads more like literary fiction with a very subdued form of satire, making it a perfect fit for those who enjoy more cerebral reads. But make no mistake, there is intrigue, suspense, mystery, and adventure within these pages.
July 14, 2024
I have just finished reading Zero Sum Conclusion! I am a young adult, and found this book to be easy to read and also intriguing with complex themes such as the Second Civil War, changes in government, and much more (trying to not give away too much detail).
I love politics, science fiction, and dystopian themes in books - especially when it feels like it can become real. This book blurred the lines between reality and fiction for me with modern references of technology and private companies - overall just such a fascinating book.
I had only read the first paragraph of the back cover of the book and decided to buy it. I thought "If everyone was given a million dollars, what could go wrong?"....and I really ate those words after reading this book.
Please read this book - it should be a must read in high school and college English courses.
I love politics, science fiction, and dystopian themes in books - especially when it feels like it can become real. This book blurred the lines between reality and fiction for me with modern references of technology and private companies - overall just such a fascinating book.
I had only read the first paragraph of the back cover of the book and decided to buy it. I thought "If everyone was given a million dollars, what could go wrong?"....and I really ate those words after reading this book.
Please read this book - it should be a must read in high school and college English courses.
April 15, 2024
◇ Synopsis
Eighty-four years post-1984, the aftermath of the Second Civil War has brought significant changes to America. Every eighteen-year-old now receives a million dollars instead of traditional benefits, and society is divided into Front-Loaders and Back-Enders. Corporations govern, promising order and morality online. FBI agent Edgar Gorman's life takes a tumultuous turn after a history-altering glitch, intersecting with Ketchum, a teen navigating loss and deceit. Their journey in "Zero Sum Conclusion" offers a satirical glimpse into political, religious, and social landscapes, warning of the potential consequences of our current trajectory.
◇ Thoughts
Thomas Lopinski's captivating novel immerses readers in a world dominated by government surveillance akin to China's Social Rating point system. Through vivid descriptions and well-crafted characters, the story comes alive, drawing parallels to themes found in classics like "1984" with its emphasis on blind obedience. Transitions between characters flow easily and enhance the narrative's message of media skepticism. "Zero Sum Conclusion" is a must-read for science fiction fans, delving into the intricacies of technological progress and its impact on society through compelling characters. I enthusiastically recommend it, especially to those who enjoy dystopian themes in science fiction. This is a great read!
Eighty-four years post-1984, the aftermath of the Second Civil War has brought significant changes to America. Every eighteen-year-old now receives a million dollars instead of traditional benefits, and society is divided into Front-Loaders and Back-Enders. Corporations govern, promising order and morality online. FBI agent Edgar Gorman's life takes a tumultuous turn after a history-altering glitch, intersecting with Ketchum, a teen navigating loss and deceit. Their journey in "Zero Sum Conclusion" offers a satirical glimpse into political, religious, and social landscapes, warning of the potential consequences of our current trajectory.
◇ Thoughts
Thomas Lopinski's captivating novel immerses readers in a world dominated by government surveillance akin to China's Social Rating point system. Through vivid descriptions and well-crafted characters, the story comes alive, drawing parallels to themes found in classics like "1984" with its emphasis on blind obedience. Transitions between characters flow easily and enhance the narrative's message of media skepticism. "Zero Sum Conclusion" is a must-read for science fiction fans, delving into the intricacies of technological progress and its impact on society through compelling characters. I enthusiastically recommend it, especially to those who enjoy dystopian themes in science fiction. This is a great read!
March 24, 2024
Capitalistic takeover of society. Read Kindle book using Alexa audio asset. Borrowed this eBook with Kindle Unlimited on March 22, 2024.
August 16, 2024
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Reviewed by Stephanie Chapman for Readers’ Favorite
Zero Sum Conclusion by Thomas Lopinski is a dystopian tale set after the Second Civil War reformed the American government. A scoring system based on demeanor and the Solid Start Initiative eliminated poverty and debt. After the death of Edgar’s wife, a doctor put out an alert on his mental health. Edgar found himself pursued by a former colleague. After subduing the man, he took off the man's experimental glasses. Edgar was interviewing Ketchum, an eighteen-year-old who lost all of his money to a con artist. Edgar could see and feel everything that Ketchum felt. Unfortunately, agents sentenced them to rehabilitation in a Dunes Facility. However, Edgar and Ketchum were about to find out that "rehabilitation" means something quite different from what they expected.
Thomas Lopinski created a scenario where the government sees everything people do. The demeanor point system seemed unfair, especially after Edgar’s score dropped simply because of losing his wife. Was he not supposed to feel anything at all? The vivid details of the surroundings and well-developed characters made the story come alive. I felt that the laws the population was subjected to demanded blind submission from everyone. I found the seamless transitions between the many characters easy to follow. The unexpected twists had me hoping that the people would open their eyes to what was happening in front of them. The end of the story left an opening for a sequel. Through every scene, it reinforced the overall theme of not trusting what you see in the media. Zero Sum Conclusion is the perfect fit for readers who enjoy stories of sacrifices to reveal the truth.
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Reviewed by Stephanie Chapman for Readers’ Favorite
Zero Sum Conclusion by Thomas Lopinski is a dystopian tale set after the Second Civil War reformed the American government. A scoring system based on demeanor and the Solid Start Initiative eliminated poverty and debt. After the death of Edgar’s wife, a doctor put out an alert on his mental health. Edgar found himself pursued by a former colleague. After subduing the man, he took off the man's experimental glasses. Edgar was interviewing Ketchum, an eighteen-year-old who lost all of his money to a con artist. Edgar could see and feel everything that Ketchum felt. Unfortunately, agents sentenced them to rehabilitation in a Dunes Facility. However, Edgar and Ketchum were about to find out that "rehabilitation" means something quite different from what they expected.
Thomas Lopinski created a scenario where the government sees everything people do. The demeanor point system seemed unfair, especially after Edgar’s score dropped simply because of losing his wife. Was he not supposed to feel anything at all? The vivid details of the surroundings and well-developed characters made the story come alive. I felt that the laws the population was subjected to demanded blind submission from everyone. I found the seamless transitions between the many characters easy to follow. The unexpected twists had me hoping that the people would open their eyes to what was happening in front of them. The end of the story left an opening for a sequel. Through every scene, it reinforced the overall theme of not trusting what you see in the media. Zero Sum Conclusion is the perfect fit for readers who enjoy stories of sacrifices to reveal the truth.
https://readersfavorite.com/book-revi...
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