2 years earlier, Brooke Davenport adopted little Justin when his parents were killed in a bombing. Just a little baby at the time, Justin was injured and burnt, and she believed, neither of his blood-related uncles wanted anything to do with him, so she took him in. But in reality, Taylor Pryce, Justin's paternal uncle, had no idea he existed. Now he knows about Justin and he wants him back - he blames Brooke for stealing his nephew from him and he'll do whatever it takes to take back his blood relative. When Brooke first meets Taylor, she has no idea who he is, but she falls a bit in love with him off the bat, trusting him in a way that surprises her. Then she learns who he is and what he's after and she realizes she stands a real chance at losing her son. That is why when Taylor offers her a marriage of convenience, she takes it, despite her reservations. Despite his ruthlessness, Taylor has a soft and patient side and he's fantastic with Justin. But now that Taylor has what he wants and can actually win custody of Justin, Brooke begins to worry that she won't be enough to keep Taylor and when its discovered that Taylor really was tricked out of custody of his nephew, will he want to keep Brooke around?
Kind of your traditional custody battle with a secret baby story, with the exception that Brooke really doesn't have a leg to stand on - she may be the adopted mother, but Taylor has a real case for getting Justin since he can eventually prove that he didn't sign over custody. So this makes a really good case for why Brooke agrees to marry a perfect stranger. On the other hand though, I struggled to like Taylor (and was surprised how quickly Brooke fell for him) in light of the fact that he was perfectly ready and willing to take Justin away from the only parent he'd ever known and leave Brooke without her son. I mean, let's just imagine how this story would have played out if Taylor hadn't been attracted to Brooke (and he does admit that the attraction is one of the supporting factors in his proposal). That's pretty telling of his character right there. He does eventually kind of realize what he'd done and that he could have caused a lot of pain when none of it was really Brooke's fault, but his apology is pretty lackluster in light of things. Still, it seems good enough for Brooke.
I liked this story well enough, and could definitely see the connection and chemistry between Brooke and Taylor. They both had an interesting relationship to Justin who read more like a 5 year old than he did a 2 year old, what with his fully-formed, grammatically correct sentences and what not. It made me uncomfortable that Justin basically came in criticizing the way Brooke was raising Justin, and yet claiming he wasn't really criticizing her. This makes one of the first stories I've read where the hero isn't impressed with what a good mother the heroine is. He makes the claim that she's turning him into a wimp and she needs to loosen up. He's not wrong, but I wasn't comfortable with how he basically takes over parenting instead of taking his time to work himself into the role. The relationship between Taylor and Brooke is also set up to be fraught with tension and conflict (which provides some absolutely fantastic angst and frustration), but the combination of this conflict and their supposed romance didn't quite work with me. I kept wondering how she could get past her anger and her suspicion that Taylor would take Justin from her in order to fall in love with him. I'm not sure if this is realism with the clash of emotions and feelings or if it really couldn't happen that way. I felt confused with this mixture of emotions. It also felt like these two really didn't spend enough time together to fall in love, but it still felt like they managed it...barely. What really worked for me though was when Taylor comes to the realization that it's not easy to raise a kid - to invest your time and emotion into it and then have to watch them go through something difficult. This was an implied realization and I kinda wish he would have acknowledged to to Brooke (would have fit seamlessly into an extended apology methinks), but it was there all the same and pretty powerfully done, with tears and everything.